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Review by Cody Wayne
Rated: E | (3.0)
why the lowercase? and punctuation not correct. otherwise I like the story? I too can relate those old crushes that wont go away.
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Review of Halloween party  
Review by Cody Wayne
Rated: E | (3.5)
What a fun read. Good concept I would love to see some of the musicians who have passed on just for one night in all hallows eve!
The poem seemed to flow well and was easy to read. The storyline was fun and imaginative.
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Review by Cody Wayne
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Pretty good. The scene has been set and the questions have been placed on the table. Seems everybody wonders what the other is doing or thinking. Is it human nature to want what we don't have? From experience and through getting older I have learned that the grass isn't always greener on the other side.
I enjoyed the read. keep up the good work.
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Review of For My Child  
Review by Cody Wayne
Rated: E | (4.0)
well written, I have had strained relations with my family in the past and just when I think everything has worked itself out something else comes up, where mom is pushing my buttons or bringing up the past. I know resentment and anger is not the way to live. I like what you said, God forgives and so should we. Thank you for sharing such a deep subject. My prayers are with you that Gods will be done in your situation as well as mine. It does give me comfort to know I am not alone.
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Review of What a Mess  
Review by Cody Wayne
Rated: E | (3.0)
I could easily tell what was going on the story. I followed it well. The font was nice too, and the bolder print and spacing. Good job keep writing
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Review of Rawhide  
Review by Cody Wayne
Rated: E | (4.5)
Good read. Funny. Entertaining. It rhymed well.
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Review of Sally Feathers  
Review by Cody Wayne
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
very strange, but I read on questioning what was going to happen next. there were some parts of the story that was hard to follow. I got lost during the shooting Trinas boyfriend where did he come from? and sally shot him why? good description and you painted a picture of the school and the people in it.
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Review by Cody Wayne
Rated: E | (4.0)
As a native of West Texas we didn't have squirrels growing up but as I have gotten older they have become more populous in my area. Not sure if they came in with the big archetects bringing the oak trees from other places, or just natural migration. I certainly enjoy watching them and appreciate their survival skills.

I could see your poem reflecting the survival and the nature of these bushy tailed critters.

Thank you for sharing.
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Review by Cody Wayne
Rated: E | (4.0)
Thanks for sharing. I woke up one day and began to see beauty in all things big or small instead of taking them for granted, what a better way to live.
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Review by Cody Wayne
Rated: E | (3.5)
I like the flow and the storyline. I appreciate the beginning of a friendship, then romance forms and perhaps they just remain friends in the end.
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Review by Cody Wayne
Rated: E | (4.0)
A positive poem. Reading it inspired me, I don't have to be perfect and I can learn from my mistakes.
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Review by Cody Wayne
Rated: E | (4.0)
Good storyline, it was easy to follow, I enjoyed the cowboy christmas
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Review by Cody Wayne
Rated: E | (4.0)
what a picturesque view. Gods canvas no two sunsets are ever the same.
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Review by Cody Wayne
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I enjoyed reading this piece. It gave some helpful ideas in a very simple setting. Writing about not so big things seems to be a good idea, I love the details. The candy wrapper. Good technique.
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Review by Cody Wayne
Rated: E | (3.5)
I like the concept, appears to be two children arguing. The dialogue was easy to follow and the storyline was fun and interesting. The rhyming mythical creatures Blizzard Lizard and Ice mice was an added touch. Snow snakes under the porch will make me think twice this winter. Fun story made me smile this Sunday Morning. Thanks for Sharing.
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Review of There Was a Time  
Review by Cody Wayne
Rated: E | (4.0)
nice poem, gave me a lot to ponder, I like the visuals, "You formed in the station lights" and "Under the crooked streetlamp"

I have never been on a train but I believe it to be romantic. Or maybe sad depending if one was coming or going..

I see the tracks you speak of "hammers and ties laid by dead hands of men"
I personally follow the western genre most of all and think of the Chinese, and slaves building the tracks out west to a new land and a new world.
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Review of Gramma's Hands  
Review by Cody Wayne
Rated: E | (4.0)
I love the inspiration the story shows, grammas hands will always guide you. I see the grandmother's love for her granddaughter, her insecurity as she decided not to sell the bed spread after all, was it more sentimental than just an old lamp? Perhaps it was afterall her grandmother who had taught her just as she is teaching her young grand daughter. A well written story and I could relate and become a part of the story, as if I were an onlooker, another customer at the garage sale.
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Review by Cody Wayne
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
wow, what a great ending. surprised, but grateful the officer followed his training. daughter or not the terrorist was in the wrong and the officer did his duty to save more innocent lives. It was a well written and believable story. I enjoyed reading it.
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Review of Grave Warden  
Review by Cody Wayne
Rated: E | (4.0)
What a nice sonnet to those who may have otherwise been forgotten. I often walk around an empty graveyard and wonder who these people may have been, what they were like. Does anyone care or come to visit them? Your story was well written, and easy to follow. I could relate and read it to its entirety.
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Review of My Cat  
Review by Cody Wayne
Rated: E | (4.0)
I think this poem has good flow, and tells a warm story. Certainly animal lovers ask these things about their pets. Do we own our pets or do they own we? I like what you have here and it made me smile, as I could totally relate. Thank You
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Review by Cody Wayne
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Enjoyed the storyline.. The hunting dog,the outlaw, the buildup through the sign, the store, and the saloon. Good dialogue. I found humor, and found the story believable.
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Review of Cowboy Basics 101  
Review by Cody Wayne
Rated: E | (4.0)
Ha! certainly some things I suppose I always took for granted. I am an avid western movie watcher and reader, and hopefully a writer some day. I like to call myself a cowboy, but just wearing the hat doesn't make me one I know. I feel like your piece was well written, I found it humorous, but packed with good information as well. I did watch one of the Young Guns however where the bad guy went to the outhouse and was shot by Billy the Kid, while on the potty.. so I guess they did go on occasion. They ate Pheasant way out in Lincoln New Mexico where I don't believe one has ever lived.. Guess that's why they had to go digest.. anyway enough of my ramblings this is about you not me.. Thanks for the smile.
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Review of The midnight eyes  
Review by Cody Wayne
Rated: E | (4.0)
"set out for way to the far away" what a powerful statement. Travel to the unknown. Whether Pioneers on a wagon train, or an immigrant on a great sailing ship. What lies ahead? Will things be better or stay the same? "set out for way to the far away" has my mind wandering to those places I have never been. A bucket list full of new and exciting sight and sound. Is the grass greener on the other side? One may never know unless they travel over the great wall.
This short simple poem is encouraging and strong.


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Review of Quiet  
Review by Cody Wayne
Rated: E | (4.0)
adventure back to a lost relatives place? thank you for sharing, I feel your pain while reading this,of the silence, the cat, and things falling apart without her there to take care of it. Emotional yet beautifully poetic.
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Review of Iron and Ore  
Review by Cody Wayne
Rated: E | (4.0)
I like the storyline and I can feel the rumbling of the rail as the train passes, I can hear the chug chug of its engines. the colors you described in the beginning set the tone.. calming and peaceful.
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