VERY WELL DONE!! I like the way you have written this. it is very interesting to me. I enjoyed reading your writing even though i to be completely honest am not one for poetry myself. I have tried a few times. But i just am not one for it. Keep up the awesome work^^
I liked this piece. It was interesting. And honestly if a mistress would think about it, she is never going to win. Because if he messed around in his wife with her then what makes her think that he won't mess around with someone else on her! Cheating is an ugly circle. Good job.
Sad reality women are always stuck with the consequences of an unplanned child to a teenage couple. But then again i would say we are blessed with the child even though there is so much else we much give up. One day that child will see the love and they will be thankful. I do understand this being as my daughter, had she lived would be 8 years old today. I enjoyed reading this piece.
I am sorry your day sucked so bad. I remember high school. we moved a lot and things were always going wrong for me. I wish i could say it gets easier the older you get but i won't lie to you because it doesn't get any better or easier most of the time. And it always seems like everyone around you stays immature even when you get older and more mature. At least in my experience. When I went to college people seemed more immature. Hope your day gets better.
This poem really speaks to me. My grandmother passed away 4 years ago and honestly it has been a very hard time for me to come to grips with...especially since my mother and grandfather also died not that long after. It is a very beautiful poem.
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