I relate to the side of Grace since I have experienced similar waves of those emotions and thoughts. So I would like to see a sequel of this. I think it would be good for readers to see how Grace would tackle or live with those emotions and voices in her head. Maybe it can even give those in similar situations something to reflect on when having these kinds of experiences.
In times of crisis and fear, there can be times when we think that the world is just trying to take away our happiness and hope. This is the message it delivers. I like how the first impression from the first few paragraphs make you think that it is a mother trying to give shelter but in the end, it was actually a warning. A premonition of what is to come when war is sought out.
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