All I can say is beautiful! That is my goal in life. And the cat is a purrrrfect gift. They will always be there for you. I loved the way you described surroundings. I felt as though I was there with the cat. It made me forget i was at work.
I know what you mean. There is sorrow when the heart is heavy. But there is also joy. It's how we respond. We may not be able to control a situation but we can control how we listen and react. I loved your poem. straight to the point. I like that alot.
I would say to first find out who you are before and then you will know what you are looking for in life and in someone.I would then advise to reread your poem and fix some of the errors. But other then that, it was good.
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I understand the struggle of writing and feeling as though no one is watching or reading your words. But this place will show you that you are being heard. I liked what you wrote. The struggles and the thought of never giving up. Which is a good thing. Never give up. I'll tell you this, even if no one reads my stories I will leave them to my family. A little piece of me that they will always remember me by, and that is worth writing about. Never give up and good luck.
Hello. What a sad story about a girl that never feels enough. I liked it. The poem demostrated what she feels and how she is dealing with it. very good. keep on writing.
Hello, cute story. I really like it. the only thing I am concern about is "Time was running out" I believe its Time is running out, Not sure if that will disqualify you? Good luck! keep on writing.
this is a cute story! all you really gotta do is eat morderation and exercise. losing weight is something that takes time. especially for woman. anyhow. i liked how this went. it kept my interest. keep on writing.
Hello, I really liked your poem. It was written with well words to describe the incident of the matter. Love is dying and this person is willing to fight till the end. as we all do for the one's we love. it if it means to endure some toxicity along the way. The point is not to get lost in the process. Keep writing.
I liked how you managed to keep my interest. the writng was very intricate, unraveling itself to the conclusion that the reason why everyone was running around was beacuse of narrator. Was not expecting that. Keep on writing.
This reminds me of Noah's ark, type of situation. THere is always hope at our darkest hour. Even if we cannot see it at the time. Good poem. I liked it.
Ah, hope. The true villain in the story. I know because I was once there. Good thing that veil falls off and we discover the truth. Nothing wrong with hope but reality eventually kicks in. Good poem. It hit a memory in my past and for that its a good one. Keep on writing.
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