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Review of Overt  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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This poem effectively captures a moment of confrontation and retaliation, using vivid imagery and terse language to convey the intensity of the situation. With its straightforward structure and evocative tone, it leaves a lasting impression on the reader, prompting reflection on boundaries, respect, and the consequences of crossing them. Write on!
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Review of Storms  
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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Theme and Imagery
The theme of transition from childhood innocence to adult understanding is conveyed effectively through the imagery of rainbows, storms, lightning, and thunder. These natural phenomena serve as metaphors for the passage of time and the realization of life's complexities. The contrast between the carefree joy of childhood and the apprehension of adulthood is shown throughout the poem.

Emotion and Tone
The poem evokes a sense of wistfulness and introspection, inviting readers to reflect on their own experiences of growing up. The speaker's nostalgia for the magic of childhood is tinged with a hint of sadness at the loss of innocence. However, there's also a sense of wonder and appreciation for the beauty and power of nature, even in its most frightening aspects.

Structure and Flow
The poem follows a simple yet effective structure, with each stanza building upon the central theme of childhood memories and adult understanding. The rhyme scheme is consistent and adds to the poem's rhythmic flow, making it easy to read and engage with. Consider experimenting with stanza length and line breaks to enhance the poem's visual impact and pacing.

Language and Expression
The language used in the poem is straightforward and accessible, allowing the emotions and imagery to shine through without becoming overly complex.

Conclusion
Your poem captures a nostalgic reflection on childhood memories juxtaposed with the complexities of adulthood, all set against the backdrop of storms and rainbows. I think it's well-crafted and relatable to others.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you for this list of museum's that offer virtual tours and/or share content. I used to keep an updated list of my own when I homeschooled, but stopped. Now that I have more free time on my hands, I'll be saving this to check out myself. Thank you and keep up the great work!


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Review of Gervic's Portal  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I came across this by accident while looking at your profile and I must say, it's impressive. Everything is nicely displayed in neat categories, eliminating any clutter. I keep saying I'll learn how to make my page shine, but as soon as I begin, frustration takes over and I give up. So, even though I'm completely jealous, I have to say- well done!
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a wonderful poem. The emotion of these words of wisdom flows off the page. It's uplifting and comforting. Thank you for sharing this little gem with us.


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In affiliation with I Write  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Let me say I am not a professional. This review is just a personal opinion that I am sharing with you. If anything in this review is deemed unhelpful, promptly ignore it and go about business as usual..

I like this poem because when I read it out loud, I can see the words come to life in my mind. You've got the form of the rondel nailed down. It's pretty catchy and works perfectly with the Tim Burton-like scene I imagined. I didn't notice any grammar or punctuation problems and have no suggestions. Overall, you've created a great little piece. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Good luck in the contest!
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Isn't a library one of the best places in the world?! The last stanza describes how I feel about being in a library. My favorite part of this cute little poem is the final two lines. It sums everything up nicely and is a great way to end the poem. Thank you for sharing this with everyone!
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Not only is this poem funny and relatable, but it's also about something I rarely see in poetry! Even though I struggle with losing weight, I can laugh at myself when my expectations seem outrageous. I have definitely cleared out my cabinets and then tried to restock them with things from a healthy grocery list on more than one occasion! Thank you for sharing this with everyone!
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Review of Springtime  
Rated: E | (4.0)
This acrostic poem is full of imagery that helps me visualize each line as I read it. You've incorporated the use of all five senses, which can be difficult at times. The beginning and ending lines perfectly open and close the poem. I didn't notice any grammar or spelling issues. Thank you for sharing this with everyone!


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Rated: E | (3.0)
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This poem brings back fond memories of strolling down the shore as a child. I can see the scene unfolding as I read each line. You've captured the innocence of a carefree girl on a lovely day with excellence. Each stanza flows well into the next. The closing stanza nicely wraps up the poem. I didn't notice any grammar, punctuation, or spelling errors. I wouldn't change a thing, so I have no suggestions to offer. Thank you for sharing this with everyone.


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Review of "Sea Moods"  
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Rated: E | (3.0)
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I chose this item to review because the title and description piqued my interest. It's a lovely poem. The image of a young girl walking along the beach goes through my mind as I read it. My favorite line is the last.

The ocean meditates

It's a powerful line that will stick with me throughout the day and a great finish. Thank you for sharing this with everyone.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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I'm so glad you have this highlighted in your portfolio. This poem reminds me of how my mother coped with losing my father. As I read each line, I could easily picture the scene in my mind. The end rhymes and repeating lines are well crafted and work well together. Although this is a sad poem, it's also heartwarming. I didn't notice any grammar or punctuation errors and I wouldn't change a thing. Thank you for sharing this with everyone.

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Review of 1,000 True Fans  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I found this article shortly after having a similar conversation with a fellow writer. Even though this newsletter is a few years old, it's still relevant and something all authors should consider. I've got a childhood friend that's a self-published independent author with 16 books. Although I've bought each one, I've never thought of myself as a hardcore fan because I have no interest in her chosen genre. I just want to support her writing because I believe in her talent. Until I read this, it never occurred to me that she might do the same.
I'm a numbers girl, so I like that you've included example breakdowns. It helps to understand the impact of the information you've given. I think some indie authors spend more time trying to gather a massive amount of fans and not enough time honing their craft. This newsletter reminds us to think about what type of fan we should be seeking, which in turn can free up time to polish our skills. Thanks for sharing the 1,000 True Fans hypothesis!

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Review of Haiku-Winter  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I chose this poem to review because I have a fondness for Japanese poetry and Winter is my favorite season. You've done a great job of mastering the form. The second line gives it that little twist that most authors don't realize is needed and the contrast between the two seasons is clear. You tease the reader with the promise of blooms and then deftly reveal another stark day. It reminds me of Texas weather *Laugh* Overall, you've crafted a solid poem. Thank you for sharing it with us!
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Review of I Do Know  
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Rated: ASR | (3.0)
First, let me say that I am not a professional. This review is just a personal opinion that I am sharing with you. If anything in this review is deemed unhelpful, please discard it.

FIRST IMPRESSION: I found you through the Noticing Newbies forum, so let me welcome you to WDC. I hope this place becomes a second to you, as it has me. I chose this poem to review because I feel mental health is an important topic. It's great to see others shining a light on it with their experiences.

LIKES: Reading this, I felt a sense of relief to have found someone that understands the exasperation and loneliness of not being the same as those around me. You've conveyed the struggles and triumphs of mental illness very well. The word and line spacing add a visual appeal that allows the reader to understand the importance of your chosen words. Line 18 is my favorite because I know how easy it is for nothing to become something and upheave my world.

GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION: Technical things you may want to have a look over when you edit.
Line 7- The word sideblind jumps out at me. Should it be two words?
Line 21- I can't tell you how many times I still make the mistake of theives instead of the correct thieves. Honestly, both spellings look weird to me *Laugh*
Line 37- Let me offer the alternative throughout in place of through.

STYLE/VOICE: Finding your voice and developing your own style is something that never ends, but I'd say you're well on the way. I like that this is a sort of internal dialog you've chosen to share.

SUGGESTIONS: I don't have any suggestions for your poem, but you may be interested in "Invalid Item" 

FINAL THOUGHTS: I wonder if this piece is finished. Maybe it's just the way I read it, but I feel like something is missing from the end. Either way, you've written a solid piece. Thank you for sharing it with us.


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Review of Accept and Commit  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I came across this by accident but since I've recently started Dialectal Behaviour Therapy, I've been curious about different therapeutic approaches. I have a copy of The Happiness Trap waiting to be read, so I had a basic knowledge of ACT before reading this essay.

You've explained Acceptance and Commitment Therapy in a way that's easy to understand but not so simple that the reader feels like a first grader. I'm sure other readers appreciate this as much as I. The exercises you have suggested seem to be straightforward and easy to put into practice by those willing to give ACT a try. I enjoyed reading this and look forward to seeing what other enlightening goodies you have in your portfolio.
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
I was led here by the newsfeed and want to tell you how cute I find this page. It's a great way to display your efforts. The merit badges and trinkets we create and strive to earn are part of what makes WDC special. Thank you for your contributions. Keep up the excellent work!


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Review of Ominous  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I've been browsing your portfolio to see what goodies you have in store for us and just came to this tiny poem. I have to say this caught my attention. I love the 24 Syllable contest because it forces you to relish each syllable and choose the perfect word. This poem is tricky and clever. When I first read it, the words sounded like a nursery rhyme. But then, they echoed through the room like a horror movie. The simplicity of this piece has made it complex- I love it!


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In affiliation with The Royal Court  
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Thank you for entering "Verfabula: A Creative Nonfiction Contest"  First, let me say that I am not a professional. This review is just a personal opinion that I am sharing with you. If anything in this review is deemed unhelpful, please ignore.


I wasn't expecting a woeful Christmas tale, but you did a great job. I felt like I was reading an unreleased memoir. What an awful witchy woman to be so callous. I'm certainly relieved to know that relationship ended. May every holiday be a happy one! Thank you for sharing your talent with us and good luck in the contest!
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In affiliation with I Write  
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Before I say anything else, let me congratulate you on finishing "I Write in 2020". Congratulations! Okay, so you know I'm not a professional. This review is just a personal opinion that I am sharing with you. If anything in this review is deemed unhelpful, promptly ignore it and go about business as usual..

I don't review too many horror stories, so this is a nice change. I think it's more in the science fiction genre but it seems like it would be a great prologue to a horror story. I like a good twist and you didn't let me down. I'm hooked on this plot and my imagination is running wild. Great job!
Created by Shaye Lorraine


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Review of The Two Cooks  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
A review from "I Write in 2020". First, let me say that I am not a professional. This review is just a personal opinion that I am sharing with you. If anything in this review is deemed unhelpful, promptly ignore it and go about business as usual..

I've never tried this contest, but it's on my list. I don't think I'd do as well as you. I enjoyed this lighthearted story. I've read some other entries that were difficult to understand. Yours was easy to follow along. Good luck in the contest!


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In affiliation with I Write  
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Hey, we're both doing "I Write in 2020"! First, let me say that I am not a professional. This review is just a personal opinion that I am sharing with you. If anything in this review is deemed unhelpful, promptly ignore it and go about business as usual..

FIRST IMPRESSION: My first thought is that the title is interesting. I think I know what it will be about, but I'm not sure. I like it because it draws me in to find out for sure.

LIKES: I like the second stanza because the second line lightens the mood just a tiny bit without taking away from the serious message.

GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION: Nothing jumped out at me.

FORM: This is another new form I can add to my list. It looks like you've followed pretty well.

SUGGESTIONS: None from me.

FINAL THOUGHTS: Overall, you've created a great little piece. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Good luck in the contest!
Created by Shaye Lorraine


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Review of Pickle Lip Balm  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Congratulations on winning Round 3 of Marketing Muse!
Your entry is so catchy that I had no problem imagining a commercial for it. I love the rhymes! Especially 'quality' and 'jollity'. I'm not sure I could have pulled that off, but you nailed it. Thank you for entering and I hope to see you in the next round!



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In affiliation with The Royal Court  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Even though this isn't a typical one, I just had to leave a review. I actually considered buying this thing for my granddaughter's room, but my daughter didn't think it was as amusing as I did.
I like your overall way of thinking. It's quick, to the point, and as a bonus, it even rhymes. Job well done. Thank you for entering, I hope you play again!


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Review of Ravyn  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I know my hormones are out of wack, but this made me a little weepy. It captures her essence perfectly. Although, I'm jealous of the line rays of Ravyn how come I never thought of that? *Laugh*
Seriously though, thank you so very much!
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