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Review of Dancing Tears  
Review by KAM
Rated: E | (5.0)
This poem is great! I love how you compare tears to dancing, must people would compare tears as a negative thing. Using old English or Anglo-Saxon was a great idea. This kid of reminding me what would have happened to Romeo and Juliet if they didn't die and got married.
Great job with your poem
KAM
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Review by KAM
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I like this list I would add some more to the dog list like 1. pet me 2. walk me 3. take me to the dog park 4.give me a treat 5. take me to the bathroom 6. Help me chase this squirrel 7.brush me 8. give me a bone 9. oops I made a mess on the floor. 10. lets eat the garage can together. Dogs do have more than 7 things. Dogs are definitely a mans best friend.
Write on :)
Kiki
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Review by KAM
Rated: E | (5.0)
I loved the story, but since don't understand the hurt (i don't know Issac I don't feel the pain you feel). It is a very touching story, and It makes me emotional.
R,I,P Little Issac
Kiki
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Review by KAM
Rated: E | (5.0)
Awesome! I am in love with the ending of the story. The A&B was a great idea, WRITE ON!
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Review of The Adulterer  
Review by KAM
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
WOW! That is one good story, it is just a different twist to the bible story :). I love it, that could go on (but it would probably have to be a realistic fiction). WRITE ON!
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