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Review of Flying South  
Review by Lil Gidget
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I can completely relate to this on a personal level. it was beautifully written and im glad I got the chance to be able to read it. looking forward to reading more of your pieces. truly amazing and heart felt piece thank you once again for the read.
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Review of The Diagnosis  
Review by Lil Gidget
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
really nicely written short story. kept my attention the whole way threw until the end. very interesting dialog and full of great detailed information to the reader. not drawn out but and right to the point. well written and enjoyed every bit of it. thanks for writing and sharing this piece.
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Review of Toressa  
Review by Lil Gidget
Rated: E | (5.0)
really like the lyrics of this song. do you sing? would love to hear it to music one day. have you ever thought about selling your lyrics so someone can sing them for you if not interested in perusing your self? your really good might be a great way to make some money and a career. just a thought. but your really good loved the song.
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Review by Lil Gidget
Rated: E | (5.0)
really enjoyed doing this quiz. im pretty sure I got most of them right as I know a lot about him being baptized and a church person. I mite have mixed up a couple things I was confused about but went with my gut. please let me know how I did. im excited to see how well I did or bad. gives me room to grow.
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Review by Lil Gidget
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
really enjoyed this you should try selling it see if they can make a movie or something with this in it. its very interesting and has a nice dialog. the flow fits with everything nicely and the action in it makes ya want to keep reading until the very end. was a really great written piece and happy I got to read it thanks for sharing .
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Review by Lil Gidget
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
really a well written piece for sure. It has it all, death, action, drama, passion. who would not be able to not keep reading this story?. it was amazing read by far. love how it flows the connection you share with your writing. it keeps the reader interested. thanks for sharing.
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Review by Lil Gidget
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
love this story has a lot of emotion and drama and well written dialog. its very interesting to read, keeps the readers attention to want to continue reading till the end. love the flow and how everything fits together perfectly. very well written, loved the read thanks for sharing.
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Review by Lil Gidget
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
amazing read the words jumped right off the page it was so interesting to read. loved the piece and how it was written. it was very well written and put together, loved the flow and the adventure this shared. I really enjoyed reading this piece kept me interested and really was excited to find out what happened next. thanks for the read.
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Review by Lil Gidget
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
really like how the words just jump of the page and speak to me. its really well written and interesting read. love the way its put together the way it all flows together at every aspect. you put a lot of detail and passion in your writing and its very noticeable. thanks for the lovely piece to read.
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Review by Lil Gidget
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
very nicely written and put together. loved the adventure in this piece, the flow of everything coming together, made everything interesting and wanting to know more. kept my interested till the end and waiting to see and figure out what was going to happen next. very well written cant wait to see more from you. thanks for the read loved it.
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Review by Lil Gidget
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
wow. very interesting piece. I loved reading this, kept me into the entire thing till the end and on my toes wanting more. loved the action, was very exciting almost like you were at a real MMA fight or something. very nice flow to this and keeps the readers attention. would very much like to read more from you.
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Review by Lil Gidget
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
really enjoyed this piece, lots of detail and passion in your writing. its very adventurous. love how it flows every step threw each thing that happens. keeps me focused and wanting to read more and keeps me intrigued to find out what's going to happen next. thanks for the read really well written.
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Review by Lil Gidget
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I really liked reading this. you should try publishing this and see if they will make a movie with it or something. its very interesting keeps my focus and attention to figure out the ending, lots of detail and everything flows together really nicely. well written and very amusing loved reading thanks for sharing.
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Review by Lil Gidget
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
very enjoyable read, made me laugh so much as well as shake my head, if only we got a dollar every time something like this happened to us. very well put together, nice flow and a lot of passion shows in your writing. very interesting kept full attention threw to the end. very pleasant read thanks for sharing.
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Review of Bugs in Amber  
Review by Lil Gidget
Rated: E | (5.0)
lots of detail and passion went in to writing this piece. It was very nice to read. it kept my attention and stayed interesting to the very end. was very well written and has a great flow where everything that happens fits together with ease. very nice read thanks for sharing.
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Review of Fallen  
Review by Lil Gidget
Rated: E | (5.0)
what's sad about this is that its so many dogs real outcome. BUT least this dog got away and new what she wanted out of life. a home where she could be treated right and loved. out of everything she went threw and all the feelings that dog had to face she still wanted the love and respect of a human. which in noticing that is the same feelings for every dog around and to some this is exactly what they face. poor creatures. loved reading this happy it had a nice ending and that it shows others who reads this to open there hearts to those with 4 legs.
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Review by Lil Gidget
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
there is nothing wrong with breaking tradition. there is so many different ones in the world to break any. what one family has doesn't always work for each family member and they should be allowed to carry there own. I really liked reading this reminds people of religions and different beliefs and traditions may work for some and not for others, when even if they don't sometimes the right thing is to just go with the flow so everyone is happy. Know one can change what another person does but with open arms and welcoming all like the church you speak of is the best and only way to get people to see what change is really about. what's important no matter what their religion is they open there arms to all and welcome everyone regardless there differences to warn change and live happier healthier lives and that's what is important. that is what I got out of this. liked reading it thanks
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Review by Lil Gidget
Rated: ASR | N/A (Review only item.)
loved this piece omg, too funny at times, reminding me of many times in my life. picture at the end was a great touch, beautifully written. Has nice flow and feeling in this. lots of detail and well planned out dialog. really was an enjoyable read and kept me entertained right down the very end. very nice piece thank you.
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Review by Lil Gidget
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
a lot of power and emotions flow in this piece. nicely written with flow. spoke to me on a few different levels and really enjoyed reading this. there is always hope, love and peace in unspoken and spoken words as well as unanswered prayers. We just have to open our hearts and soul and know where to look and when to listen, to our inner self. we always carry the answers and the strength we just don't always know it and often don't listen to our inner soul. loved this piece thanks for the read.
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Review by Lil Gidget
Rated: ASR | N/A (Review only item.)
nicely written. enjoyed the punch lines, very well planned out and detailed. made me laugh several times and easy to follow your story. had a really nice flow to it and never a dull moment. kept me intrigued to continue reading and interested to find out the ending. thanks for the awesome read.
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Review of Talismans  
Review by Lil Gidget
Rated: E | (3.5)
it took me a bit to figure out what it said, however I got the just of it. I find it enlightening but in some parts hard to follow. the detail is nice, creates a nice picture that people can see to imagine what you were thinking when writing this piece. very nice flow to it.
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Review of A Tangled Web  
Review by Lil Gidget
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I actually can relate to this, as newly married ive had a heck of a time. We seem to be actually struggling quite a bit. he hasn't been trying to be with anyone nor have I. But reading this it really does show what a marriage needs. Understanding, trust, loyalty and commitment and not just some of the time, but all the time. It needs work every day and night. It also needs a sense of communication and a share of space as well, as spending too much time together can drive people insane. What this shows and tells people that doesn't matter what is going wrong, when you think your making the right decision and ya just want out. Marriage is about taking a step back gathering information and going back in clear headed and calm. where there is a better out come. Ya get to realizes why you were together and got married in the first place and find the strength to push threw and fix and work on your marriage. Which is the best outcome, Divorce shouldn't be an option. Marriage takes team work, and a lot of it . thanks for the read.
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Review of Imponderables  
Review by Lil Gidget
Rated: E | (5.0)
I feel as though I'm in a mall possibly walking by a food card and vendors or something. I was caught in the reading made me feel as though I was there, was truly an amazing read thank you for that. it keeps you interested from start to finish.
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Review by Lil Gidget
Rated: E | (5.0)
Omg Loved reading this really touched home base with me. Christmas is my favorite time of year, cause I love throwing snow balls and spending time with family and the kids as well. very nice story well written and kept me interested and intrigued to see what would happen next, so I could continue reading love that in a story.
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Review of The Machine  
Review by Lil Gidget
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
being a soldier I can relate to this story. I really like the detailed outlook in your writing. I like how it keeps ya interested to the very end and it doesn't drag. you did a really good job in writing this piece, was a very well written and straight to the point story thank you very much for the read.
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