This poem is great! I love how you compare tears to dancing, must people would compare tears as a negative thing. Using old English or Anglo-Saxon was a great idea. This kid of reminding me what would have happened to Romeo and Juliet if they didn't die and got married.
Great job with your poem
I like this list I would add some more to the dog list like 1. pet me 2. walk me 3. take me to the dog park 4.give me a treat 5. take me to the bathroom 6. Help me chase this squirrel 7.brush me 8. give me a bone 9. oops I made a mess on the floor. 10. lets eat the garage can together. Dogs do have more than 7 things. Dogs are definitely a mans best friend.
Write on :)