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Review by laurafu
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Yes, thank god for these beautiful creatures! I am a mommy and wife as well. The "door," you speak of is very much appreciated and needed, especially for us mommy's who like to write... among other things LOL. Very original poem. I like it for the fact that it speaks directly to me.
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Review by laurafu
Rated: E | (3.5)
Good and domething you can interpret of your own, but very short.
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Review by laurafu
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I love it. Such great descriptions and flow. One of the best flows I've seen on here actually. Very easy to read and understand.
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Review of BURN  
Review by laurafu
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
The first paragraph captured me. I was interested in knowing what else would/could have happened. "The story ended as quickly as it began," stealing from your own words. I see it was for a contest. Like I said in another review, I love your writing style. Plus we have the same name haha ;) Great job!
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Review of THE MINISTER  
Review by laurafu
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I am new to church and Christ. I just started going to church a month ago so I am a little confused, but I love your descriptions and writing style. I am interested in reading more of your stuff.
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Review by laurafu
Rated: E | (5.0)
I can relate to your response perfectly. The rewording, and looking for rhymes, for someone else to approve. Just appreciate the beauty in what you are trying to express in any words you feel are best.
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Review by laurafu
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Very sad, but promising. You will have a better year this time around I hope! Everyone can relate to this and if they cannot, they are lying! LOL great job!
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Review of Sol  
Review by laurafu
Rated: E | (2.5)
I am a little confused. Maybe you have three or four things going on here. But the first poem was interesting. The word "boy" seems misplaced. That line doesn't fit with the rest of the poem.
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Review of First Wife  
Review by laurafu
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I read quite a few stories like this in mythology class. This was quite comparable to the ones I enjoyed. It was very descriptive and short and sweet. Great job!
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Review by laurafu
Rated: E | (5.0)
I have written since I was in 3rd grade. (Blame FCAT) But in 9th grade I was forced by my English teacher to submit a poem for a contest as a grade. My poem ended up being published. Since, I have taken it upon myself to consider writing as more of a hobby.
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Review of The Dream  
Review by laurafu
Rated: E | (4.5)
I really liked this story. I'm not much of a sports fanatic, but I started reading this in boredom and enjoyed it. I half expected the end to be more dramatic, just because I'm not used to a fairy tale type ending, but it was still good. Nice job!
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Review of Digital Love.  
Review by laurafu
Rated: E | (4.5)
Computers defiantly grow old, and fast. Haha... But I see what you meant.

You aren't the only one who confides in their electronics. I believe you are speaking for more than half of the population with this poem. great rhyming and rhythm. I enjoyed reading your work.
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Review by laurafu
Rated: E | (5.0)
I read this because I wrote something similar and wanted to get another perspective. I liked how honest the story was. It was very easy to read. Good job :)
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Review by laurafu
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I liked the story. You write very well. Your style captured me from the first sentence. Great job!
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Review by laurafu
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
The story was very relaxing... just like fishing. Even if I pull into the dock fish-less, I still had a peaceful day. Great job Sir.
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Review by laurafu
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Such a cute story!
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