Melanie brooke's (khpoet) Reviews

Melanie brooke

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62 Total Reviews Given

Public Reviews

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#2391407

Review of Terrible Century for Dreamers

Review by Melanie brooke

Rated: 13+ | (4.0)

Well Done. I felt the sadness, the slight hint of anger, but more so the disappointment. I like the imagery of the poem also the way I felt like I was sitting right next to the narrator and sharing mental pictures.I really enjoyed reading this poem.

Mel

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#2390175

Review of Library

Review by Melanie brooke

Rated: E | (3.5)

I really enjoyed reading this story. The imagery of it is very well done. I especially like the last two sentences but I think they would be more powerful combined. Good Job.

Mel

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#2388722

Review of Useless Linger

Review by Melanie brooke

Rated: E | (4.5)

Great Job! ^_^ I really love the way this poem flows & the rhythm of it. Your poem has so much emotion that it begins to affect the reader as soon as the first line has been read. I really liked the line about them dancing & the singing. I look forward to reading more of you writing.

Mel

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#2388714

Review of Deceiving Ways

Review by Melanie brooke

Rated: ASR | (5.0)

Great Job! ^_^ I really think that this is an amazing poem. I love the rhythm & the flow of it. I also really like the emotion of it the way it's very deep & fierce at the same time & the way that it ver straight forward without being cold. Your poem is a really wonderful & beautiful piece of art.

Mel