*Magnify*
SPONSORED LINKS
BY ONLINE AUTHORS
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/profile/reviews/lisanoe/sort_by/r.review_creation_time DESC/sort_by_last/r.review_creation_time DESC/page/10
Review Requests: OFF
8,734 Public Reviews Given
8,743 Total Reviews Given
Public Reviews
Previous ... 6 7 8 9 -10- 11 12 13 14 15 ... Next
226
226
Review of Typo  
Review by Lisa Noe
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
*Rainbowl*"WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" *Rainbowr*
*Mushroomp**Tulipp**Tulipr**Tulipo**Tulipb**Mushroomr*
THIS IS A REVIEW BY THE ANNIVERSARY GROUP IT IS A GIFT FOR YOU!
WDC POWER REVIEWER'S REVIEW

*Poseyv*Reviewed by: *Paw* Lisa Noe*Cat2*

Hello aquaviann , I'd like to wish you a very happy account
anniversary this afternnon, I do so hope that you are having a wonderfully blessed day this afternoon. I see that today you have been a valuable member of our
writing.com family since Sugust 3, 2001, That is nineteen years, since the beginning of the group you have been a member, wow, what a milestone. I chose to read your poem entitled "typo", because I thought that the title was so peculiar.
The title is appropriate for the item you wrote. This was a verythdescriptive piece of writing, which it evokes a reaction fromn the reader and that is what poetry is meant to do. I think you did a fantastic job creating this piece of writing.
I also think that the iten description is helpful to the reader. I am glad I got a chance to read this item you have a lot of talent,
Thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  [E]
Join the fun! We inspire reviewers through kindness and learning! Winner of six Quills!
by Maryann - House Martell

"Invalid Item" 
Anniversary Reviews email siggie


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
227
227
Review by Lisa Noe
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
*Rainbowl*"WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" *Rainbowr*
*Mushroomp**Tulipp**Tulipr**Tulipo**Tulipb**Mushroomr*
THIS IS A REVIEW BY THE ANNIVERSARY GROUP IT IS A GIFT FOR YOU!
WDC POWER REVIEWER'S REVIEW

*Poseyv*Reviewed by: *Paw* Lisa Noe*Cat2*

Hello Winnie Kay , II do wo hope that you have a blessed day today,you have been a valuable member of writing.com since August 16, 2009. That is elven years that we have had the pleasure of your presence. I enjoyed reading your limerick, I always like to read limericks, they are fun. I think that you did a really good job using the alliteration in the poem. This was a really good piece of comedy and It is not easy to write comedy so I commend you on that. I think you should by all means keep writing and creating fun stuff for us to read.
Thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  [E]
Join the fun! We inspire reviewers through kindness and learning! Winner of six Quills!
by Maryann - House Martell

"Invalid Item" 
Anniversary Reviews email siggie


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
228
228
Review of Autumn  
Review by Lisa Noe
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
*Rainbowl*"WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" *Rainbowr*
*Mushroomp**Tulipp**Tulipr**Tulipo**Tulipb**Mushroomr*
THIS IS A REVIEW BY THE ANNIVERSARY GROUP IT IS A GIFT FOR YOU!
WDC POWER REVIEWER'S REVIEW

*Poseyv*Reviewed by: *Paw* Lisa Noe*Cat2*

Hello Write-fully Loti , I'd like to wish you a very happy account
anniversary this beautiful afternoon, I do so hope that you are having a wonderfully blessed day today. You have been a valuable member of writing,com since August 27, 2002, that is about eighteen years, wow what milestone, I loved your poem, entitled
"Autumn", I thought that it was just beautiful and I see that you used all of the senses in creating this piece of writing. I just love the autumn or fall,
it signifies a birth of a new season bringing with it the beauty of snow.
Many people do not like the snow but I think it is beautiful cascading down from the sky. I personally love the color of the fall, it is so beautiful with the red, orange, yellow, and rust. I think the Sugar Maple trees are the prettiest.
I did not see anything wrong with your writing. it was great. Thank
you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  [E]
Join the fun! We inspire reviewers through kindness and learning! Winner of six Quills!
by Maryann - House Martell
w. bitem:2200209}
Anniversary Reviews email siggie


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
229
229
Review of Life's too short  
Review by Lisa Noe
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
*Rainbowl*"WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" *Rainbowr*
*Mushroomp**Tulipp**Tulipr**Tulipo**Tulipb**Mushroomr*
THIS IS A REVIEW BY THE ANNIVERSARY GROUP IT IS A GIFT FOR YOU!
WDC POWER REVIEWER'S REVIEW

*Poseyv*Reviewed by: *Paw* Lisa Noe*Cat2*

Hello RigbysRoads , I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this beautiful morning, I do so hope that you will have a wonderfully blessed morning today. You have been a valuable member of the writing.com family since August 2, 2007, which is about fourteen years ago. We are so glad to have you as a family member. You know, you are correct, life is too short, which makes this a perfect title for your poem. I think far too often we tend to dwell on the negative aspects of our lives and overlook that which is positive in our lives. I think that the item description that you wrote is very helpful to the reader of this poetry...
nowadays there does tend to be a whole lot of negative in the world, what with the virus and all, I do hope that you and all of your family and friends are safe from that terrible thing.
thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you writing and I'll keep reading G. od Bless You.*Heart*

WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  [E]
Join the fun! We inspire reviewers through kindness and learning! Winner of six Quills!
by Maryann - House Martell

"Invalid Item"  t
Anniversary Reviews email siggie


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
230
230
Review by Lisa Noe
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
*Rainbowl*"WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" *Rainbowr*
*Mushroomp**Tulipp**Tulipr**Tulipo**Tulipb**Mushroomr*
THIS IS A REVIEW BY THE ANNIVERSARY GROUP IT IS A GIFT FOR YOU!
WDC POWER REVIEWER'S REVIEW

*Poseyv*Reviewed by: *Paw* Lisa Noe*Cat2*

Hello He’s Brian K Compton , I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this beautiful morning, I do so hope that you are having a wonderfully blessed day today so far. You have been a valuable member of writing.com for fourteen years since August 2, 2006. This piece of poetry is just simply awesome. How on earth did you create a perfect pair of lips with your words; your poem is about the perfect kiss I think. It is very descriptive and warm. The title, "Time-Kissed," is perfect for the piece of writing, I can still recall the first time my husband kissed me, I giggled, it was so sweet and memorable. I will never forget it even if I live an eternity. The item description was very helpful for the reader of the poetry.
I remember, years ago in typing class, I learned to type out a picture on the typewriter,, it was a picture
of a typewriter.
thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  [E]
Join the fun! We inspire reviewers through kindness and learning! Winner of six Quills!
by Maryann - House Martell

"Invalid Item"  "
Anniversary Reviews email siggie


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
231
231
Review of Parents  
Review by Lisa Noe
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
*Rainbowl*"WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" *Rainbowr*
*Mushroomp**Tulipp**Tulipr**Tulipo**Tulipb**Mushroomr*
THIS IS A REVIEW BY THE ANNIVERSARY GROUP IT IS A GIFT FOR YOU!
WDC POWER REVIEWER'S REVIEW

*Poseyv*Reviewed by: *Paw* Lisa Noe*Cat2*

Hello cheshire , I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this morning, I do so hope that you are having a very fine and blessed morning.
I just adored your little poem, "Parents," as it was so wonderfully written and sweet.. I know what you are trying to say, as my father is no longer here for me.
Although he was always there for me when he was alive, My mom is still living and you had better believe that she is always here for me. It never fails , if I need her she is always by my side.
she is my very best friend in the whole world and when my father was alive, he was my best friend too. He used to call me his shadow because I would follow him every where that he would go. I thought your poem was precious and I hope that you have a close relationship to your parents as I did with mine. The title is perfect.
thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*
WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  [E]
Join the fun! We inspire reviewers through kindness and learning! Winner of six Quills!
by Maryann - House Martell

"Invalid Item" 
Anniversary Reviews email siggie


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
232
232
Review by Lisa Noe
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
*CakeB**Cat*A Story Poem Contest*Cat2**CakeP*



*Rainbowl*THIS IS A REVIEW FROM A Story Poem Contest, IT IS A GIFT FOR YOU!*Rainbowr*


*Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp*

*Poseyp*Title: Gainfully Employed


*Pawprints*Reviewed by:*Paw* Lisa Noe~Kittyluv~um~puppyluv
*Pawprints**Pawprints*

*Poseyp*First Impression: Hello ruwth , Thanks for entering A Story Poem Contest this month. I know the feeling, I remember when I used to work at the radio station, I made money but I worked all of the time and could never spend it.

*Poseyp*Suggestions: your story was very well written and I am glad you decided at the last minute to enter the contest. The title was good and the story was relatable I thought.

*Poseyp*Conclusion: Thank you so kindly for entering my contest, I want to wish you good luck and say I hope you will enter again next month. have fun with your writing and God Bless You!

** Image ID #2212107 Unavailable **

Lisa Ann Noe
~~Image #6000 Sharing Restricted~~


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
233
233
Review of Cynic In Love  
Review by Lisa Noe
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)



*Rainbowl*This is a review from The Power Reviewers, it's a gift for you!*Rainbowr*

*Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp*


This review is from Lisa Noe *Cat**Dog2*


*Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp*


Hello {suser: }, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: You have structured this item using three stanzas

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme is love and it's effect on us

*Moon* Flow: I thought that it flowed v ery well and the grammar and spellin g were also correct

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation is okay

*Sun* tone: the tone is very sweet and smooth

*Strawberry* Title: the title, "Cynic in Love," is appropriate"


*StarfishB* Suggestions: As usual your writing is very well done.


*Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp*

*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



 Invalid Item 
This item number is not valid.
#2200209 by Not Available.

** Image ID #2110074 Unavailable **
"The Contest Challenge" 

"WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" 


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
234
234
Review by Lisa Noe
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)



*Rainbowl*This is a review from The Power Reviewers, it's a gift for you!*Rainbowr*

*Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp*


This review is from Lisa Noe *Cat**Dog2*


*Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp*


Hello Dr M C Gupta , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this structure of this poem is called a sonnet,

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme of this sonnet is turning seventy

*Moon* Flow: I thought that the sonnet flowed well

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation is correct as is the spelling and grammar.

*Sun* tone: the tone of the item seems a little reminiscent and melancholy.

*Strawberry* Title: The title, "ON LEAVING SIXTY NINE BEHIND: a sonnet," places an emphasis on the subject of the poem which is also the title, leaving sixty-nine.
it is very appropriate for the item.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: The poem is very well-written and a little sad.
I do not think your writing is finished. Just because you have turned seventy, it means you should have more of life's little anecdotes to share with the world hone.
with age comes wisdom, you already have talent, now comes wisdom, right?


*Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp*

*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



 Invalid Item 
This item number is not valid.
#2200209 by Not Available.

** Image ID #2110074 Unavailable **
"The Contest Challenge" 

"WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" 


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
235
235
Review by Lisa Noe
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
*CakeB**Cat*A Story Poem Contest*Cat2**CakeP*


{}
*Rainbowl*THIS IS A REVIEW FROM A Story Poem Contest, IT IS A GIFT FOR YOU!*Rainbowr*


*Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp*

*Poseyp*Title: The Journey of Azmaroth
*Poseyp*Author: Beholden
*Poseyp*Type: Poetry

*Pawprints*Reviewed by:*Paw* Lisa Noe~Kittyluv~um~puppyluv

*Poseyp*First Impression: Hello, I am this item because you are an entrant in A Story-Poem Contest, Thanks for entering. This is a difficult poem to read as all of the names are difficult to pronounce. I do think it is very imaginative and very creative as well. I think the uniqueness helped add s bit of mystique to the story.
The title is appropriate for the item, and the item description is helpful to the reader.


*Poseyp*Suggestions: I did find that the names tended to throw me a bit, but not enough to take away from the wonderful writing.

*Poseyp*Conclusion: Thank you so kindly for entering my contest, I want to wish you good luck and say I hope you will enter again next month. have fun with your writing and God Bless You!
** Image ID #2212107 Unavailable **

Lisa Ann Noe
~~Image #6000 Sharing Restricted~~


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
236
236
Review of Darryl I Am  
Review by Lisa Noe
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)



*Rainbowl*This is a review from The Power Reviewers, it's a gift for you!*Rainbowr*

*Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp*


This review is from Lisa Noe *Cat**Dog2*


*Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp*


Hello {suser: }, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: This item is structured following Book one, Genesis of the Bible.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: I love cats, but I don't know about comparing a cat to God.

*Exclaim* punctuation: The punctuation seems correct to me.

*Sun* tone: The poem flowed well and it appeared to be light-hearted.

*Strawberry* Title: The toitle, " Darryl I am," is appropriate for the itemk.



*StarfishB* Suggestions: I
thought this was imaginative and quite different.

*Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp*

*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



 Invalid Item 
This item number is not valid.
#2200209 by Not Available.

** Image ID #2110074 Unavailable **
"The Contest Challenge" 

"WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" 


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
237
237
Review by Lisa Noe
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)



*Rainbowl*This is a review from The Power Reviewers, it's a gift for you!*Rainbowr*

*Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp*


This review is from Lisa Noe *Cat**Dog2*


*Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp*


Hello {suser:(a.karpouzos}, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this item is structured using one verse or paragraph

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the language of the universe

*Moon* Flow: I felt as if this item was a little broken because many words were missing for some reason.

.e:exclaim} punctuation: The punctuation seems correct top me.


*Strawberry* Title: the title, "TO THE END OF THE WORLD:ALEXIS KARPOUZOS,"
is very appropriate for the item, I understand the all caps represents the danger of the world ending. I don't think you really need toi write your name in the title.
If I were you, I would read the poem aloud and then make corrections by adding miaaing words.
Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of writing with me. God Bless You.


Ineebitem:2200209} need
** Image ID #2110074 Unavailable **
FORUM
The Contest Challenge  (13+)
Join by entering a contest a month for 12 months--Win Badges! Catching up is allowed!
#2109126 by Schnujo is Late to Lannister


"WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" 


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
238
238
Review by Lisa Noe
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)



*Rainbowl*This is a review from The Power Reviewers, it's a gift for you!*Rainbowr*

*Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp*


This review is from Lisa Noe *Cat**Dog2*


*Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp*


Hello TheBusmanPoet , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this item is structured using a sestet or six stanzas.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: People who insulate themselves with Complacency and Apathy from the seriousness of things.

*Moon* Flow: I thought that this item flowed well from beginning to end.

*Exclaim* punctuation: The punctuation seems to be correct to me.


*Strawberry* Title: The title, "Stay Shocked or Lose it All," is appropriate for this item.


*StarfishB* Suggestions:I thought that this item was very profound and excellent.
you did a good job expressing your feelings on the subject.


*Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp*

*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



 Invalid Item 
This item number is not valid.
#2200209 by Not Available.

** Image ID #2110074 Unavailable **
"The Contest Challenge" 

"WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" 


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
239
239
Review of O Water  
Review by Lisa Noe
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)



*Rainbowl*This is a review from The Power Reviewers, it's a gift for you!*Rainbowr*

*Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp*


This review is from Lisa Noe *Cat**Dog2*


*Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp*


Hello {suser: }, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: the structure is not one that I am familiar with.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: The world in a dropp of wayter

*Moon* Flow: the pioem fkiowed well

*Exclaim* punctuation: you chose to not use punctuation in writing this item.

*Strawberry* Title: The title, "O Water," is very appropriate for the item

*Dragonflyp* Image:*StarfishB* Suggestions: I did have a little hard time trying to decide what this poem is all about.


*Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp**Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



 Invalid Item 
This item number is not valid.
#2200209 by Not Available.

** Image ID #2110074 Unavailable **
"The Contest Challenge" 

"WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" 


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
240
240
Review by Lisa Noe
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (3.0)



*Rainbowl*This is a review from The Power Reviewers, it's a gift for you!*Rainbowr*

*Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp*


This review is from Lisa Noe *Cat**Dog2*


*Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp*


Hello {suser:cybergirl01 }, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day. I found a few things wrong with your story. It made it very hard to understand, I think you really need some punctuation.
I have your words in red and corrections in blue:


*Think* So detective what do you have therethere's a bit of blood andthere's also two shell casings from what looks to be a magnum 45 good work lieutenant Yuki you must be commended for your evidence finding skills will send this blood sample off to the lab to see if we can find the suspect the four criminals still two bags full of rice from the pot rice store the cook-off is now canceled because these ingrates call section Chief go to now we must learn how bad this is just a we you'll find these criminals last week yojimbo's soy and chopstick supermarket lost shot lost $2,000 💴💴🤔how could that be there was nothing on the cameras now this with the rice pot rice being taken for the cook-off in Osaka prefecture.

In line one, you don't need the word there two times right next to each other.
you also need a space between and, and there's I think a period after
45 is also needed. and capitalize Good. a comma after Yuki.
a period after skills and capital will. a period after suspect, capitalize the
add the word have after still . there are just so many spaces where you need punctuation and skipped words to make it make sense. Just go back over it and write it adding punctuation.



*Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp*

*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



 Invalid Item 
This item number is not valid.
#2200209 by Not Available.

** Image ID #2110074 Unavailable **
"The Contest Challenge" 

"WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" 


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
241
241
Review of Walking Away  
Review by Lisa Noe
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)



*Rainbowl*This is a review from The Power Reviewers, it's a gift for you!*Rainbowr*

*Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp*


This review is from Lisa Noe *Cat**Dog2*


*Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp*


Hello Noah E. Johnson , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: the structure of this item is in a written in verses or stanzas.

*Butterfly2r* Theme:

*Moon* Flow: the theme of the item is "Love Hurts".

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation is good to the best of my knowledge


*Strawberry* Title: The title, "Walking Away", is very appropriate for this poem and I think it tells a lot about what is in your mind as a writer.


*StarfishB* Suggestions: I really have no suggestions for you at this time.


*Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp*

*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



 Invalid Item 
This item number is not valid.
#2200209 by Not Available.

** Image ID #2110074 Unavailable **
"The Contest Challenge" 

"WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" 


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
242
242
Review by Lisa Noe
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (3.0)



*Rainbowl*This is a review from The Power Reviewers, it's a gift for you!*Rainbowr*

*Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp*


This review is from Lisa Noe *Cat**Dog2*


*Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp*


Hello Shinobigirl , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: the item is structured using only a very few lines.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: criminal masterminds trying to steal the rice shrine

*Moon* Flow: I am afraid that, due to the lack of punctuation, the item felt broken.

*Exclaim* punctuation: I feel as if you left out all of the punctuation and it really affected the entire poem.

*Sun* tone: it was broken and it makes me wonder if English is your second language.

*Strawberry* Title: The title, is illegible.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: Go back and use punctuation in the poem and see if it might not read more smoothly.


*Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp*

*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



 Invalid Item 
This item number is not valid.
#2200209 by Not Available.

** Image ID #2110074 Unavailable **
"The Contest Challenge" 

"WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" 


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
243
243
Review by Lisa Noe
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
*Rainbowl*"WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" *Rainbowr*
*Mushroomp**Tulipp**Tulipr**Tulipo**Tulipb**Mushroomr*
THIS IS A REVIEW BY THE ANNIVERSARY GROUP IT IS A GIFT FOR YOU!
WDC POWER REVIEWER'S REVIEW

*Poseyv*Reviewed by: *Paw* Lisa Noe*Cat2*

Hello Jay O'Toole , I'd like to wish you a very happy account
Anniversary today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day today.
I thought your poem was very honorable to our blessed Veterans. I love our veterans, my father was one before he passed away. He spent his whole life in the military protecting and fighting for our beloved country. I thank you for paying tribute to all of our vets.


thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  [E]
Join the fun! We inspire reviewers through kindness and learning! Winner of six Quills!
by Maryann - House Martell

"Invalid Item" 
Anniversary Reviews email siggie


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
244
244
Review of Jake McCrary  
Review by Lisa Noe
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
*CakeB**Cat*A Story Poem Contest*Cat2**CakeP*



*Rainbowl*THIS IS A REVIEW FROM A Story Poem Contest, IT IS A GIFT FOR YOU!*Rainbowr*


*Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp*

*Poseyp*Title: Jake McCrary
*Poseyp*Author: Words Whirling 'Round

*Pawprints*Reviewed by:*Paw* Lisa Noe~Kittyluv~um~puppyluv
*Pawprints**Pawprints*

*Poseyp*First Impression: Hello, I am judging this item because you are an entrant in A Story-Poem Contest, Thanks for entering. I thought that this story poem was just awesome. I really loved it, it reminds me of my father and me and my husband also watch Gun Smoke and Wells Fargo every day. I just love the old western television shows and I love Clint Eastwood too. t few don't, am I right?
This is an excellent example of a story poem and I can only say that I don't have enough stars to give you.

*Poseyp*Conclusion: Thank you so kindly for entering my contest, I want to wish you good luck and say I hope you will enter again next month. have fun with your writing and God Bless You!

** Image ID #2212107 Unavailable **

Lisa Ann Noe
~~Image #6000 Sharing Restricted~~


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
245
245
for entry "Homemade Love" 
Review by Lisa Noe
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
*CakeB**Cat*A Story Poem Contest*Cat2**CakeP*



*Rainbowl*THIS IS A REVIEW FROM A Story Poem Contest, IT IS A GIFT FOR YOU!*Rainbowr*


*Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp*

*Poseyp*Title: Le Voyage Mdagnifique

*Poseyp*Author: Dave

*Poseyp*Type: Poetry
*Pawprints*Reviewed by:*Paw* Lisa Noe~Kittyluv~um~puppyluv
*Pawprints**Pawprints*
e:poseyp}First Impression: Hello, I am judging this item because you are an entrant in A Story-Poem Contest, Thanks for entering. I like what you did with this poem, however, I am not crazy about the form, there is too much repetition in it to suit me. I do think you did well with this form though. I think it is just a matter of personal preference is all.

*Poseyp*Suggestions: if you did the poem using a different form I would love it. because I know what you are saying and I like it then again who am I to tell you what form to use. I guess we all have personal preferences. since I like what you are saying and I see that you said it in the correct way for this format I'm giving you five stars.
*Poseyp*Conclusion: Thank you so kindly for entering my contest, I want to wish you good luck and say I hope you will enter again next month. have fun with your writing and God Bless You!

** Image ID #2212107 Unavailable **

Lisa Ann Noe
~~Image #6000 Sharing Restricted~~


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
246
246
Review by Lisa Noe
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
*CakeB**Cat*A Story Poem Contest*Cat2**CakeP*



*Rainbowl*THIS IS A REVIEW FROM A Story Poem Contest, IT IS A GIFT FOR YOU!*Rainbowr*


*Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp*

*Poseyp*Title: He whispered in her ear

*Poseyp*Author: turtlemoon-dohi

*Poseyp*Type: poetry

*Pawprints*Reviewed by:*Paw* Lisa Noe~Kittyluv~um~puppyluv
*Pawprints**Pawprints*

*Poseyp*First Impression: Hello, I am judging this item because you are an entrant in A Story-Poem Contest, Thanks for entering. oh what a lovely little poem.
it tells the sweet story of a grandpa and his darling granddaughter and the tiny lady bug which was really a real one and not a painting. this was an adorable idea for a story poem. good work! *Thumbsup*

*Poseyp*Suggestions:

*Poseyp*Conclusion: Thank you so kindly for entering my contest, I want to wish you good luck and say I hope you will enter again next month. have fun with your writing and God Bless You!

** Image ID #2212107 Unavailable **

Lisa Ann Noe
~~Image #6000 Sharing Restricted~~


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
247
247
Review of The Solemn Vow  
Review by Lisa Noe
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
*Rainbowl*"WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" *Rainbowr*
*Mushroomp**Tulipp**Tulipr**Tulipo**Tulipb**Mushroomr*
THIS IS A REVIEW BY THE ANNIVERSARY GROUP IT IS A GIFT FOR YOU!
WDC POWER REVIEWER'S REVIEW

*Poseyv*Reviewed by: *Paw* Lisa Noe*Cat2*

Hello April Desiree-I'm back! , I'd like to wish you a very happy account
anniversary this beautiful evening, I do so hope that you have had a wonderfully blessed day today. I thought that this was a very powerful and kind of frightening piece of writing. The title, " The Solemn Vow," is appropriate for this poetry.
I thought that the item description was also very helpful to the reader to tell them about the item.

The poem had a really good rhyme scheme and it also had a very nice rhythm.
you did a very nice job creating this item.

thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  [E]
Join the fun! We inspire reviewers through kindness and learning! Winner of six Quills!
by Maryann - House Martell

"Invalid Item" 
Anniversary Reviews email siggie


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
248
248
Review of The Mountains  
Review by Lisa Noe
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
*Rainbowl*"WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" *Rainbowr*
*Mushroomp**Tulipp**Tulipr**Tulipo**Tulipb**Mushroomr*
THIS IS A REVIEW BY THE ANNIVERSARY GROUP IT IS A GIFT FOR YOU!
WDC POWER REVIEWER'S REVIEW

*Poseyv*Reviewed by: *Paw* Lisa Noe*Cat2*

anniversary this lovely evening, I do so hope that you have had a w0nderfully blessed anniversary this day. Tomorrow is Independence Day in The United States, I hope you have a double celebration. This poem is about Mountains, I live in the mountains of Appalachia and I just love them.
They are beautiful and there are all of the perks of wildlife like blossoms and animals. I can't say enough great things about the mountains. Your title, "The Mountains," is appropriate for the item. This poetry is called a chain Haiku,

there are four Haiku connected together to create this on-chain. It is all about the mountains, and wildlife and it touches on the sounds and color of the hills.
The item description tells the reader a little bit about what the poem is.
It makes it helpful to the reader of the poem. You have don e an excellent job.
*Thumbsup*

thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  [E]
Join the fun! We inspire reviewers through kindness and learning! Winner of six Quills!
by Maryann - House Martell

"Invalid Item" 
Anniversary Reviews email siggie


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
249
249
Review of Sweet Sixteen  
Review by Lisa Noe
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
*Rainbowl*"WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" *Rainbowr*
*Mushroomp**Tulipp**Tulipr**Tulipo**Tulipb**Mushroomr*
THIS IS A REVIEW BY THE ANNIVERSARY GROUP IT IS A GIFT FOR YOU!
WDC POWER REVIEWER'S REVIEW

*Poseyv*Reviewed by: *Paw* Lisa Noe*Cat2*

Hello Gasper , I'd like to wish you a very happy account
anniversary This late evening, I do so hope that you have had a wonderfully blessed day today. tomorrow is Independence day so Happy Independence day as well.
The title of your poem, "Sweet Sixteen," is very appropriate as it is the age of which your sister lost her life. I think that the item description is helpful to the reader of this poem, and helps them to understand what the poem is about. If it does not then the Author's note should help to explain about your sister having an aneurysm and brain cancer her whole life. I think that this is a very sad story indeed. You tell a very sad story about your sister's last day on earth. I bet it is a very hard thing for you and your entire family to have to deal with. I will pray for you all tonight as I am sure this is hard on you. I saw a couple of little mistakes with your work.

plaining to any god that would listen that yes, she was sick but look how much she was worth.

God should always be capitalized, and so should the pronoun I, in referring to one's self.

thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  [E]
Join the fun! We inspire reviewers through kindness and learning! Winner of six Quills!
by Maryann - House Martell

"Invalid Item" 
Anniversary Reviews email siggie


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
250
250
for entry "Heat Index" 
Review by Lisa Noe
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
*CakeB**Cat*A Story Poem Contest*Cat2**CakeP*



*Rainbowl*THIS IS A REVIEW FROM A Story Poem Contest, IT IS A GIFT FOR YOU!*Rainbowr*


*Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp*

*Poseyp*Title: Antithetical Jottings (heat index)

*Poseyp*Author: He’s Brian K Compton

*Poseyp*Type: Poetry

*Pawprints*Reviewed by:*Paw* Lisa Noe~Kittyluv~um~puppyluv
*Pawprints**Pawprints*

*Poseyp*First Impression: Hello, I am judging this item because you are an entrant in A Story-Poem Contest, Thanks for entering. I thought that this was an amusing little tale. I recall my cousin did the same thing as that little girl did back in the day, in the 1980s. She got in trouble by the Sisters who ran the school.
I personally was very shy and would be way too embarrassed to do that.
I think the title was very clever and for a young man that must have been a treat!


*Poseyp*Suggestions: I didn't really see any mistakes with this item, I thought that it is well written,

*Poseyp*Conclusion: Thank you so kindly for entering my contest, I want to wish you good luck and say I hope you will enter again next month. have fun with your writing and God Bless You!

** Image ID #2212107 Unavailable **

Lisa Ann Noe
~~Image #6000 Sharing Restricted~~


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
4,249 Reviews · *Magnify*
Page of 170 · 25 per page   < >
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/profile/reviews/lisanoe/sort_by/r.review_creation_time DESC/sort_by_last/r.review_creation_time DESC/page/10