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Review by Kelsie McQueen
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
I love the pacing and the fact that the character "Joan" is an open character so the reader can imagine how her appearance. I imagined her as petite; a California girl perhaps from San Francisco...kind of a hippie but a gamer and comic book nerd. That's cool; the Yu-Gi-Oh reference was cool and the sex in office is something I am familiar with. I'm into fetishism and I picked up on that...nice. Great going...not comfortable reviewing things but I like it.
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