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Review by Maria Mize
Rated: E | (5.0)


Hi, Dean! I reviewed and rated your poetry entitled:
I'D BE THE LONELY ONE

*Bullet*My overall thoughts:
...truly lovely, vivid and full of heart-felt, well-conveyed emotion.

*Bullet*Most liked -- and why:
I'm not sure I can pick a favorite part... I especially like your rhyme scheme, the clarity of your words in each and every verse.

*Bullet*Grammar/Spelling (suggestions):
No errors found.

*Bullet*Mere suggestions for improvement:
Don't change a thing. (My opinion...)

*Bullet*Why/how this piece did (or did not) impact me:
...like a locomotive.

*Bullet*Final thoughts:
Please remember, you are the author here and my comments are merely my own. Whether or not you agree or disagree matters fractionally to me in comparison to my hope that I have encouraged and provoked you to even better writing. It has been my pleasure to read, rate and review your writing. Write on!

As you continue participating in this small, growing community of aspiring writers, may your success continue to climb! My hope is to see more of your work as your journey progresses!


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Review of Juliet  
Review by Maria Mize
In affiliation with  
Rated: E | (5.0)


Hello, Tiana! As one of the judges, I reviewed and rated your poetry entitled:
JULIET, submitted to the Freedom Writers Contest, May 2010

*Bullet*My overall thoughts:
Beautiful. Apparently you are very fond of Shakespeare's ROMEO AND JULIET, and you are clearly an adept poet.

*Bullet*Most liked -- and why:
'Twould be so simple, to climb down these vines
So I shall step over the edge;
This ballustrade; my prison bars,
The demarcation betwix our hearts.?


*Bullet*Least liked -- and why:
I felt the ending was abrupt... for me. I would have rather known the outcome ---- whether she went over the edge or found refuge and respite within the embrace of her lover.

*Bullet*Grammar/Spelling (suggestions):
No errors found.

*Bullet*Mere suggestions for improvement:
I thoroughly enjoyed the entire piece and felt you excelled in grasping the meat of the contest.

*Bullet*Why/how this piece did (or did not) impact me:
Your poetry here grabbed my spirit, soul and emotions, pulling me in with clarity and fluency.

*Bullet*Final thoughts:
Please remember, you are the author here and my comments are merely my own. Whether or not you agree or disagree matters fractionally to me in comparison to my hope that I have encouraged and provoked you to even better writing. It has been my pleasure to read, rate and review your writing. Write on!

As you continue participating in this small, growing community of aspiring writers, may your success continue to climb! My hope is to see more of your work as your journey progresses!


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Review by Maria Mize
Rated: E | (5.0)


Hello, Dean aka Dino! I reviewed and rated your poetry entitled:
THE CHILDREN OF MY CHILDREN

*Bullet*My overall thoughts:
Thought-provoking.

*Bullet*Most liked -- and why:
What happens to me now, what happens when I go...
What shall become of the things that I now know...
Memories left behind remain, but not for me...
Left to others minds, are my memories, theirs to see...


*Bullet*Least liked -- and why:
Nothing... Great work.

*Bullet*Grammar/Spelling (suggestions):
No errors found.

*Bullet*Why/how this piece did (or did not) impact me:
Your poetry here reminded me of a box, covered by glass, within my dad's possession. My great-great-grandpa played the bugle in the Civil War. Dad has glasses, badges, watches (including pocket watches), pens, coins... Life passes so quickly.

*Bullet*Final thoughts:
Please remember, you are the author here and my comments are merely my own. Whether or not you agree or disagree matters fractionally to me in comparison to my hope that I have encouraged and provoked you to even better writing. It has been my pleasure to read, rate and review your writing. Write on!

As you continue participating in this small, growing community of aspiring writers, may your success continue to climb! My hope is to see more of your work as your journey progresses!


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Review of Angels Cry  
Review by Maria Mize
In affiliation with  
Rated: E | (4.5)


Hello, Sincere Tragedy! I reviewed and rated your poetry entitled:
ANGELS CRY

*Bullet*My overall thoughts:
Compellingly, well-written.

*Bullet*Most liked -- and why:
The reality piercing through your writing.

*Bullet*Least liked -- and why:
I felt your writing would benefit from some fine tuning --- line breaks/breaks between lines/the use of grammar/punctuation.

*Bullet*Grammar/Spelling (suggestions):
Already mentioned. No spelling errors noted.

*Bullet*Mere suggestions for improvement:
Unless you purposefully wrote without using punctuation/grammar---I would either ask someone to proofread, do a self-study or, if necessary, take a grammar course. (It would certainly inject more confidence into your writing.)

*Bullet*Why/how this piece did (or did not) impact me:I was impacted by the sincerity found in your writing here. Without making us feel sorry for you or sounding the least bit insincere, you gave us empathy for the strong emotion herein.

*Bullet*Final thoughts:
Please remember, you are the author here and my comments are merely my own. Whether or not you agree or disagree matters fractionally to me in comparison to my hope that I have encouraged and provoked you to even better writing. It has been my pleasure to read, rate and review your writing. Write on!

As you continue participating in this small, growing community of aspiring writers, may your success continue to climb! My hope is to see more of your work as your journey progresses!


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Review of Freedom  
Review by Maria Mize
In affiliation with  
Rated: E | (4.5)


Hello, Liza! I reviewed and rated your acrostic poetry entitled:
FREEDOM

*Bullet*My overall thoughts:
I liked the easy flow of this piece. Serene.

*Bullet*Most liked -- and why:
I most liked the "fantasy" aspect.

*Bullet*Least liked -- and why:
Nothing least liked. I gave you a 4.5 because though I enjoyed this piece ---- it didn't knock my socks off, astound me... probably because that was not your intention.

*Bullet*Grammar/Spelling (suggestions):
No problems found.

*Bullet*Mere suggestions for improvement:
I think you've done a wonderful job with this acrostic and I believe it will receive many accolades.

*Bullet*Why/how this piece did (or did not) impact me:
I found your poetry inviting, without struggle; and it's impact was like a whisper of the wind.

*Bullet*Final thoughts:
Please remember, you are the author here and my comments are merely my own. Whether or not you agree or disagree matters fractionally to me in comparison to my hope that I have encouraged and provoked you to even better writing. It has been my pleasure to read, rate and review your writing. Write on!

As you continue participating in this small, growing community of aspiring writers, may your success continue to climb! My hope is to see more of your work as your journey progresses!


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Review by Maria Mize
In affiliation with  
Rated: E | (4.5)


He, Dr. M. C. Gupta! We meet again. I reviewed and rated your poetry entitled:
INSPIRATION: a sonnet

*Bullet*My overall thoughts:
I found your poetry light, airy. The rhythm, rhyme were melodious throughout.

*Bullet*Most liked -- and why:
The brevity and fluidity of your work.

*Bullet*Least liked -- and why:
Your poetry was a mite lofty for my taste... floating too high above reality.

*Bullet*Grammar/Spelling (suggestions):
No suggestions.

*Bullet*Mere suggestions for improvement:
Think deeper and bring more impact into your writing.

*Bullet*Final thoughts:
Please remember, you are the author here and my comments are merely my own. Whether or not you agree or disagree matters fractionally to me in comparison to my hope that I have encouraged and provoked you to even better writing. It has been my pleasure to read, rate and review your writing. Write on!

As you continue participating in this small, growing community of aspiring writers, may your success continue to climb! My hope is to see more of your work as your journey progresses!


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Review of Yellow Paper.  
Review by Maria Mize
In affiliation with  
Rated: E | (4.5)


Hello, Grace! Today I was pleased to review:
YELLOW PAPER

*Bullet*My overall thoughts:
The title was significant to your work--perfect.

*Bullet*Most liked -- and why:
I enjoyed the play of your words... You tickled my ears.

*Bullet*Least liked -- and why:
I found a few unnecessary words that would increase the impact of this piece had they been discarded. (I leave finding those words and re-editing up to you.)

*Bullet*Grammar/Spelling (suggestions):
No problems found.

*Bullet*Mere suggestions for improvement:
Review your work over and over---perfecting and perfecting---you'll be so much more pleased with the finished product. =)

*Bullet*Why/how this piece did (or did not) impact me:
Unfortunately, many of us get stuck in a rut... It's amazing what one kind word, one smile will do---not only for you but for everyone around you.

*Bullet*Final thoughts:
Please remember, you are the author here and my comments are merely my own. Whether or not you agree or disagree matters fractionally to me in comparison to my hope that I have encouraged and provoked you to even better writing. It has been my pleasure to read, rate and review your writing. Write on!

As you continue participating in this small, growing community of aspiring writers, may your success continue to climb! My hope is to see more of your work as your journey progresses!


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Review by Maria Mize
In affiliation with  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)


Hello, R. Walter Smith! I reviewed and rated your poetry entitled:
THE TEMPTER IN THE NIGHT

*Bullet*My overall thoughts:
Interesting. A must read for every girl---teenage on up.

*Bullet*Most liked -- and why:
The fact that you have attributed all mad dealings here to the Tempter.

         The devil is a sly old fox.
         If I could catch him, I'd put him in a box.
         I'd put him in a box and throw away the key
         for all the tricks he's played on me.


*Bullet*Grammar/Spelling (suggestions):
Nothing found/noted.

*Bullet*Mere suggestions for improvement:
No improvement needed. Your point is direct, its message clear.

*Bullet*Why/how this piece did (or did not) impact me:
It gave me pause to ponder the fragility of naivete.

*Bullet*Final thoughts:
Please remember, you are the author here and my comments are merely my own. Whether or not you agree or disagree matters fractionally to me in comparison to my hope that I have encouraged and provoked you to even better writing. It has been my pleasure to read, rate and review your writing. Write on!

As you continue participating in this small, growing community of aspiring writers, may your success continue to climb! My hope is to see more of your work as your journey progresses!


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Review by Maria Mize
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)


Hello Cindy. I reviewed and rated your story entitled:
TASKS OF A CODEPENDENT

*Bullet*My overall thoughts:
Great work. Relevant. Comprehensible.

*Bullet*Most liked -- and why:
The straight-forward, no gloss approach of your writing.

*Bullet*Least liked -- and why:
Nothing.

*Bullet*Grammar/Spelling (suggestions):
Nothing found.

*Bullet*Why/how this piece did (or did not) impact me:
Your message was clear and its impact unrelenting.

*Bullet*Final thoughts:
Please remember, you are the author here and my comments are merely my own. Whether or not you agree or disagree matters fractionally to me in comparison to my hope that I have encouraged and provoked you to even better writing. It has been my pleasure to read, rate and review your writing. Write on!

As you continue participating in this small, growing community of aspiring writers, may your success continue to climb! My hope is to see more of your work as your journey progresses!


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Review of Buried Alive  
Review by Maria Mize
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Scarrrryyy.

This piece is a captivating glimpse into the life of a serial killer. I found no grammar, spelling errors. Your writing is focused and easy to follow, yet rich with word usage and simplicity.

Keep writing, Aralls. The world wouldn't be the same without you. Your writing emotes empathy and insight into a mind gone mad.
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Review by Maria Mize
In affiliation with Rising Stars of WdC  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Dreams can be so ethereal. I too have vivid dreams and make it a point to write most down. My favorite words of MY FACE WILL HAUNT YOU:

         ...I watched as the locked door shook from the force of the soldiers attempting to break it open. The fact that grandfather had
         thought to lock it made me smile, remembering how forgetful he became when in a rush. Directly in front of it I stood. I was
         absolutely certain they would kill me, and from what I had seen I was certain it would be a shot in the forehead. Decisively
         I thought, “I want you to look me in the eyes when you shoot me. I want my face to haunt you!”

Suggestions: Always spell-check and, if possible, grammar-check your writing. Through revision, eliminate all unnecessary words.

I found this piece compelling as well as informative. I was sad about the baby being left alone in the bath tub, though I understood your reason to do so.

I enjoyed reviewing your work.
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Review of The Pair  
Review by Maria Mize
In affiliation with Rising Stars of WdC  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Forgive me. After giving quite an intensive review, I attempted to run the spell check and... "poof" my entire review disappeared.

I found the impact of your poetry beautiful and inspiring. Your meter, rhythm and rhyme was lovely, accomplished. This was an intriguing, poetic story written in the first person --- compelling from beginning to end.

I very much enjoyed reviewing this piece. Thank you.

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Review of The Refusal  
Review by Maria Mize
Rated: E | (5.0)
I, too, believe. Thank you for this encouraging statement of faith. ~Psm 23
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Review of MORNING  
Review by Maria Mize
Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you for this encouraging poem. I pray God's richest blessings be granted you.
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Review by Maria Mize
Rated: E | (5.0)


Hello, Meg! I'm sorry to hear that Larry~Kansaspoet passed. It was nice to find your beautiful and poetic tribute:
THE TURNBERRY STREET POET

*Bullet*My overall thoughts:
Beautiful poetry and tribute to an amazing person. Thank you.

*Bullet*Most liked -- and why:
         To toast the one who lit the flame
         Our Campfire Leader ~ Long live his name.


I will always remember the kindness of Larry~Kansaspoet in welcoming me into this community and embracing my writing --- he was a candle through whom many have been, continue to be, blessed.

*Bullet*Grammar/Spelling (suggestions):
Nothing found.

*Bullet*Why/how this piece did (or did not) impact me:
I wondered about Larry --- especially today as I began seeing R.I.P., etc. Without direct details, you helped me clearly understand his passing.

*Bullet*Final thoughts:
My comments are merely my own. Whether or not you agree or disagree matters fractionally to me in comparison to my hope that I have encouraged and provoked you to greater writing. It has been my pleasure to read, rate and review your work. Write on!

As you continue participating in this growing community of aspiring writers, may your success continue to climb! My hope is to see more of your work as your journey progresses!


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Review by Maria Mize
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Truly funny. Good job.
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Review by Maria Mize
In affiliation with Rising Stars of WdC  
Rated: E | (5.0)


Hello, TikkunOlam~R.S. Robin M Miller! I reviewed and rated your opening poem, inviting me into this section of your port.

*Bullet*My overall thoughts:
You've created a grand entrance, capturing my attention and wetting my appetite. I'm glad to be here and likely to come back for more.

*Bullet*Most liked -- and why:
The nice cadence of rhythm and rhyme adds a pleasing fluidity to your poem. I most liked the piercing ring of truth --- easy on the ears, yet undeniably clear and pointedly focused.

*Bullet*Grammar/Spelling (suggestions):
I found your writing void of error, evoking no suggestions from me.

*Bullet*Why/how this piece did (or did not) impact me:
As a Christian, I found the beauty of your poetry remarkable and delightful, start to finish. You chose to write: Poetry - Spirtually Speaking, accomplishing in one, four-stanza sweep what you set out to do.

*Bullet*Final thoughts:
Please remember, you are the author here and my comments are merely my own. Whether or not you agree or disagree matters fractionally to me in comparison to my hope that I have encouraged and provoked you to even better writing. It has been my pleasure to read, rate and review your writing. WRITE ON!

As you continue participating in this small, growing community of aspiring writers, may your success continue to climb! My hope is to see more of your work as your journey progresses!


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Review of Old Log  
Review by Maria Mize
In affiliation with Rising Stars of WdC  
Rated: E | (5.0)


Hello. Congratulations on "Shining Star" status! I too have reviewed and rated your poetry entitled:
OLD LOG

*Bullet*My overall thoughts:
Lovely poetry. The format you've written in --- word choice and line structure --- serve you well. Your words bring their message to life, an unveiling of clear comprehension.

*Bullet*Most liked -- and why:
I like the way this piece flows, the lines that are set apart as well as each stanza from which one gently departs and arrives -- like the ebb and flow of an ocean tide.

*Bullet*Grammar/Spelling (suggestions):
I found no mistakes, no need for suggestions.

*Bullet*Why/how this piece did (or did not) impact me:
I found your writing thought provoking, as well as inspiring --- beautifully put together. Simplicity comes alive through the use of intricately woven visual wordplay.

*Bullet*Final thoughts:
Please remember, you are the author here and my comments are merely my own. Whether or not you agree or disagree matters fractionally to me in comparison to my hope that I have encouraged and provoked you to even better writing. It has been my pleasure to read, rate and review your writing. Write on!

As you continue participating in this small, growing community of aspiring writers, may your success continue to climb! My hope is to see more of your work as your journey progresses!


If you find spelling errors in my review, forgive me. This was written at work without the aid of dictionary as I cover phones for our receptionist.

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Review of Steamer Trunk  
Review by Maria Mize
Rated: E | (5.0)


Hello to you the_author_lou! Here is my review and rating of your poem entitled:
STEAMER TRUNK

*Bullet*My overall thoughts:
This piece abounds in thought-provoking metaphors and similes. My interpretation is the conveyence of past memories stealing one's joy in the present because he/she is stolen, locked away as if in a old trunk of past memories.

*Bullet*Most liked -- and why:
I thoroughly enjoyed the brevity and depth of your poetry. Your message is relative, and your words penetrate our hearts like a well-directed, piercing arrow.

*Bullet*Grammar/Spelling (suggestions):
Nothing found.

*Bullet*Mere suggestions for improvement:
None.

*Bullet*Why/how this piece did (or did not) impact me:
I too am sorting through the haunting trials of my life --- rocky failures and pitfalls --- determined to let go of the past, press into the present and take control as I dive into a wonderous future, the Fall of my life.

No longer adrift at sea, I am a persevering, creative, wayfaring creature, soaring the blue skies amongst a drifting veil of clouds, while enjoying peace and quiet solitude, beauty and serenity.

As I ride the wind in a glider plane over streams, rivers, mountains and trees --- newfound contentment makes me happy and free.

*Bullet*Final thoughts:
Please remember, you are the author here and my comments are merely my own. Whether or not you agree or disagree matters fractionally to me in comparison to my hope that I have encouraged and provoked you to even better writing. It has been my pleasure to read, rate and review your writing. Write on!

As you continue participating in this small, growing community of aspiring writers, may your success continue to climb! My hope is to see more of your work as your journey progresses!


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Thank you, Dr. J

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Review by Maria Mize
In affiliation with Rising Stars of WdC  
Rated: E | (5.0)


Hello, Connieann! I took a peek at:
A TOO CLOSE ENCOUNTER

*Bullet*My overall thoughts:
This phrase: ...this ugly pinkish thing streaked past..., triggered some recent memories of my mother --- please, no offense to you.

With woods behind the house, and a rolling golf course just beyond, my mom and dad see a lot of critters. Mom loves the birds, but intensely hates the squirrels, racoons, ravens who dare to take advantage of her generous bird feeders. For a short while, mom and dad caught and released the raccoons --- animal control took a deposit for the first trap. After setting traps every evening, they caught about forty. My dad refuses to continue catching raccoons -- it just adds to his list of chores. After forty, you can imagine...

Now there is a small war going on in their backyard. Mom bought a pellet gun to shoot at the squirrels and crows. She actually puts poison-soaked bubble-gum down for the incorrigible raccoons.

Several years ago, in anguish, I watched her spray poison into a whole nest of Grandaddy Long-legs. It was sad as they staggered out of their home in her eaves while she was relentless with the sprayer. My heart cried... Why, why? Grandaddy Long-legs never hurt anybody.

I love my mom.

*Bullet*Most liked -- and why:
The reality here is a nice snippet into your day-to-day life.

*Bullet*Least liked -- and why:
This phrase: ...this ugly pinkish thing streaked past... evoked pity for the scared little possum. (A few insects --- roaches, spiders --- make my skin crawl, and I loathe mosquitos and flies, especially when they bite. =)

*Bullet*Grammar/Spelling (suggestions):
Nothing poked me.

*Bullet*Mere suggestions for improvement:
None. I found this an excellent rendition of a prickly event. I was captivated by your vivid account of the incident.

*Bullet*Final thoughts:

Please remember, you are the author here and my comments are merely my own. Whether or not you agree or disagree matters fractionally to me in comparison to my hope that I have encouraged and provoked you to even better writing. It has been my pleasure to read, rate and review your writing. Write on!

As you continue participating in this small, growing community of aspiring writers, may your success continue to climb! My hope is to see more of your work as your journey progresses!


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Thank you, Dr. J

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Review by Maria Mize
Rated: E | (4.5)
I enjoyed reading about your experience here --- very real, thought-provoking. Giving blood seems to generate memories, hopes and dreams for you. God bless you for your most generous gift to your community.

I too always enjoyed donating blood until I was found positive for Hepatitis B antigens --- somehow meaning I had contracted and overcome the Hepatitis that now tainted my blood. It was saddened to find I could never give again. My dad is O+ and has given regularly his entire life. Now that he is 75, after an episode similar to yours, he no longer gives. My sister, the nurse, gave blood recently. She'd had a Remicaid treatment for Crohn's desease the previous day. They were having a blood drive at the hospital where she works and she and her workmates lined up to give. My sister's blood pressure dropped, she passed out, had a seizure and, therefore, now the risks outweigh the benefits of her giving.

I am thankful for those who are so willing to share their blood with those in need.
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Review by Maria Mize
Rated: E | (4.5)
Narin---"How to" books are popular. You've inspired me to give some tips for those interested in becoming a Legal Secretary----or any kind of secretary for that matter. The next step... following through. =)
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Review of Letter From Ricky  
Review by Maria Mize
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good for you --- winning Writer's Cramp.

I can relate to this --- one time when sharing with a girlfriend she mentioned something about how one should be pursued by a man...

I whispered a prayer, that I might be pursued. He's been pursuing me ever since... Sometimes I wish he would stop, but am always glad that he does not. When someone loves you enough to continue pursuing your affections, you gradully lose sight of their imperfections.

I enjoyed your word play here --- the rhythm, rhyme --- letting us walk with you through your sweet grape arbor.
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Review by Maria Mize
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hilariously, funny. The joke was on you and you fell for it, showing a most sincere and caring nature.

Don't be embarassed... for you are truly a blessing to your customers.

Wow --- I notice your work receives a multitude of reviews. Good for you!

Write on!
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Review by Maria Mize
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like your chosen title... because we're all warriers in this game called life -- becoming stronger through the struggles.

I found your writing like a clean gentle stream flowing toward a sublime destination. Love grows with time as we become less critical and more intimate with the precious details of our mate.

Kudos to you! Write on!
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