Absolutely terrific! Will you be entering in the whole story soon? If so, I would love to read and review it! I am so entertained by this genre. And by your story in particular! Please email me any updates, I would love to read any other stories you have as well!
The most intriguing piece of work I have read in this category!! Great job! I like how you admit to have all kinds of important and tangible emotions. Men usually don't do that for fear of being judged. This is absolutely amazing! Nice work!
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