I just finished reading your powerful piece of poetry! It really blew me away. When I saw "nature" as one genre, I had to read it because I am a real animal freak. But when I read the first verse, I thought it might be over my head. But I concentrated and drew mental pictures, and was a bit like the Greek Mythology, but on a more realistic note. The words became less thundersome and tapered down to the gentleness of the last verse, "She smiled at him and lingered there, her red hair like a solar ray. And then she swam out in the sea, it's her we celebrate today."
Keep up the Good Work!