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Review of Strength Beyond  
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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This review is from Lisa Noe Kittyluv um Puppyluv *Cat**Dog2*


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Hello Jay O'Toole , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: the structure of this item is using only one long verse.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme is an abundance of love.

*Moon* Flow: the item flowed beautifully.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation was correct

*Sun* tone: the tone is loving

the title, " Sonnet: " Strength Beyond" you really don't need to have sonnet as part oif the title.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: your work is beautiful congratulations.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.


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Review of AMENDS: a sonnet  
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Rated: E | (4.0)



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Hello Dr M C Gupta , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: the item is structured using three quatrains and a couplet you have created a sonnet.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: talking about making amends and living the straight and good.


*Moon* Flow: the item flowed alright, the grammar was okay as was the spelling.

*Exclaim* punctuation: punctuation was correct.

*Sun* tone: the tone is eratic

*Strawberry* Title: the title, "Amends: a sonnet" is appropriate for the item,
I do not think that you need to write sonnet as part of the title, it takes away from the item.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.


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#2102427 by Lisa Noe Kittyluv um Puppyluv


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Review of IF ONLY...  
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello Joy , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: structured using a couple of lines maybe 4 or 5.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme is being bitten by a mouse and getting caught off guard with a visitor.

*Moon* Flow: I thought the item flowed well enough.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation is okay.

*Sun* tone: the tone is erratic

*Strawberry* Title: the title is "If Only", which is appropriate for the item,

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I have no suggestions for you, I thought your work can staned on its own.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.


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#2102427 by Lisa Noe Kittyluv um Puppyluv


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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello {suser: }, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme is words of wisdom, A quote.

*Moon* Flow: I guess you can say it flowed well.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation was okay

*Sun* tone: the tone is promising and uplifting

*Strawberry* Title: the title, "Quotes and Words of Wisdom" is appropriate and it is all in caps which puts emphasis on it.



*StarfishB* Suggestions: you don't need to change anything, it is all good.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.


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#2102427 by Lisa Noe Kittyluv um Puppyluv


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Review of Pocomoonshine  
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello Lou-Here By His Grace , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this item is structured using about
nine stanzas

*Butterfly2r* Theme: pocomoonshine lake

*Moon* Flow: I thought the item flowed well. the grammar was good.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation was good.

*Sun* tone: the tone was also good and smooth

*Strawberry* Title: the title is appropriate.



*StarfishB* Suggestions: I think it is a very good poem.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.I thought you did a really good job.


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#2102427 by Lisa Noe Kittyluv um Puppyluv


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Review of An Inspector  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Poseyp*Title: An Inspector

*Poseyp*Author: Madeleine

*Poseyp*Type: Poetry

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*Poseyp*First Impression: Hello, I am judging this item because you are an entrant in A Story-Poem Contest, Thanks for entering. This was a nice story-poem, but I have to say I did have a little bit hard time following it. The grammar and spelling all seemed good. The title was appropriate for the item.

*Poseyp*Suggestions: I would suggest that you read this story poem
out loud to yourself and see what you think about it.

*Poseyp*Conclusion: Thank you so kindly for entering my contest, I want to wish you good luck and say I hope you will enter again next month. have fun with your writing and God Bless You!

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Review of The real witches  
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello Chris Breva Congrats on20WDC!! , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this item was structured using three stanzas and a couplet.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme is girls accused of being witches who were not.

*Moon* Flow: the item flows well and the grammar and spelling are okay

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation was correct and the word usage was good.

*Sun* tone: sorrowful

*Strawberry* Title: The title, "The Real Witches", is appropriate for this item.


*StarfishB* Suggestions: I hope I got the right take on this I am not really sure.

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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.


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A Story-Poem Contest!!!  (E)
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#2102427 by Lisa Noe Kittyluv um Puppyluv


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Review of Eternity Howls  
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello (suser:crissy}, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this item is structured in sort of a unique way with about nine stanzas and a few stray lines.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: where will you spend eternity?

*Moon* Flow: the flowe= was well and I think also the grammar and spelling are good.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation seems correct

*Sun* tone: the tone is inquizative

*Strawberry* Title: The title, "Eternity Howls", Is appropriate for this item.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I Hope my eternity is with Jesus, God knows I am trying to follow His example, but I have to get down the one about getting angry very quickly but I am praying about it and trying.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.


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A Story-Poem Contest!!!  (E)
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#2102427 by Lisa Noe Kittyluv um Puppyluv


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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello {suser: }, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this item is structured in what looks like perhaps two parts

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme is the silence of a mountain in the universe a I
believe.

*Moon* Flow: I thought the piece flows well with good grammar and spelling

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation was good and I liked the word usage.

*Strawberry* Title: the title, "vibrenergy: translation" is a bit odd but it will work for this poem.

*Dragonflyp* Image:
I can just envision a beautiful majestic mountain reaching to the Heaven

*StarfishB* Suggestions: This was a nice poem.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.


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A Story-Poem Contest!!!  (E)
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#2102427 by Lisa Noe Kittyluv um Puppyluv


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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello River , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: This is structured using a list format of ten items.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme of this item is the ten countries you'd like to visit.

*Moon* Flow: there was no flow to this item. because it was just a list.
the spelling was okay.

*Exclaim* punctuation: there were only periods used.

*Sun* tone: there was no tone

*Strawberry* Title: The title, "Countries I'd like to go to", is appropriate for this list.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: perhaps you could expand and say why you would like to go to these places.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.


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#2102427 by Lisa Noe Kittyluv um Puppyluv


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Review of Who am I?  
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Rated: E | (4.0)



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Hello Payel Dasgupta , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this item is structured using only five lines.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme is a question of who you are.

*Moon* Flow: the poem really doesn't flow well because it is just a few questions and it is too brief. but the grammar and spelling were correct.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation was also good.

*Sun* tone: the tone was inquisitive.

*Strawberry* Title: The title is simple, "Who am I?", and it is appropriate.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: Perhaps write a second stanza of the same amount of lines answering the questions. telling who you think you are. that would make it a well-rounded poem I believe.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.


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#2102427 by Lisa Noe Kittyluv um Puppyluv


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Review of Chew On This  
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello {suser:(soledad_moon}, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: The item is structured using ten lines.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme is describing bubble gum.

*Moon* Flow: The item flowed well with good grammar and spelling.

*Exclaim* punctuation: The punctuation is correct.

*Sun* tone: the tone is delicious.

*Strawberry* Title: "Chew on this" is a very clever title and it's appropriate for the item.


*StarfishB* Suggestions: I enjoyed your look at chewing bubble gum.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.


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A Story-Poem Contest!!!  (E)
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#2102427 by Lisa Noe Kittyluv um Puppyluv


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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello yndorian, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this item was structured using seven stanzas.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme was love being inspired by reflected glass. or something to that affect.

*Moon* Flow: the poem flowed beautifully and had great grammar and spelling.


*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation was correct. and you used the correct words and did not use forbidden words.

*Sun* tone: the tone was loving and it shined through so well.

*Strawberry* Title: the title, "Lanterns for Linda and Cheyenne", was great and appropriate for this poem.


*StarfishB* You did a fantastic job with this prompt, it really is an amazing poem.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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A Story-Poem Contest!!!  (E)
write a story that is in poetic form. No Prompts new or old! Quill winner!
#2102427 by Lisa Noe Kittyluv um Puppyluv

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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello elmoustafi , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this item is written n paragraph form.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme is self-improvement

*Moon* Flow: I thought the item flowed well and was delightful

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation was okay.

*Sun* tone: the tone was upbeat I believe.

*Strawberry* Title: The title was, "What I feel angry about" and it is appropriate for this work.



*StarfishB* Suggestions: I saw one small mistake with your work

But now I have learnt my lesson and I hold my self accountable for everything.
The word is pronounced learned with an (ed) not a (t), but that's fine it's just a small mistake, we all make them.

*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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#2102427 by Lisa Noe Kittyluv um Puppyluv

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Review of World's Weight  
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Rated: E | (4.0)



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Hello SusanFarmer , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: This was simply two stanzas; very brief.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: The theme was having a heavy feeling when life gives you tormoil.

*Moon* Flow: I think it flowed well enough. The grammar and spelling were good.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation was correct.

*Sun* tone: heavy sort of tone

*Strawberry* Title: The title, " Wo0rld's Weight", is appropriate for the item.


*StarfishB* Suggestions: I can certainly identify with what you are saying.

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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.


 
BOOK
My Book of Prayers  (E)
my prayers and thanks to God for the life he gave me.
#2200209 by Lisa Noe Kittyluv um Puppyluv

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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello Jeannie🦋 , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: This item was beautifully crafted

*Butterfly2r* Theme: The theme is love with a best friend, your spouse.

*Moon* Flow: the flow was good, as was the grammar and spelling

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation was good, as was word usage.

*Sun* tone: the tone was loving

*Strawberry* Title: the title "My True Love and Best Friend," is appropriate for the item.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I loved the way you added floral mediators and I love the tone of the poem. It is so loving.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



 
BOOK
My Book of Prayers  (E)
my prayers and thanks to God for the life he gave me.
#2200209 by Lisa Noe Kittyluv um Puppyluv

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Review of Elizabeth  
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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello {suser: }, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this item is in paragraph form.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: The theme is meeting in a store with a stranger leaving you to care for an infant.

*Moon* Flow: even and smooth

*Strawberry* Title: The title, Elizabeth is appropriate

*StarfishB* Suggestions: This was a great flash fiction story, one which I can relate to, I have no kids and would feel odd if someone asked me to care for an infant. I would be leary though, what if she didn't come back... You might be blamed for kidnapping the child. These days you never know,.

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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



 
BOOK
My Book of Prayers  (E)
my prayers and thanks to God for the life he gave me.
#2200209 by Lisa Noe Kittyluv um Puppyluv

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Review of The Soul Beckons  
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello Apologue , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this itenm is structured using eight stanzas.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: The theme ics about something you've had on your mind since you were a child. Putting that into words.

*Moon* Flow: The item flowed well, I did have a little bit hard time
figuring out exactly what you were talking about, but it was a nice poem.

*Exclaim* punctuation: The punctuation was correct. As was the spelling and grammar.

*Strawberry* Title: The title, "The Soul Beckons," is a very good title and also very appropriate for this item.


*StarfishB* Suggestions: I think this was a creative and nice poem.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



 
BOOK
My Book of Prayers  (E)
my prayers and thanks to God for the life he gave me.
#2200209 by Lisa Noe Kittyluv um Puppyluv

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Review of Such Longing  
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Rated: E



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Hello Brian Is A GHOST You Won't See , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: The structure of the item was couplets, about four of them.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: The theme of this was writing and getting attention for it.

*Moon* Flow: the item flowed well and the spelling and grammar were good,

*Exclaim* punctuation: the puncrution is correct

*Sun* tone: the tone comes off as soft or smooth

*Strawberry* Title: The title, "Such Longing", is appropriate for the item


*StarfishB* Suggestions: You are such a good writer, this is one of those poems which makes me say to myself gee wish I had written that!


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



 
BOOK
My Book of Prayers  (E)
my prayers and thanks to God for the life he gave me.
#2200209 by Lisa Noe Kittyluv um Puppyluv

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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello Fyn , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this item was structured using seven stanzas

*Butterfly2r* Theme: The theme was a birthday castle which in the end would flush lol.

*Moon* Flow: The item flowed well and had good grammar and spelling

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation is also correct,

*Sun* tone: the tone was light

*Strawberry* Title: The title,"Prompt Sept,6," I believe a better title is in order for such a good poem. something like "The unintended Castle," or something perhaps a bit better that you could come up with. really would add to the item.

*Dragonflyp* Image: I can just vision your castle.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: this is a really cute piece of writing. If you would like you could enter something like this in my contest
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A Story-Poem Contest!!!  (E)
write a story that is in poetic form. No Prompts new or old! Quill winner!
#2102427 by Lisa Noe Kittyluv um Puppyluv



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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello Redtowrite , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.


*Think* Structure: you created this item using nine quatrains

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme is how we forget the elderly I believe.

*Moon* Flow: the item flowed well and the grammar and spelling were good.

*Exclaim* punctuation: thre was correct.

*Sun* tone: the tone was sad for me
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*Strawberry* Title: the title, "An Amazing Birdcage," is so good and appropriate it is sort of a metaphor isn't it.
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*Dragonflyp* Image: It brings to my mind very clear pictures of the people I used to care for when I was in training to be a nurse.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I was really saddened by your poem but that is good maybe it will cause more people to remember about these dearest of people. This poem was beautiful and needed to be said.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



 
BOOK
My Book of Prayers  (E)
my prayers and thanks to God for the life he gave me.
#2200209 by Lisa Noe Kittyluv um Puppyluv

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Review of The Realization  
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello BusmanPoet , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this item is structured using seven lines

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme is the cat eventually learns it can't catch the dot

*Moon* Flow: the item flowed well and the spelling and grammar were good.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation is correct.

*Sun* tone: the tone is coming of wisdom smooth laid back

*Strawberry* Title: The title, "Realization," is appropriate for the item.
the*Dragonflyp* Image: the image that is brought forth is of a kitten chasing a lite..
=t*StarfishB* Suggestions: This is so cute and true, my dog licks and paws at the cursor on my computer.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



 
BOOK
My Book of Prayers  (E)
my prayers and thanks to God for the life he gave me.
#2200209 by Lisa Noe Kittyluv um Puppyluv

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Rated: E | (4.0)



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Hello Jabberwb , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this item was structured using eight couplets.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: Look Out for Rock City or Ruby Falls.


*Moon* Flow: the item flows well with good grammar and spelling.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the puntuation is correct

*Strawberry* Title: The Title, "Ruby Falls % Rock City," is appropriate and really caught my attention, as I traveled my whole life between Biloxi, Mississippi, and Harlan, Kentucky, and I knew I was getting close to Kentucky when I saw all those barn signs. Lookout Mountain Next Right or what have you.



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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



 
BOOK
My Book of Prayers  (E)
my prayers and thanks to God for the life he gave me.
#2200209 by Lisa Noe Kittyluv um Puppyluv

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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello Prosperous Snow , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this item is structured using about nine lines.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: The theme of this poem is your sacred place

*Moon* Flow: I thought this item flowed well. The spelling and grammar were both good.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation were okay

*Sun* tone: the tone is smooth

*Strawberry* Title: The title, " In my sacred place," is appropriate for this item.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I thought this was a very pretty poem. I truly liked it.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



 
BOOK
My Book of Prayers  (E)
my prayers and thanks to God for the life he gave me.
#2200209 by Lisa Noe Kittyluv um Puppyluv

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Rated: E | (4.0)



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Hello WindSpirit3 , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: This is set up in a paragraph or two

*Butterfly2r* Theme: Just thoughts from a homeless shelter

*Moon* Flow: I thought the this item flowed well, in the beginning and sort of sounded like a list toward the end,

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation was okay

*Sun* tone: the tone seemed desperate..

Bfokdn X onxg*Strawberry* Title: The title, "Broken Constrainziness" really the second word I an not sure about.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: It sounds like you are having a rough time and I feel so bad for you and will remember you in my prayers. I think the fact that you can write down your feelings might help you.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



 
BOOK
My Book of Prayers  (E)
my prayers and thanks to God for the life he gave me.
#2200209 by Lisa Noe Kittyluv um Puppyluv

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