This is a very good article. I really liked reading the answer to the first query regarding communication with God. It is very well thought out and pulled me into the rest of the questions for this. I definitely agree that Prayer is a form of communication. It is a good analysis. I like how your answers touch upon positive qualities intended to be included with communication such as Empathy and Sincerity. You also do a really good job of tying in your analysis with biblical passages. Your answers are thought provoking and very insightful.
Beautiful eagle picture. I really like the eagle on the branch. It looks really formidable and makes for a very cool signature. It is unfortunate that I missed the store that that this was attached to. Judging from this graphic. It seemed like it had some good images available in it.
This is a good story. I am curious to know what the prompt was for this. It is written pretty well. I like the first person perspective used and the narrator has a personality that is easy for the reader to connect with. The reader is able to understand the main character's situation and sympathize. The pacing was good making it smooth to read through. Readers are able to get a sense of each of the characters in it. The story doesn't go into heavy detail about how the two people would have interfered or the background of the lead so readers tend to side with the narrator. It works well with the twist ending as the reader comes to realization that maybe it is better to let things play out at the same time the narrator does. It was a nice surprise.
There are a couple of tweaks I recommend:
That how someone else wanted to be with her friends was her problem, not theirs.
They'd been hatching an elaborate plan right until when the party broke upoccurred.
I thought their plan would bring about more trouble thatthan it would solve
Given that the story is told in first person perspective using H & I as an abbreviation is confusing because 'I' is a pronoun that could also refer to the narrator. It took a couple of rereads to clarify it referred to Imogene. I wouldn't recommend using I as an abbreviation for this story.
Overall this is a fun story and I enjoyed reading it. Thank you very much for writing it.
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