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Review of A Review#1  
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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This review is from Lisa Noe Kittyluv um Puppyluv *Cat**Dog2*


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Hello Samrat Roy , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: I am not used to reviewing a review of a poemiee.I think you wrote a terrific review. the structure was excellent.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme was that you told us just what the poem was about in a few words.
*Moon* Flow:

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation was fair I am not the worlds best at that subject so bare with me.

*Sun* tone: even and smooth

*Strawberry* Title: I guess for a review this is good.

*Dragonflyp* Image:

*StarfishB* Suggestions: You wrote a nice review you should be pleased.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



 
BOOK
My Book of Prayers  (E)
my prayers and thanks to God for the life he gave me.
#2200209 by Lisa Noe Kittyluv um Puppyluv

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Review of Alas, my lass!  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)



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Hello ,Ben Langhinrichs , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: The structure is three four-line with one being a quintet lines stanza. I think you did a good job with this.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: The end for her, was the end for him as well.


*Moon* Flow: The item flowed well without any awkward pauses anywhere.

*Exclaim* punctuation: The punctuation was spot on.

*Sun* tone: the tone was even

*Strawberry* Title: The title was a lay on words, which I liked.

*Dragonflyp* Image: I think this brings out a lot of imaging in my mind

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I did not see any mistakes with your writing.

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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



 
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My Book of Prayers  (E)
my prayers and thanks to God for the life he gave me.
#2200209 by Lisa Noe Kittyluv um Puppyluv

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Review of Tug of Love  
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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello Odessa Molinari smiling , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.
This is beautifully written this afternoon, I truly enjoyed reading it so much.
It was an original little conversation or flash fiction.

*Think* Structure: The structure was simple to follow and right on.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: it is a piece of flash fiction depicting two people talking with one another.


*Moon* Flow: This piece flowed very well without any unnecessary stops and pauses.

*Exclaim* punctuation: The punctuation in your flash fiction conversation was impeccable. I am not the best at it but it looked like you got them all in there.

*Sun* tone: I felt as if it had an even, steady type of tone to it.

*Strawberry* Title: The title of the conversational piece, was so cute it was a novelty sort of. you did a great job with this item.

*Dragonflyp* Image: I really didn't get an image in mind from the spoken word, but it was easy understood, a simple piece to follow.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I have no suggestions for you because it all seemed alright to me.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



 
BOOK
My Book of Prayers  (E)
my prayers and thanks to God for the life he gave me.
#2200209 by Lisa Noe Kittyluv um Puppyluv

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Rated: E | (5.0)



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This review is from Lisa Noe Kittyluv um Puppyluv *Cat**Dog2*


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Hello Carly - Happy New Year! , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: This was a very brief little piece of writing containing
only two stanzas or qautrains, but it is a powerful personilization piece.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: This poem was written for day 12 of the birthday bash contest. it is a personal insiration for the writer's life.

*Moon* Flow: This poetry flowed swell without any unusual stops or pauses.

*Exclaim* punctuation: This particular poem was written without the use of punctuation, which so many are written this way.

*sunp* tone: I feel like the tone of this poem come across as being proud and strong...

*Strawberry* Title: "architect of my own design", this is an appropriate title for this poem, it shows that you are in control of your own life and you create what happens in your life.

*Dragonflyp* Image: I see you as a strong and independent person who doesn't need anyone but self.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: you have good self-esteem and it shows in your writing.
your writing is good and strong.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



 
BOOK
My Book of Prayers  (E)
my prayers and thanks to God for the life he gave me.
#2200209 by Lisa Noe Kittyluv um Puppyluv

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Review of Forget-Me-Nots?  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)



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Hello Soldier_Mike , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: it is structured as a very short story. or a conversation.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: choking on a donut was the theme of the item and how flowers do not always help when you are forgetful.
"The title, "forget-me-nots?" is a clever play on words.

*Dragonflyp* Image: I can envision some forget-me-not flowers in a vase near a donut on a saucer which you choke on.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I did not see any mistakes, you did a good job creating this flash fiction.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



 
BOOK
My Book of Prayers  (E)
my prayers and thanks to God for the life he gave me.
#2200209 by Lisa Noe Kittyluv um Puppyluv

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Review of My Own Sins  
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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello Keaton Foster: Know My Hell! , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: The structure is like that of all of your work very few words per line, leaving many lines in tow.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme is of a man who is contemplating paying for his sins with hell. I think

*Moon* Flow: this flowed from word one until last word

*Exclaim* punctuation: I do not know about the punctuation, I don't recall seeing any of the punctuation used in this item. which is fine. it was consistent.

*Sun* tone: as usual it was depressing and dark in tone.

*Strawberry* Title: The title "My Own Sins", speaks to what the entire poem was about. It is about your sinfulness. This brings all of your poems to my mind as they are all similar.



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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



 
BOOK
My Book of Prayers  (E)
my prayers and thanks to God for the life he gave me.
#2200209 by Lisa Noe Kittyluv um Puppyluv

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Review of Faceless Lies  
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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello Keaton Foster: Know My Hell! , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: Your structure is one long verse and it is laid out into a design sort of.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: trying to escape a fate that's not your own

*Moon* Flow: very good flow with no unnecessary stops or pauses.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation is not formal, there are some but for the most part there is not.

*Sun* tone: the tone is sort of dark or at least I felt it was

*Strawberry* Title: The title "Faceless Lies", is very good and appropriate I really thought it was good and original.

*Dragonflyp* Image: this is sort of a depressive type of poem, that is what it brings to my mind, someone who is trapped and wants out.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: You did a good job creating this item. It is original, but the format is so much like all of your other pieces of writing.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



 
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My Book of Prayers  (E)
my prayers and thanks to God for the life he gave me.
#2200209 by Lisa Noe Kittyluv um Puppyluv

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Review of Last Lunch  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)



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Hello {suser: }, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this item has five stanzas with no certain number of lines per stanza.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme is of a last meal

*Moon* Flow: there is no unnecessary stops or pauses in the item

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation seems to be consistent and correctly done.

*Sun* tone: the overall tone of the poem came off as a bit dark to me.

*Strawberry* Title: The title is appropriate for this particular poem. it is what the whole poem is about really.


*Dragonflyp* Image: the image brought to my mind is one of a person eating poison in his or her lunch.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I thought you wrote a good little story poem and
it was easy to follow.

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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



 
BOOK
My Book of Prayers  (E)
my prayers and thanks to God for the life he gave me.
#2200209 by Lisa Noe Kittyluv um Puppyluv

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Review of April Winds  
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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello Prosperous Snow , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: the structure of this item is A Cameo , an unrhymed 7-line poem

*Butterfly2r* Theme: An April Day in Las Vegas with winds and all.

*Moon* Flow: there was hardly any flow to the item, as it was so brief.

*Exclaim* punctuation: I am the world's worst with punctuation so you might ask someone else about that, as far as I know, you did it correctly.

*Sun* tone: I thought that this item was very smooth

*Strawberry* Title: The title of the item was perfect as it was what the poem was all about. It was very appropriate.

*Dragonflyp* Image: to me it brings to mind a brisk breeze blowing and tossing stuff around.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: This is a well written poem and I think you picked the perfect form in which to write it.

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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



 
BOOK
My Book of Prayers  (E)
my prayers and thanks to God for the life he gave me.
#2200209 by Lisa Noe Kittyluv um Puppyluv

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Rated: E | (4.5)



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This review is from Lisa Noe Kittyluv um Puppyluv *Cat**Dog2*


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Hello Greg I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: you created this particular piece using four stanzas of four lines each or four quatrains.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme of this item is that you are madly in love with your wife. you state that she is the drug you are addicted to.

*Moon* Flow: This item flowed well all the way through.

*Exclaim* punctuation: you chose not to use end-line punctuation. however, you did use punctuations such as commas during the sentence midway.

*Sun* tone: This is truly a loving tribute to a well-loved wife. the tone is smooth and sweet.

*Strawberry* Title: I think that the title was appropriate and well done, It is taken as a line from the poem.

*Dragonflyp* Image: valentines come to my mind or a couple embraced in a kiss is what I envision.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I did not see any mistakes with your writing, I think you did a fantastic job creating this piece.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



 
BOOK
My Book of Prayers  (E)
my prayers and thanks to God for the life he gave me.
#2200209 by Lisa Noe Kittyluv um Puppyluv

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"The Contest Challenge

"WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group


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In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)


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Hello Tim Chiu , I am your reviewer today, Lisa Noe Kittyluv um Puppyluv . I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list as I was reviewing for the group.
This is a poem written to show how you are feeling good about an unknown future.
or at least that is what I think it is about. I think that the title is very appropriate for the item and I also think that the item description is helpful for the reader.

Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.


 
BOOK
My Book of Prayers  (E)
my prayers and thanks to God for the life he gave me.
#2200209 by Lisa Noe Kittyluv um Puppyluv

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Rated: E | (5.0)


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Hello Brenpoet , I am your reviewer today, Lisa Noe Kittyluv um Puppyluv . I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list as I was reviewing for the group. I loved this beautiful piece of writing, though I love all things that are written about my Jesus and those who have faith in Him. He has saved me so many times in so many ways. heart, soul, and health He has saved me. I was nothing and in me He created something, I had no talent but through me He chose I should write.
I love Jesus.


Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.


 
BOOK
My Book of Prayers  (E)
my prayers and thanks to God for the life he gave me.
#2200209 by Lisa Noe Kittyluv um Puppyluv

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Review of Second Chance  
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Rated: E | (4.0)


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Hello Norman , I am your reviewer today, Lisa Noe Kittyluv um Puppyluv . I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list as I was reviewing for the group. This looks like you have had a little spat of some sort with your mate.
you did something to make her very angry is how this reads. You are desperately trying to make it up to her and get her not to be angry any longer. in the end you are questioning whether or not the candy and flowers were enough.


Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of literature with me I appreciate your talent and the hard work you put into writing this item. You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.


 
BOOK
My Book of Prayers  (E)
my prayers and thanks to God for the life he gave me.
#2200209 by Lisa Noe Kittyluv um Puppyluv

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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)

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This review is from Lisa Noe Kittyluv um Puppyluv *Cat**Dog2*


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Hello Jaiam , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: I see that you use four quatrains followed by a single line.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: I loved the theme, It is about God and how through Him all things are possible. You have to love Gods, but if He doesn't answer your prayer the way you want Him to don't stop believing in Him, He knows what's best for us.

*Moon* Flow: there were no interruptions in the flow of the poem.

*Exclaim* punctuation: I am the world's worst at punctuation but it looks to me like you did very well.

*Sun* tone: The tone of the poem seems to me that it was written with love and strong emotion and faith.

*Strawberry* Title: The title says it all, it is so very important and it is the message of the whole poem. it is very appropriate for the poem.

*Dragonflyp* Image: if I close my eyes I see an angel helping Jesus. I don't know why but I just do.


*StarfishB* Suggestions: I thought that this was a beautiful piece of writing and if I could I would give it 5 stars.

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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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Review of The Neighbor  
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Rated: E | (5.0)

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Hello Norman , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: I liked the structure of this poem, it was laid out in quatrains, which I find very helpful, they are my favorite kind.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: The theme of this story poem was very unusual, which I liked, it was not like all the rest. It was about a man who died and then smiled at you after the fact.. very unusual indeed.

*Moon* Flow: I thought the poem flowed nicely and had no uncommon stops, or pauses.

*Exclaim* punctuation: I am not the best with punctuation, however, I did not see anything out of the ordinary I don't think.

*Sun* tone: I felt that this was a smooth reading poem, there was nothing uneven a bout it.

*Strawberry* Title: The title was outstanding. It was very appropriate for this piece of writing.

*Dragonflyp* Image: I could almost see a man lying in a coffin, with a smile planted on his face.

*FishB* Suggestions: I have no suggestions for you, as I noticed no mistakes with your writing.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

The Poet's Place





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Review of Coconut Appeal  
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Rated: E | (4.5)

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Hello Teargen , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*turtle* Structure: I am trying a new review format for my reviews so you're my first for it. I thought the structure of your poem was very good and worked well for the particular subject matter.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: The theme of your poem was very different, I like to read something that is unique and not about the same old humdrum stuff you know.
*Moon* Flow: I felt as if your poem flowed well, for the type of poem it was.

*Exclaim* punctuation: I am not the best with punctuation, however for the best I could tell, it looked pretty well, I didn't see anything that really stood out.

*suiheart* tone: I would say that the tone was inquisitive if that is a tone.

*Strawberry* Title: The title was perfect I felt that it was very suitable and appropriate for the poem.

*Dragonflyp* Image: You had great image of a palm tree near the title. and iut brought to mind a vision of a palm tree.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: My thoughts kept going to Palm Sunday for some reason.
I liked your poem and feel as you did a good job creating it.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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Rated: E | (4.5)



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*Poseyp*Title: Season's Greetings (Part One)

*Poseyp*Author: Logan
*Poseyp*Type: poetry
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*Poseyp*First Impression: hello stipey, I'm going to give you a detailed review of your poem today in order to aid you in your quest to become an excellent poet.
This poem tells a story, which I really like. Story Poems are very enchanting I believe. I came across this little piece of writing on writing.com's read and review items list this afternoon. you have a good start with part one of this little story poem.
*Poseyp*EXCERPT OF WRITING:

And up there in the starlit sky
Santa’s sleigh soars true
Through the wind and rain it flies
The deer pull it through


*Poseyp*Suggestions: I saw no mistakes.

*Poseyp*Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this striking poetry with me,I appreciate the talent you display with this writing.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.


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Review of War and Peace  
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Rated: E | (5.0)



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*Poseyp*Title: war and peace

*Poseyp*Author: proton69

*Poseyp*Type: poetry

*Pawprints*Reviewed by:*Paw* Lisa Noe~Kitty Love~ *Cat2*
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*Poseyp*First Impression: Hello proton 69, I'm going to give you a detailed review of your poem today in order to aid you in your quest to become an excellent poet.
I came across this piece of writing while I was reviewing on writing,com's read and review items list. I wish we could have peace, but the only time that will happen is when Jesus will return and bring with him a legion of angels and saints and then peace shall prevail. I personally despise war.


*Poseyp*EXCERPT OF WRITING:
Parties can give each other discount
War will cost more, take it in on count.
War! War! No more war!
Peace we demand, wherever we are.



*Poseyp*Suggestions: I despise war but I love our military and all they do for our nation,

*Poseyp*Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this striking poetry with me,I appreciate the talent you display with this writing.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.


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Review of Winter Feelings  
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Rated: E | (5.0)


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*Poseyp*Title: winter feelings

*Poseyp*Author: jubshaw

*Poseyp*Type: Poetry

*Pawprints*Reviewed by:*Paw* Lisa Noe~Kitty Love~ *Cat2*
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*Poseyp*First Impression: Hello, I'm going to give you a detailed review of your poem, I came across this piece of writing on writing.com's read and review items piece. I hate winter as well, I think the cold damp weather hurts my bones very badly. I also think the dreary days are very depressing. You really did capture the death of winter. The kind of spooky feelings that come along with the damned season. Of course, I guess we all need a season of rest,

e:poseyp}EXCERPT Oof F WRITING:


Oh, winter will you last so long
With dreary rain and colder mist
Oh, how I wish that you were gone
And Spring would put on me it's kiss


*Poseyp*Suggestions: I have no suggestions you captured it just fine.

*Poseyp*Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this striking poetry with me,I appreciate the talent you display with this writing.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.


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In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)


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*Poseyp*Title: Better for Everyone

*Poseyp*Author: Camel Guy

*Poseyp*Type: poetry

*Pawprints*Reviewed by:*Paw* Lisa Noe~Kitty Love~ *Cat2*
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*Poseyp*First Impression: hello Camel guy I'm going to give you a detailed review of your poem today in order to aid you in your quest to become an excellent poet.
I came to your portfolio per your request this day, I came across this item and was immediately alarmed, I do so hope that this writing is not biographical, I hope it is just a sad author venting his frustrations on paper. Suicide is nothing to take lightly, I have had two different friends who committed suicide, one was 15 and he hanged himself, the other was 21 and he shot himself. I also had an uncle which we don't know if he was murdered or committed suicide. so i am alarmed when someone talks about finishing his life.

*Poseyp*EXCERPT OF WRITING:

Condemned to hell for the afterlife
Seems better than bein' alive
And dealin' with despise,


*Poseyp*Suggestions: Hell would be worst than your most terrible nightmare, so don't joke about going there.

*Poseyp*Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this striking poetry with me,I appreciate the talent you display with this writing.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.


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Lisa Ann Noe
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In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (4.5)


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*Poseyp*Title: The Holy Spirit is the Power of God

*Poseyp*Author: REV DR OLSESKI,JR

*Poseyp*Type: Poetry

*Pawprints*Reviewed by:*Paw* Lisa Noe~Kitty Love~ *Cat2*
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*Poseyp*First Impression: Hello, I'm going to give you a detailed review of your poem today in order to aid you in your quest to become an excellent poet.
I usually would tell you that your message is too brief but in this circumstance, I believe you have written volumes of words with one simple line. I love it!

*Poseyp*EXCERPT OF WRITING:
God used his great power to create the heaven, the earth, men, and beats.

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*Poseyp*Suggestions: I am afraid in your haste you left out the s in beasts.
I f.und your writing to be of the utmost importance for people to read.

*Poseyp*Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this striking poetry with me, I appreciate the talent you display with this writing.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.


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Review of A Dream  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)



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*Poseyp*Title: A Dream

*Poseyp*Author: Prosperous Snow

*Poseyp*Type: Poet

*Pawprints*Reviewed by:*Paw* Lisa Noe~Kitty Love~ *Cat2*
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*Poseyp*First Impression: Hello prosperous Snow, I'm going to give you a detailed review of your poem today in order to aid you in your quest to become an excellent poet. I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list.
I really enjoyed this piece of writing, it reminds me that one day my Jesus will be back and peace shall prevail throughout the world. I am a Christian and I believe this with all of my heart He will return and peace shall prevail.

*Poseyp*EXCERPT OF WRITING:
Let us bid war adieu,
and hate eschew.
Peace the team!
No dream!



*Poseyp*Suggestions: I have no suggestions for your writing as it is beautiful.

*Poseyp*Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this striking poetry with me, I appreciate the talent you display with this writing.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.


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Review of In Your Hands  
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Rated: E | (4.0)



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*Poseyp*Title: In Your Hands

*Poseyp*Author: Camel Guy

*Poseyp*Type: Poetry

*Pawprints*Reviewed by:*Paw* Lisa Noe~Kitty Love~ *Cat2*
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*Poseyp*First Impression: Hello camel guy, I'm going to give you a detailed review of your poem today in order to aid you in your quest to become an excellent poet.
I came across this piece of writing on writing.com's read and review items list.
I thought that it was really very powerful as it was so emotionally charged.
this is a rap you wrote for an ex-girlfriend, the language sounds kind of urban slang which goes along with being a rap I guess. It is very good, there are many good rhymes and it has rhythm as well. I am sorry you guys had trouble and broke up.


*Poseyp*EXCERPT OF WRITING:

No, I don’t hate you.
But, man, how much I love you,
How much I trust you.
Darlin’, I’d put my life in your hands anyday.



*Poseyp*Suggestions: any day should be written as two words.

*Poseyp*Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this striking poetry with me,I appreciate the talent you display with this writing.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.


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Lisa Ann Noe
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Review of Prologue: Entry 1  
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)



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*Poseyp*Title: Prologue;Entry1

*Poseyp*Author: Championrqr

*Poseyp*Type: Prologue

*Pawprints*Reviewed by:*Paw* Lisa Noe~Kitty Love~ *Cat2*
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*Poseyp*First Impression: Hello, I'm going to give you a detailed review of your item today in order to aid you in your quest to become an excellent writer.
I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list.
I thought that you did a fantastic job describing a creature that we have never seen before. It also seems to be very unusual and unique in its appearance. I
think you are showing great promise as a writer of science fiction.

*Poseyp*EXCERPT OF WRITING:
The creatures are designed to scare off their prey so they can take what the prey had but are frightened at the slightest sign of danger.

*Poseyp*Suggestions: I have no suggestions for you at this point.

*Poseyp*Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this striking poetry with me, I appreciate the talent you display with this writing.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.


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Review of Floridian Evil  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)



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*Poseyp*Title: Floridian Evil

*Poseyp*Author: Elisa the Snowman Stik

*Poseyp*Type: Poetry

*Pawprints*Reviewed by:*Paw* Lisa Noe~Kitty Love~ *Cat2*
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*Poseyp*First Impression: I'm going to give you a detailed review of your poem today in order to aid you in your quest to become an excellent poet.
I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list this afternoon. This is a neat and unusual piece very well and probably pretty difficult to write.
The message is a bit insulting to tourists though, who help Florida's economy very well. I do like the way you spell out tourists at the end of each line of your poem.
That is a difficult thing to do and tskes talent to so it.

*Poseyp*Suggestions: I just think you should be thankful for tourists, who keep everything lively.

*Poseyp*Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this striking poetry with me, appreciate the talent you display with this writing.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.


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