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Review of My Heart  
Review by Kiersten Johnson
Rated: E | (3.0)
I'm not entirely sure what a Ghazal is, but I do know that I really loved what you wrote. For me, the way you used descriptive words painted a picture for me and really let me know what you were feeling. I like the fact that lots of people can relate to this so it will be common that people will find interest in it. Nice job! Also, I noticed the repetition of the phrase, "My heart," but while reading, I couldn't figure out why it was repeated.
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