Hello fyn, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.
n, Theme: the theme of this item was poetry
the grammar and punctuation, spelling were all good. the language is very descriptive
Suggestions: I did not see any mistakes with your writing
it kind of made me feel , the way you described it in such terms.
You seem to have a lot of talent and it shows well. I liked your poem, even if it was kind of gross. I guess it is to each his own ...
Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.
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Party Central is a place where you can go to find some trinkets and to find a lot of merit badges and is a fun place where you can find contests. and new things. There are plenty of games and contests. there you can find a day by day schedule for fun. I think this was a perfect idea to have such a place for us to go, I just love this site!
Hello {suser:(elexislafay}, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do hope that you are having a blessed day.
This item, "Me and only me," is a very well written piece of poetry. I really enjoyed reading it. I think it shows that you take pride in yourself and have confidence in yourself... You are not cocky just have a good dose of self-esteem.
that is a great way to be. Me, I am just the opposite, I feel no matter what I do I can never measure up in anything. Your writing is excellent and I think you should be pleased with that.
Suggestions: the only suggestion I have is in the item description you need to capitalize the pronoun I.
Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.
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Hello Prosperous Snow Valentine, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.
Structure: Senryu a Japanese poetry form of 5, 7, 5 syllables concerned with human nature.
Theme: The memories that cars hide
Flow: this item does not flow it is so short. but that is what it is supposed to be.
punctuation: The punctuation is not needed in this form
tone: reminiscent of the past
Title: The title, "Junk Yard," is appropriate for this poem.
Suggestions: I saw no mistakes and I loved your poem. I have an antique car, we take it to car shows, My husband and I have won countless trophies and plaques with the car. It is a '71 Duster.
Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.
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Hello Prosperous Snow Valentine, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope you are having a blessed day.
Structure: Archimedes’ Poem) is a 6-line poem that uses the important mathematical constants of Pi = 3.14286. Each line’s word count correlates to the number of pi. There is no rhyme or meter requirement. So the Poem according to Archimedes is built up in this way:
Theme: The Theme of the poem is about the Human Soul and the letter X, which refers to the unknown.
Flow: the item really didn't have a chance to flow it is brief.
punctuation: The punctuation, grammar and spelling were all used correctly in this poem.
Title: The title, "The letter X symbolizes the Unknown,"
Suggestions: This is, as usual, a well written piece and properly displayed on the page.
Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.
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THIS IS A REVIEW BY THE ANNIVERSARY GROUP IT IS A GIFT FOR YOU!
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Hello CHarris, I'd like to wish you a very happy account
anniversary this afternoon, I do so hope that you are having a very blessed day today. I think your poem touched me in a personal way because my father used to call me his shadow. Every time I here the word I think of him and smile. Your poem was well written and I did like it. I am a bit early on this anniversary wish for you. Your anniversary is not until the 12. you have been a valuable member for eighteen years. Thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.
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Hello Carol St.Ann, I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this afternoon, I do so hope that you have a wonderfully blessed day today. I see that your Anniversary falls on the sixth, you have been a member since 2006, that is fourteen years, wow, that is great. You are a wonderful writer of acrostics, I just slove to read an acrostic poem. I also like to write them.
This one is about your lovely daughter. It tells the reader of this poem that she loves to run around with a smile on her face while she discovers the world around her.
thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.
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Hello {suser: }, I'd like to wish you a very happy account
anniversary this morning, I know that this review is a little bit early but I am reviewing for the anniversary party at Writing.com. As this is a special b for the site it's been here now for twenty years. You have been with us since September 17, 2002. Wow! you have been a valuable member of writing.com for eighteen years.
I just got finished reading your poem, "Seduction in the Snow," I out laughing so loud that every one in the whole house heard me and wondered what on earth I was doing. You are so funny, I just love to laugh and you never fail to get a giggle from me when I read your funny poetry.
You are so talented, You should be pleased with yourself because it is not an easy thing to write something that is funny. It is a difficult task but you are good at it.
thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.
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Hello bibi, I'd like to wish you a very happy account
anniversary this morning, I do so hope that you are having a blessed day today.
You share an anniversary with writing.com, you have been a member of the writing.com family since September 2, 2011, eight years. The title of your piece, "Once Upon A Time," is a very appropriate and creative one. Because you are writing a poem but it tells a story. This is a poem about how the pandemic has affected you and how it makes you feel. I thought you wrote an excellent piece of poetry.
I gave you five stars, however, I did see one small mistake.
But now death is I all see
you transposed the words I and all. It should read:
But now death is all I see.
This is just a small mistake so I overlooked it and gave you five stars anyway.
I did like it and I think you worked hard on it.
thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.
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Hello Carl Papa Palmer, I'd like to wish you a very happy account
anniversary this morning, I do so hope you are having a blessed day today.
You share an anniversary with writing.com, you have been a valuable member of the
writing.com family since September 2, 2008, that's twelve years. You've got me beat.
Your poem was very touching, I really enjoyed reading it. The titlek, "Horehound Candy", is appropriate for the item. I love to reminisce about the past, I was my father's shadow, I recall he used to buy me an ice cream from Baskin Robbins, I loved going there with the whole family after we ate at Bananza every Sunday. Memories are what keep me going. I could not live if I didn't have such warm memories of my family and the time we spent together, I love the way you ended your poem with a tear. I thought that it was very appropriate.
thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.
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Hello Candie101, I'd like to wish you a very happy account
anniversary this morning, I do so hope that you are having a blessed day today.
You have been a member of the writing.com family since September 2, 2007, you share an anniversary with writing.com. I just loved this item! You did a great service for God by creating a safe place where someone, who don't yet know God, can come to learn and pray and to take the Lord as there Savior. You prayed that prayer with them. may God bless you for doing this. there are so many people who don't know God yet and who need Him in there life so bad. I don't see how people function without the Lord our God on their side. it is an important message to let people know all they have to do is call on His name and ask Him into their hearts. That was the best thing I ever did. because I have known so many troubles, He was with me during them to help me through them.
Thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.
First Impression: Hello, I am judging this item because you are an entrant in A Story-Poem Contest, Thanks for entering. This was a very well written poem Dave, I liked it and I can recall when you taught this form to me. The repetition makes it hard for the poem to make sense but yours is really good, f course.
the story value was excellent and I liked the subject. You are my first entry of thge month and you entered a good one.
Conclusion: Thank you so kindly for entering my contest, I want to wish you good luck and say I hope you will enter again next month. have fun with your writing and God Bless You!
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Hello Itchybarn, I'd like to wish you a very happy account
anniversary this afternoon, I see you share the same anniversary with the writing,com site, which is twenty years old today, I see that you have been a valuable member of the site's staff since the tenth of September 2018.
I also love ladybugs and where I live there are so many of them you can't count them.
They cover the ceiling of my porch in the fall. It is a sight to see.
I thought the title of your poem, "Ladybug Beach," was very appropriate for the piece. I also thought that the item description was very helpful to the reader.
You created this piece of writing using five quatrains or five stanzas with four lines each. I felt like this was a tremendously adorable little poem. You did a fantastic job creating this piece of writing. I just loved it.
thank you for sharing this item with me, I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.
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Hello Ama , I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary which you share with our wonderful site writing.com. It is twenty years old this week and you have been a valuable member of this blessed site since September 1, 2019, this is your very first one year anniversary. I am glad to spend it with you. Your poem was well written and very understandable I believe. You should write this poem to God, The Father, instead of a universe which can neither hear you nor help you. God in His wisdom will listen with love and will care about you and your problems. God can heal those who have wronged you as well. it is important that you know God is not the universe... We are created in the image of God, not a universe. so I plea with you to give your prayers to our Father God. He is glorious and worthy.
thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.
Hello {suser: }, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.
Structure: the item was structured using only six lines.
Theme: The theme is about our loving Father, God, and His Son Jesus Christ.
Flow: The item flowed well and the grammar and spelling were correct.
punctuation: the punctuation is correct I believe.
tone: the tone is loving
Title: the title, "Why I Came" is so appropriate for thid item.
Suggestions: The following are the mistakes you made, I will rewrite your item with corrections marked.
came from the father who sent me to teach and tell of his
commandments for the will of men.
Why I came to save men from sin to
eternal life from this earthly life.
I came to tell that I love all the father give me to
learn of me his son eternally. JESUS CHRIST.
Father and all other mentions of God, such as; He, Him, His, should all be in capital letters.
also Son, should be capitalized because it refers to Jesus Christ.
Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.
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Hello Dr M C Gupta, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.
Structure: written using quatrains.
Theme: The theme is about love and if it is yours
{}e:moon} Flow: I thought the item flowed well, it has a good
rhythm. the grammar and spelling were also well done.
e:exclaim} punctuation: the punctuation looks correct to me
tone: the tone is loving
Title: The title, " Frozen Flame," is appropriate for this item,
Suggestions: I thought this was just beautiful I loved the last stanza it brought the whole poem to life for me.
Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.
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First Impression: Hello, I am judging this item because you are an entrant in A Story-Poem Contest, Thanks for entering. this was a nice little piece of writing. The grammar and punctuation were correct. I thought the story was good as well.
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Suggestions: I am not sure which (sun/son) you are speaking in the first couple of lines, I believe you mean sun that comes up in the morning. if so you are correct, if you mean son, your child, then it is spelled wrong.
Conclusion: Thank you so kindly for entering my contest, I want to wish you good luck and say I hope you will enter again next month. have fun with your writing and God Bless You!
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