Bogus- Where is the end! Okay- the story is awesome. I love Matthew's reflections and it makes him so much more real to the reader. It's so tangible and I feel like I would be smacking my head up against a wall if I met a girl like her. I wish I knew the Mississippi river like they see it. My Mississippi is muddy and murky with a bog of eternal stench feel, usually it floods the road. (I'm from St. Louis)
Thank you for the entry-positively loved it!
I love the imagery and even the tangent about his sister. I especially liked the medusa turning him into stone by the way she looked in the moonlight. It was very mysterious as a whole piece and a reader gets drawn into the mystical parts of it, even though he not a werewolf and she not a mythological creature.
Thanks for the story
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