The flow of this was really nice. Easy read for free verse. I often find too many forced poems by people that think they are the next W. B. Yeats but end up resembling a seventh grade english assignment. I truly enjoyed this work, keep it up.
Again Sara you never cease to amaze. The more of your stories I read the more I want to read. I hope it doesn't sound cliche, but each one has that remarkable ability to place the reader inside the story. your characters are very believable and easy to sympathize with. I must read more. Thanks again for what you do.
While I was starting to think I was the only one left alive with a truly twisted mind, you have proven me wrong. thanks for a wonderful diversion while I was having severe writers block. The only improvement I could suggest would be more twisted polls. Thanks again for your sickness, I loved it.
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