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Review of Winding Up Clocks  
Review by Serena Blade
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Very interesting story. I like it. Nothing really to say, other than I wish it would say what happened, how it ended. but that is the beauty of horror. The imagination can go in so many ways. Keep on writing.
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for entry "April 15, 2021
Review by Serena Blade
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I have no words. But thank you for the mention! This inspires me to continue on my journey! I was lost but did not know it at the time. appreciate it.


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Review by Serena Blade
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I liked your story. She actually killed the count, smartly. the song, Fils de l'Amour, I looked it up and listened to it while I read the story. It almost felt as though I was watching a scene from an old movie. Good job. Keep on writing.


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Review of Cycle of Terror  
Review by Serena Blade
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
that was entertaining and funny. The fact that it is in the child's imagination! it was cool and it had me hooked. Especially the part about the Christmas competition. Bravo to you! Keep on writing.


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for entry "Tripping Out
Review by Serena Blade
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
What an interesting story. I liked it. Definitely something that can grow into a mini series. Congrats on the win. Let's keep on writing.


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Review of Interview  
Review by Serena Blade
Rated: E | (4.5)
that was pretty good. I enjoyed it. keeps my interest till the end. keep on writing.


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Review of Booger Bodies  
Review by Serena Blade
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This story has great potential in becoming more. Gave me this whole invasion of the body snatchers. I would be okay if I had a black dot by my name. I like it a lot. I would recommend to re-read it, as it has a few grammar issues. Keep on writing :)


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for entry "Slow Down!
Review by Serena Blade
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Interesting story. I am assuming this was not death. This was an entity taking their lives for an unknown reason. which I find rather unsettling. I like how it went straight to the point. Keep on writing.


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Review of 2 am  
Review by Serena Blade
Rated: E | (1.5)
Good start. If I may, maybe add a little bit more about what they might be doing the next day? worried about something? The night, while everyone sleeps, is a good time for the mind to go bonkers. This is also the time were the mind refuses to sleep because there is so much to contemplate.

keep writing.


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Review of Falling  
Review by Serena Blade
Rated: E | (4.5)
what a scary thought. being so high up in the sky and the parachute wont open. I like how it goes to the point, short and sweet. Not too much but enough to peek my interest. Nothing much to say about it.


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Review of As Night Falls  
Review by Serena Blade
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Interesting story. I like how it insinuated that it might be zombies or aliens. Then it turns out to be something different. Short and sweet. I like it. I do recommend to reread it, as it does have a few grammar issues. Other then that, its good for short story. keep on writing.


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Review by Serena Blade
Rated: E | (2.5)
Nice way of starting a stereotypical story. Caught my attention. Now I wish to know how they cheated death. Keep writing as I would like to know how it ends.


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Review by Serena Blade
Rated: E | (2.5)
Interesting way of starting a story. So far it caught my attention. Just wish it continued to see what happened in the end. This kind of left me hanging, like the edge of a mountain. :) Keep on writing. Sounds really promising.


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Review of Limbo.....six  
Review by Serena Blade
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello! I am happy to see that you are continuing to write the story, as it peaks my interest every time I finish the chapter. I want more. I think the Mom is my favorite character so far. There really isn't anything I can say about this chapter, other then its really good and ready for the next chapter.

keep writing!


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Review of Limbo.....five  
Review by Serena Blade
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
the way this chapter ended, its good. i like how you introduced a new character. She sounds like a big part of this story. Simple, yet sweet. Good job. Cannot wait for the next part!


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Review of ......Limbo...4  
Review by Serena Blade
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is truly an interesting transformation. From Angel to Demon. I like the idea of how the story is going. I like it so far. I would recommend to re-read it as there are a few grammar issues. Nothing too serious. Overall, great job. Keep on writing.
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Review by Serena Blade
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
all I can say is that this is a pretty good start of a story. It kept my attention and would like to continue to know the rest of what happens. keep on writing. Interesting, indeed.


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Review by Serena Blade
Rated: E | (2.0)
Not bad of a story. Really short and straight to the point. I like that. I would recommend to re-read it as there are some grammar issues. But that is all right since that is why we are here. To help each other out. I would probably expand the other two suspects since you only explained the third. why were the other 2 considered suspects. Keep on writing. :)


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Review by Serena Blade
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I actually liked the story. different. I do hope things change for him. Nice moral of the story. be patient! At least that is what I got from it.

keep writing.
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Review of Best Friends  
Review by Serena Blade
Rated: E | (3.0)
Good start. Is this the end? I feel like it has yet to finish? I like how you introduce the characters and how you explain who they are.
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Review of A New Dawn Ch.1  
Review by Serena Blade
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
So far so good. I like how it runs smooth and straight to the point. I'm not really into fantasy but this one had my attention. Rajiin is a witch and I like witch stories.
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Review by Serena Blade
Rated: E | (4.0)
interesting. liked it. it was short but it was enough to understand what was going on.
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Review of My First Romance  
Review by Serena Blade
Rated: E | (4.0)
I liked it. You told a story from top to bottom. Expressed how it shattered but how she / he will come back up. not allowing this to take them down. Well said.
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Review by Serena Blade
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
Let me first say, congrats on writing your first short story. I did like where your story was going but I feel as though its missing pieces of how it elaborated and then ended. what is the history of this house. Why was the boy suddenly interested into going into this house? why was he cursed? I got the base of it but there is no connection. I did not connect to the story. I liked it , It just needs balance. To believe he was cursed when he sealed his fate, while entering an abandon house. Give the reader a reason to care.

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Over all, I think you have a great foundation. Keep at it. Never give up. I hope I was not being harsh. My intention is for you to succeed.
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Review by Serena Blade
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
some of us can be monsters. But I have hope for some that are willing to change. I liked it. A little creepy with the thought that a person can be capable of such terrible things. good writing.
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