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Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Hello,

I just finished reading your story, "I Didn't Know Buffaloes Could Fly." I never understood why the spicy chicken wings came to be called "Buffalo Wings." I know about real life buffalo. I raised one from a small calf. When he decided to run and play, he would swaps sides with no effort. He was flying. I wrote a story about him and even have our photo in my port. I did enjoy reading about your love for spicy chicken wings.
Lesley



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Review of Anomanunka  
Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (2.5)
Hello, again, Turtle,

I just finised reading your Indian Legend, and the story of "Anonmanunksa." I love reading stories about the Native Americans and their customs. I feel ashamed for what the white man has done to such a noble race. Your story was toutching when Anomanlnka only wanted his wife back when the Chief offered him anything he wanted.
Keep on Writiing,
Lesley



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Review of Paths  
Review by Lesley Scott
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello, Turtle,

I just finished reading your poem, "Paths." I have read some of your work before and always liked it. The poem you wrote is very spirtual for me. I read a lot of spirtual books, including Lao Tzu's teaching in the "The Toa Te Ching." the Toa has been translated almost as many times as the Bible and I have read several versions. "The path to peace is tolerance."

Keep on Writing,
Lesley



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Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Hello, Prosperous Snow,

I just finished reading your short story, "Pretend You Enjoy It." Somehow I don't think that is exactly what Aunt Clara meant at the time. It is so unselfish of you to get into your husband's hobbies. Doing things together does make for a long and happy marriage. Great advice!
Lesley



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Review by Lesley Scott
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (3.0)
Hello, Alfred,

I just finished reading you essay, "A Lesson in Intepriation," and though I don't write much poetry, I enjoy reading it whenever I can. Since I read you instuctional essay, I may even try my hand at a poem and see where that leads. I like knowing I don't need to puncturate, or pursue other styles.
Keep on Writing,
Lesley



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Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello,

I just finished reading your poem, "Sires of the moon." I am very interested in Native Americans' culture and history and know about "The Trail of Tears." Your poem was moving and captured my attention. I don't write poetry, myself, but love to read it whenever I have the chance.
Keep On Writing,
Lesley



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Review by Lesley Scott
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: ASR | N/A (Review only item.)
Hello, again,

I just read the new version of "The Basement." It is such a scary story, it gives me goose bumps. The way it was written is really cool. You really have quite an unusual imagination. It is one of my favorite storys.

What did you do with the ant story? I liked it a lot. Did you delete it and purge the 55 word story?

Yours,
Lesley
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Review of Night Reigns  
Review by Lesley Scott
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: ASR | (3.5)
Hello, JAMcD,

I just finished reading your story, "Night Reigns." At first, I thought the sirens were warning the people about some disaster, like a fire or an injured person. As I read on, my emotions were in high gear. You must be a fan of Dean Koontz and Stephen King.
Lesley


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Review of NO ONE!  
Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Hello, Jaiam,

I just now finished reading your poem, "No One!" I can tell this girl means everything to you and holds your heart in her hand. Love is a wonderful gift and we should all be lucky to find just the right person. Some of us are still looking!
Lesley


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Review of Brother Wayne  
Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Heelo, again!

I just finishedreading your poem about your brother, "Brother Wayne." It is a very emotional poem and it made me remember how many soldiers were affected and many died. I lost several friends and those who came back were never the same. "Rest in Peace, Wayne."
Lesley


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Review of Respect  
Review by Lesley Scott
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello, Old Warrior,

I just finished reading your poem, "Respect." I liked the way the words flowed and the message that it carries. We all have the right to choose and have within us the means to create eternal bliss. I also agree with the first sentence, "It's hard to see and tough to judge, this thing we call respect."
Keep on Writing,
Lesley


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Review of Sacred Presence  
Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (3.0)
Hello,

I just finished reading your poem, "Sacred Presence by Kings." It is an inspirational type of poetry that tells of how Jesus Christ brought meaning and forgiveness to a lost soul. He cast away your gilt and fear, he made you feel his love and gave you what you needed to hold yourself high.
Good Work!
Lesley


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Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (3.0)
Hello,

I just finished reading your short story, "Ringing in your head." It was easy to read and realistic. I felt bad for Bryan, out getting drunk because Amber didn't want to marry him was my impression. The end was a pleasant surprise. He had asked Amber's sister, Joyce to marry him and she said yes. All Bryan could think to say was, "Ohhhh...kay."
Good Work!
Lesley


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Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: ASR | (3.5)
Hello, Spidey!

I just hacked into your port and read your true story,"The Gift of Goodbye." Did you win "The Writers Cramp?" The short story is certainly good enough. It is very sweet that twin Girls were born on Pa-Pa's bithday. I loved the closeness they had with their Polish grandfather. The ending was bittersweet. A gift of goodbye is a great gift.
Your Friend,
Lesley


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Review of Hysteria  
Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello, again, Spidey! This must be the third time I've reviewed your work. I just finished reading, "Hysteria." I like the way it flows and the way you have the first letter in each line. I don't remember what that style is called. The poem has your usual flow and unique choice of words.
Keep Up the Good Work!
Lesley


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Review of Webs  
Review by Lesley Scott
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: ASR | (3.0)
Hello, Again, Spidey,

I just finished your poem you wrote for the Micro-fiction Contest, "Webs." I found it to be an original subject. I am also interested in spiders and feel bad when they eat insects, but that's nature. I like feeding grasshoppers to those real big spiders! I really did like the surprise ending, "I found you!" he growled, and I cowered in the corner, helpless in his trap."
Good Work!
Lesley


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Review of World War 3  
Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (3.0)
Hello,

I just finished reading your poem, "World War 3." I find it interesting, the style. I don't know much about poetry, which is why I try to read as much as I can. The rhyming pattern:a-b-a-b-a-b-c-c sounds difficult to write. I think that someone who writes poetry has an unusual gift from God.
Lesley


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Review of Eden  
Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: ASR | (3.5)
Hello,Spidey,

I just finished reading your poem, "Eden." The words flow and fit together well. The tone is one of depression. The last part says it all, "I try to capture it like a photograph, but the film never develops and I remain hopeless." That is a very good way to put it!
Lesley


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Review of Give Me A Reason  
Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Hello, Krysha,
I just finished your funny poem, "Give me a Reason." You describe an alcoholic perfectly. I have been clean and sober now for 13 years and it took a lot of courage. I went into detox and went ahead and quit smoking, as well! Your poem is entertaining!
Lesley


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Review by Lesley Scott
In affiliation with Happy Place Contest Members  
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hi, Hamilton,

I just finished reading your powerful piece of poetry! It really blew me away. When I saw "nature" as one genre, I had to read it because I am a real animal freak. But when I read the first verse, I thought it might be over my head. But I concentrated and drew mental pictures, and was a bit like the Greek Mythology, but on a more realistic note. The words became less thundersome and tapered down to the gentleness of the last verse, "She smiled at him and lingered there, her red hair like a solar ray. And then she swam out in the sea, it's her we celebrate today."

Keep up the Good Work!
Lesley


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Review of LOTS OF WORDS  
Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Hey, there !

I just finished reading your stories and poems. You are blessed with talent. "Listen to others--" You wrote that you had a special gift for poety. You belonged to the "New Horizons Academy and you really did well and took away what you would leave at school,
Keepon doing it!


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Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Hello, I just finished reading your humorfull accounts of you and the rest of th family. I thought it was so funny that your family iived in Italy. And went to pubic school. I'l bet that was challenging. The poem sums it up: "May memories in the mind. If they were bad, may they be forgotten in time. Never lose the gift to share a few lines.Of joy and laughter from your heart so fine."

Keep it up!
Lesley


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Review by Lesley Scott
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello,

I just finished your short story, "Hooves of Fire." I liked the length which includes just as much or more than the tedious longer items.I thought the ending was so funny. I didn't expect it at all. The bull typed the verse and when he finished, he just had to eat the pages he typed. "It was the best story I ever have eaten.

Good work!
Lesley


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Review of Brainstormers Sig  
Review by Lesley Scott
In affiliation with The Brainstormers Group  
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello, there, Deanna,

I really do like a lot of the lovely art work you now have. I sent my URL so you can read of my joy and other wise. The last time I went to the hospital, I didn't want to leave. I made a lot of friends, the food was wonderful and we took our meds after we ate. I didn't even know it was Thanksgiving until we were served the traditional food!

Your Friend,
Lesley
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Review of Brainstormers Sig  
Review by Lesley Scott
In affiliation with The Brainstormers Group  
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello, Deanna,
We have been such strangers and i don't know why. It is probably because I haven't been in contact lately. I was in the hospital twice and had a mess to clean after I came home. We've been planting and working so hard before summer comes around. The temps here are wonderful.

I had my 15 year old cat to sleep last week. She has hypothalimis problems and the medicine wasn't helping. I felt like she was in a better place.

So sometimes, I rarely cut on my computer to check my email.

Your Friend,
Lesley

ps How much is the registation fee and how to I get it to you? I want to be a part of "The Brainstormers."
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