|Hello, again Shivam. Hope you don't mind but I checked out some more of your work. I really do think you have talent. But if you do not mind I've added a few comments between the lines of this one. I don't want to rewrite it but here are a few suggestions for you to work with. I'm not big on grammar but if you want folks to take your writing seriously proof read over and over.
What is light,if there were nothing to be shone by it,
'Perhaps, What is light if there is nothing for it to shine upon?
Add a space between the comma and "if"
these objects of bright a reminder of it's materialistic glory;
I think it should be its not "It's"
And what is light,to a needy child,sitting by the window beneath it,
Light,to. Add a space light, to. Again a space between child and sitting.
In fact check the wole piece for this same mistake.
where he sees the world shine by it's luminescence,except the darkness within;
Same in this line.
And what of light,if it ain't bright,
Pace missing again here.
Also the use of "ain't" the use of this sort of lowers the feel of the whole thing for me. Try some thing like "And what of light were it not bright" or something like that.
would it still be the signature of hope,an aura of positive,
And here space.
which it does proudly carries;
This line doesn't make sense to me. Perhaps try. "which it does so proudly carry"
Would it be still more divine,
if it's all,except of as it is?
Space here again.