Great Story... Well concieved and executed
I loved the theme, natures revenge against the ravages of man.
The use of folklore gave the story more depth and intrigue. The title was perfect, clever line, I don't want to give anything away.
There was some very nice imagery in the climax near the end.
I hate to say this because it goes against my usual opinion, but I thought the story could use a bit of a hook in the begining and was a little slow with unneccessary details in places.
What I thought the story lacked was in character description, how they looked, perhaps giving them some unique/defining attributes. I think the dialogue could use a little work.
I enjoyed the story, I love giant monsters and ancient Gods...