Written nicely. I enjoyed it and look forward to seeing more. The story has a good rhythm. I was hoping that the girl would take him back. Wouldn't change a word. Would love to read more of your stories.
Lol. Lmao. I truly enjoyed your story. It makes you wonder what animals think of us humans. There's vegetables, nuts, grains and other stuff we can eat. But we can't help but yearn for more than that. It makes one wonder why we eat what we do. Keep on writing.
I lived in NY for over 30 years before moving to Tampa. Though at times I miss the cold, I wouldn't move back North. TOO COLD. But I would love to see snow just one more time. I do miss snowball fights and making snow angels. Enjoy the cold weather. I look forward to reading more of your items.