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for entry "July 21,2020
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Koyel


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Review of Leap In The Light  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi BarbetteLouise ,
I am here to review your poem and give my honest opinion about it. This poem is about the eternal search for a soulmate but it ends in vain due to a possibility of a previous bad experience. I loved the lucidity of language and the beautiful imagery. Well done. Write on!


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Review of Autumn  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Thaddeus Buxton Winthrop ,
I am here to review your poem and give my honest opinion about it. This is an excellent poem written in iambic pentameter. Meter and rhyme are flawless. Lovely use of imagery. Ok if written as 'okay' looks better. Great job. Write on!


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Review of In your eyes  
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Lisa Noe Kittyluv um Puppyluv ,
I am here to review your poem and give my honest opinion about it. This is a lovely poem portraying the subtle emotion and feelings for the man you love. Nice use of meter and rhyme. Great Job. No suggestions for improvement. Write on!


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Review of DECEPTION  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Dr M C Gupta ,
I am here to review your poem and give my honest opinion about it. This is an excellent poem about the deception that heathens and suicide bombers inflict upon on innocent humans and God. Lovely use of meter and rhythm. Write on!


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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Tim Chiu ,
I am here to review your poem and give my honest opinion about it. This is an excellent poem about a heavenly meeting becoming a love so cherished. Excellent use of imagery. No suggestions for improvement. Write on!


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Review of Fire Support  
Rated: E | (3.0)
Hi randyr,
I am here to review your poem and give my honest opinion about it. This is a poem about fire support. I would suggest you to write a few more lines and make the piece more sensory through proper use of words. Write on!


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Review of Arouse  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Raincodes ,
I am here to review your poem and give my honest opinion about it. The cameo of feelings was brilliantly portrayed here. I liked your way with the words in this poem. No suggestions for improvement. Write on !


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Review of Heaven of freedom  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi jaya ,
I am here to review your poem and give my honest opinion about it. Your poem breathes freshness and celebrates the bliss of freedom, an exhilarating joy to escape from bondage and slavery. Great job. No suggestions for improvement. Write on!


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Dr M C Gupta ,
I am here to review your poem and give my honest opinion about it. This is a lovely poem about a septuagenarian who looks back upon his past sixty-nine years and celebrates his life with vigour and joy. The meter and rhyme in this sonnet are perfect. Great job. Write on!


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Review of A prayer  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi gour ,
I am here to review your poem and give my honest opinion about it. This is a nice poem about supplication to The Almighty. I would have liked it to be more longer and emotive. Your wording is sweet though. Good job. Write on!


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Beholden ,
I am here to review your poem and give my honest opinion about it. You have drawn a very vivid picture of the big bang theory and the supernova in the canvas of your mind. Excellent use of imagery. I liked your grasp of words and the profound knowledge they exuded.No suggestions for improvement. Write on!


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Review of Grandpa's Hands  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi milifred,
I am here to give my review and honest opinion of your poem. You did an excellent job with the rhyme
and meter in this poem. Your emotion and love for your grandfather were brilliantly portrayed here. I could not detect any error or flaw in your writing. Great job. Write on!


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Review of New Souls  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi Azrael13 ,
This is an intriguing start . The plot moves well and there is showing rather than telling. The protagonist is pitted well against the antagonist and I loved the brawl. A conflict comes and it is well resolved at the end. Nice work. Write on !


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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Elle ,
A thoughtful observation on the way to home from work. Simple and naive words are the vital essence of this poem. Nice usage of grammar, meter and rhythm. Had the poem been a bit longer I would have loved more. No correction is needed.Write on !
Koyel~writing again


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Margaret ,
I loved this free verse, a Nature poem of trees dancing in an unbridled frenzy with the gusty winds. Beautiful imagery and sensory words capture my mind. The choice of words is excellent. Nice usage of grammar, meter and rhythm. Write on!
Koyel~writing again


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Review of The Wounded Elm  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hi Prosperous Snow ,
I loved this cameo poem. The words flow spontaneously and smoothly. You have written an emotive piece of poem. Excellent usage of grammar, meter and rhythm. No other change is required. The imagery is lovely. Write on !
Koyel~writing again


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Review of Low Tide  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Tinker ,
A beautifully crafted poem written in an unique 'Sedoka' style. I did not notice any flaw in grammar, meter or rhythm. A sweet poem welcoming the scallop shells strewn on sand. No change is required. I loved the way you grasped the concept of the picture prompt and let the creativity flow . Write on!
Regards,
Koyel~writing again


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Review of The Book  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi RodneyGray ,
I loved this fantasy story having a well-grounded plot, a conflict and a resolution at the end. The language and verbiage chosen were apt and nice. The major issue I find here is with the grammar.Like, in the first paragraph itself it should be 'waves of chill' instead of 'wave of chill'. Overall, an enjoyable read. Write on!


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Review of Child  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi The Philosopher ,
I found this poem of yours in the Random Reads and Review section. I liked your theme of the young children at school and their transition to a college.I loved your subject matter. I found the flow of the poem a bit inconsistent and the same with your rhythm and rhyme. I hope this is new to you and you will overcome this soon. Write on!


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Review of Sweet Revenge  
In affiliation with Dark Dreamscapes  
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Hi Write 2 Publish 2020 ,
This is a Games of Thrones review. I am hereby to share my honest opinion with you. Feel free to disregard if any.

PLOT
Nicely conjured. The beginning was an excellent one and it instantly hooked me into the story. Way to go! When I started reading the story enthralled me more and more and it did such effect on me until the end. The protagonist , antagonists and the conflict between them was vividly portrayed along with the side-line character Tom. I could empathize with the characters very well and at the end I got the visceral sorrow of Aunt Julia. Excellent job!

PACE
The pace of this story was an ideal one, gradually sparking the readers' interest.

Grammar/Punctuation/Spelling
You forgot to put the ellipses mark after 'on two legs'. A comma is necessary between 'dust mop the floor

My Personal Opinion
I enjoyed this read. I wanted some more events at the end. I did not find the link between the drink 'Monroe's medicine' and the story built within. These are the lacunae you need to fill. Write on!
Koyel GoT Sig 2


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In affiliation with Dark Dreamscapes  
Rated: E | (3.0)
Hi 💎GeminiGem💎 ,

This a Games of Thrones review for your story. I am hereby going to discuss my honest opinion with you. You may feel to disregard it, if any.

Title
It instantly hooked me into the story.

PLOT
The plot was not at all well-executed. It did not have a beginning, a middle and an end. In order to write fiction proper characterization is need with the protagonist, antagonist and the side-line characters, a conflict and a resolution at the end. None was found here.

PACE
The story moved a bit too abruptly without making any effect on me The pace of short stories should be medium, neither too fast nor too slow. The story should capture the readers' attention throughout and he characters should be chosen in such a manner that the readers can empathize with themselves very well. The story should also leave the reader with an emotion even after finishing it. These are the principles for creating a good story.
Grammar/spelling/punctuation
You forgot to put the ellipses mark after 'in her chair'.

MY PERSONAL OPINION
Overall,a nice need. With a little more polish and editing you can bring it in good shape.

Hope you find my review useful. Write on!
Koyel GoT Sig 2


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Review of Guilt  
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Rated: E | (3.0)
Hello Anders C. Leyde ,
Overall a nice poem, though a bit too short. I don't know whether you are following a rhyme scheme or not. The first four lines followed a definite rhyme pattern which the last four did not. In fact, no rhyme was present in the last four. A keen observation on the flow reflects that is is uneven. Also there is lack of enough feel in the poem. Just my opinion. Feel free to disregard.
Koyel GoT Sig 2


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In affiliation with Dark Dreamscapes  
Rated: E | (2.5)
Hello chardan ,
I read through your poem twice but unfortunately did not find any vigor in it. My honest opinion is that it looked like you were in great hurry to write the poem. The art of poetry is breathing life into our soul, whether having a specified form constricted by meter and rhyme or the smooth flow in a free verse type. Neither was found in your case. Your poem lacked enough feel and you need to evoke ebullience and exuberance in your poem. Poetry is something that builds sensory images in our mind, it is palpable. This is my review . Feel free to disregard it.
Koyel GoT Sig 2


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In affiliation with Dark Dreamscapes  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello J. Lee ,
What a marvellous poem full of fresh imagery speaking of the life's philosophy-past, present and future. Nothing can be offered as suggestion as there is no room for improvement, perfection cannot be improved. The vibrant images of this poem fill me with exuberance. Write on!
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