I find this a highly interesting, rational collection of thoughts.
I have often pondered on the following , expressed so well by you:
"Does not Each-and-Every-One-of-us effect the world everyday
The ripples of our actions stretching far and beneath"
But I never thought about "Are we not Gods ourselves?". This is an relevant concept, as it is obvious that we have free will.
"And if there is no God, no controller or unified being/consciousness, does it matter?": It certainly seems that there is no 'controller' when one considers the chaos and diversity in the world today and up to today.
"I feel that there is a system of gears and scales, weighing and distributing balance throughout the universes
A God Machine, if you will" perpetuates the theory of some that the universe(es) are governed by the laws of physics only.
"God is Indifferent" and its content make a good case for there being no God. If God is not indifferent, why hasn't It demonstrated this?
From me you get a rating of 5 for your well-considered, well expressed, and convincing analysis and conclusion.
If there is a God who is supposed to be looking after us, the earthlings, perhaps there should be new elections for a less indifferent God!
Your story is original and unusual, and full of surprises.
I believe that no reader could have foreseen the reason for Emily's departure from Joe or for her return to him. Another unexpected event was the fact that Emily stayed with her sister Elizabeth after falling ill, having told Joe that the could never love with her again.
You cleverly unwrapped the story by going to and fro from the "present" to the past and eventually back to present again to tie up the tale.
Your character Martin perceived near the beginning of the story that Joe's feeling towards Emily had never been resolved, and the story unfolded to prove him correct. Joe's emotions were convincingly and pitifully portrayed and were a contrast to the regulated and disciplined nature of the work of the specialist doctors.
You have woven a captivating and enjoyable story, and I thank you.
You have succinctly described the symptoms of WDC. You have my deepest sympathy, as your husband's illness is severe and chronic.
Unfortunately, you will have to learn with it, as the ailment has also been documented as an addiction.
The spouses club is trying to raise funds to further research this disease, with the aim of establishing a rehabilitation facility. To this cause I have pleasure in donating 300 GPs.
Thank you for a humorous letter, PROF MORIARTY. Your points are all relevant and made me smile.
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