Hello {suser: }, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.
Structure: this item is in paragraph form.
Theme: The theme is meeting in a store with a stranger leaving you to care for an infant.
Flow: even and smooth
Title: The title, Elizabeth is appropriate
Suggestions: This was a great flash fiction story, one which I can relate to, I have no kids and would feel odd if someone asked me to care for an infant. I would be leary though, what if she didn't come back... You might be blamed for kidnapping the child. These days you never know,.
Conclusion: Thank you for this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.
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Hello fyn, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.
Structure: this item was structured using seven stanzas
Theme: The theme was a birthday castle which in the end would flush lol.
Flow: The item flowed well and had good grammar and spelling
punctuation: the punctuation is also correct,
tone: the tone was light
Title: The title,"Prompt Sept,6," I believe a better title is in order for such a good poem. something like "The unintended Castle," or something perhaps a bit better that you could come up with. really would add to the item.
Image: I can just vision your castle.
Suggestions: this is a really cute piece of writing. If you would like you could enter something like this in my contest
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Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.
Hello Redtowrite, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.
Structure: you created this item using nine quatrains
Theme: the theme is how we forget the elderly I believe.
Flow: the item flowed well and the grammar and spelling were good.
punctuation: thre was correct.
tone: the tone was sad for me
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Title: the title, "An Amazing Birdcage," is so good and appropriate it is sort of a metaphor isn't it.
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Image: It brings to my mind very clear pictures of the people I used to care for when I was in training to be a nurse.
Suggestions: I was really saddened by your poem but that is good maybe it will cause more people to remember about these dearest of people. This poem was beautiful and needed to be said.
Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.
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Hello TheBusmanPoet, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.
Structure: this item is structured using seven lines
Theme: the theme is the cat eventually learns it can't catch the dot
Flow: the item flowed well and the spelling and grammar were good.
punctuation: the punctuation is correct.
tone: the tone is coming of wisdom smooth laid back
Title: The title, "Realization," is appropriate for the item.
the Image: the image that is brought forth is of a kitten chasing a lite..
=t Suggestions: This is so cute and true, my dog licks and paws at the cursor on my computer.
Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.
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Hello Jabberwb, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.
Structure: this item was structured using eight couplets.
Theme: Look Out for Rock City or Ruby Falls.
Flow: the item flows well with good grammar and spelling.
punctuation: the puntuation is correct
Title: The Title, "Ruby Falls % Rock City," is appropriate and really caught my attention, as I traveled my whole life between Biloxi, Mississippi, and Harlan, Kentucky, and I knew I was getting close to Kentucky when I saw all those barn signs. Lookout Mountain Next Right or what have you.
Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.
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Hello Prosperous Snow celebrating, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.
Structure: this item is structured using about nine lines.
Theme: The theme of this poem is your sacred place
Flow: I thought this item flowed well. The spelling and grammar were both good.
punctuation: the punctuation were okay
tone: the tone is smooth
Title: The title, " In my sacred place," is appropriate for this item.
Suggestions: I thought this was a very pretty poem. I truly liked it.
Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.
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Hello Elaine Pitts, You requested that I give you a review of this item, "Bonnie and Clyde", I thought it was well written,
Theme: it is about ti ill-fated
lovers, who robbed and killed together. A pair who were infamous.
Flow: The item flowed well and it had good grammar and spelling.
punctuation: the punctuation was correct to the best of my knowledge.
tone: the tone was loving and smooth
Title: The title, "Bonnie and Clyde," is predictable but works well with this item. I thought you did a fantastic job and I would like to tell you if you like to write story poems like this one you could enter
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Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.
First Impression: Hello, I am judging this item because you are an entrant in A Story-Poem Contest, Thanks for entering. I thought, as usual, you entered a really good read. I enjoyed your little poem and I thought the story value was good and clear. It was a nice and comfortable feel to it,
Suggestions: I thought the grammar and spelling were okay and it was well rounded.
Conclusion: Thank you so kindly for entering my contest, I want to wish you good luck and say I hope you will enter again next month. have fun with your writing and God Bless You!
Hello sinbad, I came across this item on the newsfeed page and thought it was so true and so funny. You came up with some really good ones. I can't really say which pun I liked the best I did like the one about the alcohol on your hands and your liver. it was pretty funny. I know that I have washed my hands so much that they look like a dries old raisin or something.
thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.
Hello Lou-Here By His Grace, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.
Structure: You structured this item using six stanzas.
Theme: the theme is the love you have for your daughter.
Flow: I thought this item flowed well and the grammar and spelling were both good.
punctuation: the punctuation is okay as well.
tone: the tone is very loving.
Title: the title, "Nearly an Angel," is appropriate for this item.
Suggestions: This item was very
well written and I enjoyed reading it.
Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.
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First Impression: Hello, I am judging this item because you are an entrant in A Story-Poem Contest, Thanks for entering. Hey I also entered that Mary had a little lamb contest, that was a lot of fun. It was hard coming up with something dark to say. I liked your poem it kept to the prompt well. And it also followed all the rules.
Suggestions: I did see a couple of tiny mistakes... first:
And told it all her woo,
it should read "...and told it all her woes
The next two I don't know if they are errors or if you are just purposely misspelling the words for some reason. Jezus' is Jesus and non is Nun. but all in all, you did a really good job.
Conclusion: Thank you so kindly for entering my contest, I want to wish you good luck and say I hope you will enter again next month. have fun with your writing and God Bless You!
Hello Dr M C Gupta, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.
Structure: The structure of this item is four quatrains.
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{:moon} Flow: I thought the item flowed okay and the grammar was fine. the rhythm is good.
punctuation: The punctuation looked okay to me
Title: the title, "Slice of Pain: award winner"
I personally think is too much. "Slice of Pain" by itself would have been more than enough, the "award winner" just makes it look like you are tooting your own horn.
and in my opinion, is not needed.
Suggestions: just leave off the "award winner" and it will improve your work. you can add that to the bottom of the page in an author's note.
Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.
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Hello kimbro1, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.
Structure: The structure of this review is just perfect, it is easy to read and it is complete.
ThemeL this is a self-review of Dare+Double-Dare= Fire.
Flow: This really doesn't count in a review of this sort.
punctuation: Used properly, as was spelling, and grammar
I thought that this was a thorough and good review. I did think that the title was a little bit longer and makes you stumble when reading.
Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.
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