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Review of Sara Castic  
Review by Lewok
Rated: 13+ | (2.5)
she's very bluntly right........ the only thing she didnt talk about was the idiots who have bad grammar..... the truth hurts =I
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Review by Lewok
Rated: E | (1.5)
personally i think the story shouldve at least had the option for something with an alien experiment
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Review by Lewok
Rated: 13+ | (2.0)
you gotta give at least some background for the story dude. and you do know that jerry doesnt have magic anymore and therefore cant summon a changing table?
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Review by Lewok
Rated: 18+ | (1.0)
You REALLY need to work on your grammar
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Review by Lewok
Rated: ASR | (3.0)
It's stories like this that makes me wish I could watch them instead of reading them.
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Review by Lewok
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
The story was a good idea but the spelling and gramatical errors gave me a headache
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Review by Lewok
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Very nice, I can see you put slot of work Into this story. And it really payed off
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Review by Lewok
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
All great story ideas. I just wish people would get creative and start adding to it :(
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Review by Lewok
Rated: 18+ | (3.0)
I'll be honest I found this story while looking for age regression and diaper fetish stuff and from what I've read it almost completely muscle growth. Still decent concept and story :)
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Review of Magic Story  
Review by Lewok
Rated: 18+ | (1.0)
I'm sorry and I don't mean to sound like a dick or anything but this story just had way to many choices. Pretty much the story went choice sentence Nother choice next sentence. It was literally impossible to get into just a little less choices and a little more sustenance for the story dude.
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