I gotta say. I was rather surprised. It was a very interesting story, just gotta wonder if it's real or not? If it is real, they you have one famous aunt. It was a perfect attention grabber, but I need to know what happens next. Does the grandpa rip the picture? Do you take the album? What's next? I wish the story was longer, but overall it was rather impressive! Great job!
Happy writing!
Kenny B.
That was kinda sexist if you ask me. I'm a man, and I do all the shopping because I work at the damn grocery store. Next time you need to "vent" your frustrations go to a different platform. This us what the "great divide" between men and women looks like at it's finest. It didn't even mention all the courteous men out there. That really frustrates me. It also makes me a little ticked off. Make sure you mention the "good" men out there, that you think don't exist.
I feel the sole of the foot will get me more "aroused" than both the top and the sole. I have fantasies of licking feet and will continue to have them. Another part that makes me get "wood" is toes. Not just the bottom of the toes either. Have you ever sucked on a nice juicy big toe, or others for that matter? I have and it is always so good. I've had people, women and girls alike, ask me to lick their stinky feet, and I usually say yes, considering age and age appropriateness. If a girl under 13 asks me to, I say no just because of the age related sex appeal I get towards feet, but 13 and over, I let her have my best foot treatment that involves my tongue. It's a definite turn on for me. I hope this helps clarify some fetish specifications. Best writing!
Kenneth B.
That isn't exactly all true, but it sounds like you were raised on a farm and loved it there. I have worked at several farms and none of them were peaceful at all. They were either chaotic or there were so many people there that I had no time to even breathe. I do like the poem though. All of my feelings aside, it made farm life sound so peaceful and serene. Hopefully you can do one about the chaotic farms later. Just saying. Best writing wishes!
Kenneth B.
Not my style of writing, or reading for that matter, but it drew me in. I was interested. You should make a book from this idea. This could be the prologue that gets people interested. I sure was. From the first line in though that it would be a boring read, but man was I wrong! I was intrigued and want to known what happens at the meeting! Please do a part two!
That was beautifully written. I could tell there were some comparisons of flowers as the good times in life, and the dark water seeping cave with moss was the dark times. Where it said you were dragged out, that must have meant your preservered through and made it into the light which could mean several things. I want to see more and I really wish it was a longer story, but it was great over all. Thanks for sharing your gift with the world.
That was very... interesting. It was different in a good way. I can only assume that the italics were the (presumably) a child thinking all that. It was a good story for sure. It was interesting in the fact that you seem to have done a lot of thinking and maybe some research. I liked it and hope to see more in the near future.
I just joined today, but I already love it. It's definitely what I've been looking for, for quite some time now. Please help me get a membership. I would really appertiate it. My life is full of stories ready to be read and I need something like this to do just that. Thank you for your time.
Sincerely,
Kenneth Blazek
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