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for entry "Easter Traditions
Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Well, BBW,

I just finished your piece about your Easter Tradition. It is a lot like my Easter. Momma bakes a big meal and the girls still love Easter Egg Hunts, although they are 13 and 12. My sister adopted them from China when they were little babies. The eggs are plastic and filled with prizes.

Your Friend,

Lesley


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Review of Men of Rocks  
Review by Lesley Scott
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello,

As usual, I loved your essay, "Men of Rocks." I watched an episode on the Discovery Channel, but it didn't tell the whole story. I really did learn a lot from your piece.

Sorry I've been out of touch so long. The weather is already hot and we've been planting and watering, biking, walking and taking care of the critters. I will soon be back when it gets in the 90s.

Your Friend,
Love,
Lesley
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Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: ASR | (2.5)
Hello,
I just reviewed your WDC Technical Support site. I am surprised we only have sixteen members. I thought there would be more. I just wanted to thank everyone involved in the Support Groups that they are doing a great job and have helped me out a lot of times.
Lesley
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Review of Boxer Pup  
Review by Lesley Scott
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, Maryann!
Your boxer image is so cute. Boxers are such great dogs. I love the little bandana. The groomers give Tinkerbelle one and she takes them off when we get home. I am als glad you didn't have his ears done. I have seen how the vets do the procedure, and it is awful. Also, the "ear job' is very painful for a long time.
Yours,
Lesley
ps I want to enter my whales as a sig, but can't figure out how. I will try some more and hope you might help some.
L.
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Review of A Fine Blade  
Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello, Chris,
I just finished reading your story, "A Fine Blade." I liked the characters and the plot. Poor Brand didn't understand the magic he held and it was his downfall. His sister,Pedra, begged him that he should keep Elton's sword and not just sell it at the market.
It was sad that Sentinel was stolen by the group who wanted the magic sword. "In the end, it didn't matter."

Lesley


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Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (2.5)
Hello,

I just finished reading your poem, "Money Isn't Every thing." It made me feel sad about people who don't have any monry for groceries. But the family will work hard and the family will survive.
Lesley


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Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
I like this contest. Of course I have to write something so I can enter. It is interesting to read about all the different places people are from! I am probably, most likely, to be in Charleston, South Carolina. It is a city with a lot of history and beautiful homes on the Battery where cannons still stand. I think I'll add that to my story! Wish me luck!
Lesley
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Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Hello,
I just finished reading your story again and will turn my husband on to it as well. From what I understand, the story, "God Came To Ray Daniel! A Mort Gay Tale." I found
it to be very spiritual and believeable. It was a good reason that God came to Ray Daniel. He was the one who follows God's commands. The others were not happy to see Ray Daniel conversing with God and tried very hard to meet and talk to God. Thanks for the Word Notes. I found them to be cool and maybe would be fun to include in my limited vocabulary.
Thanks for writing such an interesting story.
Lesley


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Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Hello, old Friend! I had a few minutes to check to see what I've been missing, WDC! You have a catagory for everything! You also have a lot going on. I always talk about you to my family. I say, "My Friend, Maryann this or Maryann told me..". Seriously, I admire your energy and using your skills and make it seem like, "Oh, yeah, that.."

I have to go outside and crawl into my sleeping bag. We have a tent in the yard. It's something like country folk in the city, sometimes I like to rough it even if I can see it outside my window.

I was trying to find a way to tell you about putting 15 year old terminally ill Ruf to sleep today. I haven't forgotten your losses, but it was something I had to tell you first. The Vet didn't charge me and we have a unique rapport. He knows because I am a vet tec, animal control officer and animal rights and Animal Consultant. We joke around about different drugs, how certain medications work the best. I've assisted him on a couple of surgeries on my two bunny boys. He had never done it, but I pleaded and told him how easy it would be. He did some research and talked to another specialty vets and we sailed through on a nice breeze and cool water!

So now, Ruf is in a better place. She was so damn sick, it made me feel sick. She was a gorgeous ball of fluff when I brought her home from whatever shelter or police Dept. I was working for at the time. Maryann, she was the lightest shade of charcol tabby and always and forever, she will keep those deep and sweet eyes. They are the color of a butterbean. I'd better get going now!
More later!
Love you!
L.


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Review of "Thank You RAOK"  
Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (3.5)
I was just surfing around on contests and activities and your site came into focus. I think that is one of the things that makes R.A.O K. All of you do so many kind things for us is almost too much. I don't know how Y'all can handle so many projects. I don't need an upgrade unless you can help me get my yellow suitcase. I lost it over a missunderstanding over a year ago and I have done well and I am proud of what I have done with WDC and I want to keep trying to make our world (WDC)less stressful.
Keep up the good work!
Love,
Lesley
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Review of Lost  
Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello, my Totoise Friend! I belong to the World Wide Turtle and Tortoise Rescue. Sometimes the president and I will mail different turtles to each other. There is a SC Herpetology Society here. I used to be the secretary. I've seen so many beautiful reptiles! Sorry, your name just made that thought pop into my head from years ago when I lived in the country on a large farm, raising and sellling mules and other equines.

I just wanted to comment on your poem, "Lost." In my limited judgement, your poem brought out feelings of sorrow as anyone should when someone is going to be killed. I've been following the Jodi Arison trial and I just turned on the TV to record because I have to have a cat euthanized in a little while. So to me, at this time, what are the odds? I just wanted to read your bio, and noticed the poem! How spooky is that?

I will try to read more poetry like yours. Maybe I will get up the nerve on day!

Your Friend,
Lesley

ps I am really a pacifist about all of God's creatures, even trees and weeds. Yet I have a dark hateful feeling when I look into her eyes, they have no feeling. When her team of lawyers is trying desperately to save her worthless life, she is not paying much, if any, attention. All that writing people see her doing, is actually sketching, drawing, and using palat chalk (I am an artist and pray someone noticed.) I she made a mockery of all of the unfortuante battered women! I've been around and I have a handle on how to judge animals. Jodie is easy to read. She enjoyes the limelight. If she goes back to prison, she will always find a way to be a star and have an "captured audience!"


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Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (3.5)
While looking present moment, the King noticed a pattern in the shapshots in the information of the camera' card that was recovered. even affer delitiing the items. The murderer though she knew what to do and how to stay, counted on the photos being erased. When the pictures, after many other tests was converted to the seasons they represented. The poems were easy to read the number and subject.

I plan is to add the story to my collectiom. I have been thinking for a while now, and have several in my mind I will share later.

Lesley


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Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello, Chris,
I just finished reading your short story, "From Under the willow Tree." The story started out peacefully, with Fae relaxing and sucking on a peach pit. It became a big spooky to find out about all of the "haunts" that Fae was able to see. At first, I thought she'd stumbled upon an old graveyard. The ending was a surprise to find out that Bucky was the evil one and the others were trying to warn her to stay away.
Keep up the Good Work!
Lesley


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Review of Acting  
Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Hi, Bob county,
I just now finised your short story,"Acting." You had me fooled. I really thought she was on the "casting couch" and was trying out an opportunity to be a porn star. I laughed out loud at the end of your funny story. It probably can happen anywhere! I am glad Jaspher could help her out, in more ways than one.
Lesley


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Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello, Bob!

I just finished reading your cool story, "Is Tom Cruise a Fascist." You are right on the mark about Scientology. I think it is to control others and deny what is right, ie: The refusial of medical care. How many have died? I think the pharmacutical companies are more out to sell drugs to line their pockets. Some of us truly need medication. I am Bipolar with ADHD and take a lot of different meds. I've tried to gradually wean myself from the drugs, but suffered one bad mishap after another. I finally had to spend five days in a hospital.

I do wish these foolish people could think for themselves and use common sense. I read the first book and thought is was a way to control others. I prefer reading Lao Tzu's work, "The Tao Te Ching," and several of the new translations. My favorite is "The Tao of Inner Peace." Anyone who wants to improve themselves and help save the world should include the Tao in their different readings. If I don't read some of the Tao everyday, I think about the verses I know."

Good Job!

Lesley

ps When the Jesus Freaks knock on my door to read me their scriptures, I say, "I am a Sage of the Tao."They walk away, confused. Why didn't one of them even ask about the Tao?


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Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hello, Keaton,

I checked out your port, but only had time to read your Bio. You have a lot of interesting tales to tell. I am thankful you spend time, writing for WDC. You have been a great help and inspiration for all of us. I will try to find a copy of "The Saphire Moon 2008." It will be easy to find with Barnes and Noble who will order the book or find it on Amazon. Barnes and Noble is easier. I do admire how versitile your writing can be. One time, I was checking out "Random Reviews," and the first four were writen by you! Each piece had its own personality. I don't write poetry, but love reading your poems.

I have to go work on the garden now.

Keep Up the Good Work!
Your Friend, and Fan,
Lesley


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Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Hello,
I just finished your story entry, ""There's Another Side; Accomplised." I really did think it was the kind of story that I enjoy reading. The story had a lot going on, and was unpredictable. So, "THE SEVENTH SON OF A SEVENTH SON" with an interest in the paranormal. It was a good read!
Lesley


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Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello,
I can't believe how many of us have bought so many tickets. I just found out about the raffle and all I could think of was Ann. I already bought tickets from The WDC Power Reviewers' raffle and gave out several tickets to some of my friends. again, I am super-impressed with the number of supporters!
Great Job!
Lesley
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Review of Homecoming  
Review by Lesley Scott
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Hello, OOTster Bunny!

I love your handle. I just finished reading your story, "Home Coming." I remember those kinds of thoughts when I was younger. I had a lot of different boyfriends and loved each one of them. We are still on good terms. One of my favorites calls me from across the country in Idaho just to tell me he loves me, still. We met when he was a cop and I was an animal control officer.

I can recall aching for my husband, now, he is always with me and our sexlife is greater than before. I think that Sheila and Tony have something real special and share the same feeling for each other. I hope they get married, or live together forever.

Keep On Writing,
Lesley


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Review of THE RAPIDS  
Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello, Be Diane,

I just finished reading your story, "The Rapids." I enjoyed it and thought it was a really cool. It sounds like Whitewater Park, in Mariety, Georgia is an exiting place to visit. I delivered a horse in Marietta. We passed Atlanta's awful traffic, pulling a horse trailer!

Your description of the water slide was good. It sounds like fun. I hope you get up the nerve for "DRAGON TAIL."

Keep on Writing,
Lesley


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Review of Warning  
Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello, again, Keaton,

I have always enjoyed your writing. I thought it was funny that your item number has 666 in it. Your poem, "Warning," is true, I think. I hope I understand your poem as you wrote. I found it similar to "The Tao Te Ching." The verses are profound.

Again, I did like your poem and will read it to my husband. He loves to write poetry.

Your Friend,
Lesley


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Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (3.0)
Hello, Red Writing Hood,
I like your handle, it is cool.

I just finished reading your information on your newsletter about American Tanka. I thought it was a good analogy, comparing the poetry to pork chops, and spicy beef, grasshopper, the "Meaning of life." I found the style of Tanka interesting. I don't write poetry very well. My husband is really into poetry. I will let him read your item.

Keep on Writing!
Lesley





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Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello, Greg,
I just finished reading your fiction story, "The Legend of the What Cat." I enjoyed your theory of how the universe and how earth was formed. It was a fun idea of using animals to creat everything. Knaliq and Iblis were very creative.
Keep Writing,
Lesley


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Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Hello, Zoo,

I just finished your funny story, "Trave;omg in a Fried out Combe." I have never heard of a combie. Now I know and I can identify with breaking down or having a traffic accident with animals. "The Exquiste Ghose" is a cool name for how your combe ended up on the side of the road. In my last accident, I totalled my Toyota and have to depend on either my mother or husband for rides.

I also love animals, myself, and had a mule breeding farm for 30 years. I kept all sorts of critters because I had the room and I am also a veterinary assistant and an animal control officer. So I was able to keep my vet bills low and even make payments.

I worked for a veterinay surgeon for eight years and they did work for me either free or at cost. He neutered my rabbits and spayed my dog. I have also worked with buffalo, ostrich, many reptiles and alligators. I even wrote a good and exciting alligator story and one about a bull elk attack. "Raccoon Kisses" is also one of my true stories.

Again, I enjoyed your story!
Keep on Writing!
Lesley


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Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: ASR | (3.0)
Hello, Prowperous Snow,

I just finished your poem, "The First Day of Might." I thought you came up with a good title about a person, not something else. It is romantic that Might's first day was dawn. Strolling with his girl friend, I am guessing, was realistic. I can just imagine the feel of feet walking on a side walk and smell the freshness of dawn.

keep Writing!
L.


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