This poem is great! I love how you compare tears to dancing, must people would compare tears as a negative thing. Using old English or Anglo-Saxon was a great idea. This kid of reminding me what would have happened to Romeo and Juliet if they didn't die and got married.
Great job with your poem
KAM
I loved the story, but since don't understand the hurt (i don't know Issac I don't feel the pain you feel). It is a very touching story, and It makes me emotional.
R,I,P Little Issac
Kiki
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