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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Poseyp*Title: "Twas the Eve of All Hallows
*Poseyp*Author: Richard ~ Shenanigans INC.

*Poseyp*Type: Poetry

*Pawprints*Reviewed by:*Paw* Lisa Noe~Kittyluv~um~puppyluv
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*Poseyp*First Impression: Hello, I am judging this item because you are an entrant in A Story-Poem Contest, Thanks for entering. This was a glorious piece of writing, I really enjoyed it and found it to be fun. I thought the story was excellent and the poetic form was also good. You surprised with the ending, it was amusing, I thought it was going to be the devil showed up or something not Charlie Brown. That just made it by changing the mood of the entire poem. It was good thinking. *Thumbsup*


*Poseyp*Conclusion: Thank you so kindly for entering my contest, I want to wish you good luck and say I hope you will enter again next month. have fun with your writing and God Bless You!

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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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*Poseyp*Title: Antithetical Jottings by RenownPoet/ "The Chaise For Shirley"

*Poseyp*Author: He’s Brian K Compton

*Poseyp*Type: Poetry

*Pawprints*Reviewed by:*Paw* Lisa Noe~Kittyluv~um~puppyluv
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*Poseyp*First Impression: Hello, I am judging this item because you are an entrant in A Story-Poem Contest, Thanks for entering. This was a well-done piece of writing.
I think the chaise is what it is all about, isn't it? This was well worth reading and enjoyable. the title is appropriate for the item.

*Poseyp*Suggestions: I did not see any mistakes you did well.

*Poseyp*Conclusion: Thank you so kindly for entering my contest, I want to wish you good luck and say I hope you will enter again next month. have fun with your writing and God Bless You!

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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.0)



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Hello Chérie , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: the item is written in paragraph form

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme is planting a tree on earth

*Moon* Flow: I thought the item flowed well with a simple rhythm.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the grsmmsr, spelling and punctuation is correct.

*Sun* tone: the tone is hopeful.

*Strawberry* Title: The title, "Let's Plant a Tree," is simple and appropriate for the item.



*StarfishB* Suggestions: I did not see any mistakes with your work.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.


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Review of Girl on Fire  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello Chérie , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: This item is structured using four stanzas

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme is a girl on fire without harm

*Moon* Flow: The item fglowed well and the sentence structure, spelling and grammar were all correct.

*Exclaim* punctuation: The punctuation was well placed.

*Sun* tone: the tone is confident.

*Strawberry* Title: the title, "Girl on Fire", it reminded me of a song by the same name, I thought it was appropriate and good,


*StarfishB* Suggestions: I just loved that song a year or so ago. Your poem was good.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.


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Review of Snowy Cold Rain  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.0)



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Hello annamc, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: you structured this piece of writing using nine lines which most of them contain an internal rhyme or two.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: theme was your thouyght on a horse I believe in the chilly winter weather, I didn't theing the entire theme was really clear.

*Moon* Flow: The item flowed well with good grammar snd spelling.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation was correct I believe.

*Sun* tone: the tone was also not clear.

*Strawberry* Title: the title, "Snowy Cold Rain," is appropriate for the item.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I thought you did a good job but I think you could add a line or two and don't worry so much about the rhn\yming it seems to interfere with the clarity of the poem.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.


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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello {suser: }, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: This item is structured using four stanzas

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme is love

*Moon* Flow: I thought that the item flowed well with good grammar and good spelling.

*Sun* tone: the tone is deep

*Strawberry* Title: The title, My Love is So True," is appropriate for the item.


*StarfishB* Suggestions: I thought you7 did a fantastic job creating this item.

there were no mistakes and the punctuation was okay.

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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. God Bless You and Yours.


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Review of Earth Fell  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello {suserthis afternoon:pantherrose}, I'd like to wish you a very happy account
anniversary I do so ho0pe that you are having a very blessed day today, The title is good and appropriate for the itej. but I take issue with them killing God., it is not possible, so I just want to inform you that it iw impossible to murder God He just can not be killed it is not plausible.
this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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Review of I am  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello whiterainlbow, I'd like to wish you a very happy account
anniversary I do so hope that you have a wonderfully happy account Anniversary today.
The title of the writing of this item is called,"I Am", it is an appropriate piece of writing. I thought this was a very telling piece of poetry.
The item description is also very helpful to the pie
thank you for sharing the item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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Review of mother  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Poseyv*Reviewed by: *Paw* Lisa Noe*Cat2*

Hello IMarie9008 : }, I'd like to wish you a very happy account
anniversary , I do so hope that ypi have a wonderfully blessed day today.
This was a sad poem, about our mon=ther, I could not stand it if my mom were not in my life, she is myU best friend.
I love her so very much. I thought that your l3etter was a very well written letter highly emotionally charged.

thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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Review of Epiphany  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Poseyv*Reviewed by: *Paw* Lisa Noe*Cat2*

Hello {suser011:leannj}, I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this beautiful afternoon. I do so hope that you have a wonderfully blessed day today, You have been a valuable member of the writing.com family since October 2, 2011, that is about nine years with us. We are glad to have you. I think the title, ""Epiphany", is appropriate for this particular piece of writing.I also think that the item description is helpful to the readers if this item, This item is very well written and is showing a lot of your emotions.
AS your writing is highly emotionally charged on this day.
I think that you are showing a lot of talent. this is a wonderfuo puiece oif wreiutriunfg

thank you for sharing tfdhis item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You and your family during thyiws trying time.
We are all in thias together p all we can do is pray to God to release us from this virus.
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Review of Broken Glass  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello happyartust, I'd like to wish you a very happy account
anniversary this beautiful afternoon, I do so hope that you are having a very blessed day today., Today you have been a valuable member of the writing.com family for ten wonderful years. We are ao happy to have you with us. This item that you wrote for us is a very nicely written piece. Your poem was very unique and I enjoyed reading it very much. I felt as if the title, "Broken Glass", is very creative as well as being very appropriate for the item. and in addition to that, the item description was also very helpful to the reader of this item. You show a good poetic quality to allo of tyour work and I think you are a very talented poet.
keep up the good work.
I thought the piece was well rounded and I really did like it. Thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello BIG BAD WOLF is hopping , I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this morning. I do so hope that you are having a wonderfully blessed day today.
I thought this was a neat looking item. The title is appropriate for the item. and the item description is okay. Your writing is good using a list to describe all of the different food that will be shared during a Thanksgiving meal. The poem was a fair attempt at writing poetry. you used a lot of poetic devices to write this piece of poetry. The assonance was used but there was no alliteration in this particular piece of writing. I also noticed no rhyme. Its rhythm was also very nonexistent. but it was still a very well-written piece of poetry and I enjoyed it tremendously. I love Thanksgiving, my favorite part of it is the great company we share with our family.


thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*
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Review of "Growing Older"  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Poseyv*Reviewed by: *Paw* Lisa Noe*Cat2*

Hello CrystalPrater , I'd like to wish you a very happy account
anniversary this =evening, I do so hope that you have had a wonderfully blessed day today. aa id Ixrivwe 2, 2005, you have been a valuable member of the writing.com family for fifteen years, wow that is a milestone/ I can really relate to your writing, this is a poem about growing older, unfortunately, many of us can relate to this poem. I personally feel that getting older is painful, I have arthritis and it is a very painful disease suffered by many older adults. There are also many other conditions suffered by people as we age. forgetfulness, diabetes for many, and so on. One notable disease is dementia, depression, and sorry to say neglect and abuse of the elderly, it happens more often than many people think. I think you have a very nice writing style and the item you wrote shows how quickly life goes by.
I thank you for sharing your talent with us all here at writing.com, you keep writing and I'll keep on reading, God Bless You. and have fun with your writing.


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Review of Strength Beyond  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello Jay O'Toole , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: the structure of this item is using only one long verse.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme is an abundance of love.

*Moon* Flow: the item flowed beautifully.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation was correct

*Sun* tone: the tone is loving

the title, " Sonnet: " Strength Beyond" you really don't need to have sonnet as part oif the title.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: your work is beautiful congratulations.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.


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Review of AMENDS: a sonnet  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.0)



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Hello Dr M C Gupta , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: the item is structured using three quatrains and a couplet you have created a sonnet.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: talking about making amends and living the straight and good.


*Moon* Flow: the item flowed alright, the grammar was okay as was the spelling.

*Exclaim* punctuation: punctuation was correct.

*Sun* tone: the tone is eratic

*Strawberry* Title: the title, "Amends: a sonnet" is appropriate for the item,
I do not think that you need to write sonnet as part of the title, it takes away from the item.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.


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Review of IF ONLY...  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello Joy , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: structured using a couple of lines maybe 4 or 5.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme is being bitten by a mouse and getting caught off guard with a visitor.

*Moon* Flow: I thought the item flowed well enough.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation is okay.

*Sun* tone: the tone is erratic

*Strawberry* Title: the title is "If Only", which is appropriate for the item,

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I have no suggestions for you, I thought your work can staned on its own.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.


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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello {suser: }, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme is words of wisdom, A quote.

*Moon* Flow: I guess you can say it flowed well.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation was okay

*Sun* tone: the tone is promising and uplifting

*Strawberry* Title: the title, "Quotes and Words of Wisdom" is appropriate and it is all in caps which puts emphasis on it.



*StarfishB* Suggestions: you don't need to change anything, it is all good.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.


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Review of An Inspector  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Poseyp*Title: An Inspector

*Poseyp*Author: Michael Rose🏳️‍🌈

*Poseyp*Type: Poetry

*Pawprints*Reviewed by:*Paw* Lisa Noe~Kittyluv~um~puppyluv
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*Poseyp*First Impression: Hello, I am judging this item because you are an entrant in A Story-Poem Contest, Thanks for entering. This was a nice story-poem, but I have to say I did have a little bit hard time following it. The grammar and spelling all seemed good. The title was appropriate for the item.

*Poseyp*Suggestions: I would suggest that you read this story poem
out loud to yourself and see what you think about it.

*Poseyp*Conclusion: Thank you so kindly for entering my contest, I want to wish you good luck and say I hope you will enter again next month. have fun with your writing and God Bless You!

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Review of The real witches  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello Chris Breva , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this item was structured using three stanzas and a couplet.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme is girls accused of being witches who were not.

*Moon* Flow: the item flows well and the grammar and spelling are okay

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation was correct and the word usage was good.

*Sun* tone: sorrowful

*Strawberry* Title: The title, "The Real Witches", is appropriate for this item.


*StarfishB* Suggestions: I hope I got the right take on this I am not really sure.

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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.


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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello {suser: }, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this item is structured in what looks like perhaps two parts

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme is the silence of a mountain in the universe a I
believe.

*Moon* Flow: I thought the piece flows well with good grammar and spelling

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation was good and I liked the word usage.

*Strawberry* Title: the title, "vibrenergy: translation" is a bit odd but it will work for this poem.

*Dragonflyp* Image:
I can just envision a beautiful majestic mountain reaching to the Heaven

*StarfishB* Suggestions: This was a nice poem.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.


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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello River , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: This is structured using a list format of ten items.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme of this item is the ten countries you'd like to visit.

*Moon* Flow: there was no flow to this item. because it was just a list.
the spelling was okay.

*Exclaim* punctuation: there were only periods used.

*Sun* tone: there was no tone

*Strawberry* Title: The title, "Countries I'd like to go to", is appropriate for this list.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: perhaps you could expand and say why you would like to go to these places.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.


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Review of Chew On This  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello {suser:(soledad_moon}, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: The item is structured using ten lines.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme is describing bubble gum.

*Moon* Flow: The item flowed well with good grammar and spelling.

*Exclaim* punctuation: The punctuation is correct.

*Sun* tone: the tone is delicious.

*Strawberry* Title: "Chew on this" is a very clever title and it's appropriate for the item.


*StarfishB* Suggestions: I enjoyed your look at chewing bubble gum.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.


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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello yndorian, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this item was structured using seven stanzas.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme was love being inspired by reflected glass. or something to that affect.

*Moon* Flow: the poem flowed beautifully and had great grammar and spelling.


*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation was correct. and you used the correct words and did not use forbidden words.

*Sun* tone: the tone was loving and it shined through so well.

*Strawberry* Title: the title, "Lanterns for Linda and Cheyenne", was great and appropriate for this poem.


*StarfishB* You did a fantastic job with this prompt, it really is an amazing poem.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello elmoustafi , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this item is written n paragraph form.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme is self-improvement

*Moon* Flow: I thought the item flowed well and was delightful

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation was okay.

*Sun* tone: the tone was upbeat I believe.

*Strawberry* Title: The title was, "What I feel angry about" and it is appropriate for this work.



*StarfishB* Suggestions: I saw one small mistake with your work

But now I have learnt my lesson and I hold my self accountable for everything.
The word is pronounced learned with an (ed) not a (t), but that's fine it's just a small mistake, we all make them.

*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review of World's Weight  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.0)



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Hello SusanFarmer , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: This was simply two stanzas; very brief.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: The theme was having a heavy feeling when life gives you tormoil.

*Moon* Flow: I think it flowed well enough. The grammar and spelling were good.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation was correct.

*Sun* tone: heavy sort of tone

*Strawberry* Title: The title, " Wo0rld's Weight", is appropriate for the item.


*StarfishB* Suggestions: I can certainly identify with what you are saying.

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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.


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