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Review of Elizabeth  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello {suser: }, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this item is in paragraph form.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: The theme is meeting in a store with a stranger leaving you to care for an infant.

*Moon* Flow: even and smooth

*Strawberry* Title: The title, Elizabeth is appropriate

*StarfishB* Suggestions: This was a great flash fiction story, one which I can relate to, I have no kids and would feel odd if someone asked me to care for an infant. I would be leary though, what if she didn't come back... You might be blamed for kidnapping the child. These days you never know,.

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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello fyn , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this item was structured using seven stanzas

*Butterfly2r* Theme: The theme was a birthday castle which in the end would flush lol.

*Moon* Flow: The item flowed well and had good grammar and spelling

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation is also correct,

*Sun* tone: the tone was light

*Strawberry* Title: The title,"Prompt Sept,6," I believe a better title is in order for such a good poem. something like "The unintended Castle," or something perhaps a bit better that you could come up with. really would add to the item.

*Dragonflyp* Image: I can just vision your castle.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: this is a really cute piece of writing. If you would like you could enter something like this in my contest
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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello Redtowrite , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.


*Think* Structure: you created this item using nine quatrains

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme is how we forget the elderly I believe.

*Moon* Flow: the item flowed well and the grammar and spelling were good.

*Exclaim* punctuation: thre was correct.

*Sun* tone: the tone was sad for me
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*Strawberry* Title: the title, "An Amazing Birdcage," is so good and appropriate it is sort of a metaphor isn't it.
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*Dragonflyp* Image: It brings to my mind very clear pictures of the people I used to care for when I was in training to be a nurse.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I was really saddened by your poem but that is good maybe it will cause more people to remember about these dearest of people. This poem was beautiful and needed to be said.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review of The Realization  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello TheBusmanPoet , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this item is structured using seven lines

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme is the cat eventually learns it can't catch the dot

*Moon* Flow: the item flowed well and the spelling and grammar were good.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation is correct.

*Sun* tone: the tone is coming of wisdom smooth laid back

*Strawberry* Title: The title, "Realization," is appropriate for the item.
the*Dragonflyp* Image: the image that is brought forth is of a kitten chasing a lite..
=t*StarfishB* Suggestions: This is so cute and true, my dog licks and paws at the cursor on my computer.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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for entry "Twin blessings" 
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)



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Hello Writer_Mike , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure:this item is structured using six couplets

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the item is about twins and the meals people left how they are all blessings
*Moon* Flow: the flow is good and the grammar and spelling are all good.

*Sun* tone: the tone is thankful

*Strawberry* Title: The title, "twin blessings," is an appropriate title.


*StarfishB* Suggestions: sounds like you have many blessings.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.0)



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Hello Jabberwb , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this item was structured using eight couplets.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: Look Out for Rock City or Ruby Falls.


*Moon* Flow: the item flows well with good grammar and spelling.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the puntuation is correct

*Strawberry* Title: The Title, "Ruby Falls % Rock City," is appropriate and really caught my attention, as I traveled my whole life between Biloxi, Mississippi, and Harlan, Kentucky, and I knew I was getting close to Kentucky when I saw all those barn signs. Lookout Mountain Next Right or what have you.



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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello Prosperous Snow celebrating , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this item is structured using about nine lines.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: The theme of this poem is your sacred place

*Moon* Flow: I thought this item flowed well. The spelling and grammar were both good.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation were okay

*Sun* tone: the tone is smooth

*Strawberry* Title: The title, " In my sacred place," is appropriate for this item.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I thought this was a very pretty poem. I truly liked it.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review of Closing in  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello Amber , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure:
this item was structured using long verse

*Butterfly2r* Theme: Feeling as if the walls are closing in on you.

*Moon* Flow: I thought that the item flowed well with good grammar and spelling

*Exclaim* punctuation: There was no punctuation used in this poem, which is okay.

*Sun* tone: the tone is sort of depressed

*Strawberry* Title: Thetitle, "Closing IN" , is appropriate for the item.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello Odessa Molinari , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: a few lines of writing,, to describe a beautiful location.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: The Travelog for Bard's Hall


*Moon* Flow: the item flowed well and it sounded like a dreamy albeit expensive place to visit.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation was correct.

*Sun* tone: the tone was prideful
*Strawberry* Title: The title"L'albergo Rigoletto," is a good title for this item.


*StarfishB* Suggestions: It really sounds as if you are advertising for the place, which there is nothing wrong with that, We like what we like.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review of Bonnie and Clyde  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)



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Hello Elaine Pitts , You requested that I give you a review of this item, "Bonnie and Clyde", I thought it was well written,

*Butterfly2r* Theme: it is about ti ill-fated
lovers, who robbed and killed together. A pair who were infamous.

*Moon* Flow: The item flowed well and it had good grammar and spelling.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation was correct to the best of my knowledge.

*Sun* tone: the tone was loving and smooth

*Strawberry* Title: The title, "Bonnie and Clyde," is predictable but works well with this item. I thought you did a fantastic job and I would like to tell you if you like to write story poems like this one you could enter
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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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*Poseyp*Title: Antithetical Jottings by RenownPoet/ House akuve abd a snoopy moon

*Poseyp*Author: He’s Brian K Compton

*Poseyp*Type: Poetry

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*Poseyp*First Impression: Hello, I am judging this item because you are an entrant in A Story-Poem Contest, Thanks for entering. I thought, as usual, you entered a really good read. I enjoyed your little poem and I thought the story value was good and clear. It was a nice and comfortable feel to it,

*Poseyp*Suggestions: I thought the grammar and spelling were okay and it was well rounded.

*Poseyp*Conclusion: Thank you so kindly for entering my contest, I want to wish you good luck and say I hope you will enter again next month. have fun with your writing and God Bless You!

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for entry "Puns of the Year" 
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hello sinbad, I came across this item on the newsfeed page and thought it was so true and so funny. You came up with some really good ones. I can't really say which pun I liked the best I did like the one about the alcohol on your hands and your liver. it was pretty funny. I know that I have washed my hands so much that they look like a dries old raisin or something.

thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello webtoot, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this item is structured using ten stanzas

*Butterfly2r* Theme: meek-keepers' miracle

*Moon* Flow: the item flowed well and had good spelling and grammar.


*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation looked correct to me.

*Sun* tone: outstanding

*Strawberry* Title: The title, "Miracle of the Meek-keepers," is appropriate for the item.



*StarfishB* Suggestions: There were no mistakes that I could find. You did a very nice job creating this item.

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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review of Nearly An Angel  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello Lou-Here By His Grace , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: You structured this item using six stanzas.


*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme is the love you have for your daughter.


*Moon* Flow: I thought this item flowed well and the grammar and spelling were both good.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation is okay as well.


*Sun* tone: the tone is very loving.

*Strawberry* Title: the title, "Nearly an Angel," is appropriate for this item.



*StarfishB* Suggestions: This item was very
well written and I enjoyed reading it.

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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Poseyp*Title: Mary Had a little lamb

*Poseyp*Author: weisblaize

*Poseyp*Type: poetry

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*Poseyp*First Impression: Hello, I am judging this item because you are an entrant in A Story-Poem Contest, Thanks for entering. Hey I also entered that Mary had a little lamb contest, that was a lot of fun. It was hard coming up with something dark to say. I liked your poem it kept to the prompt well. And it also followed all the rules.
*Poseyp*Suggestions: I did see a couple of tiny mistakes... first:

And told it all her woo,

it should read "...and told it all her woes
The next two I don't know if they are errors or if you are just purposely misspelling the words for some reason. Jezus' is Jesus and non is Nun. but all in all, you did a really good job.
*Poseyp*Conclusion: Thank you so kindly for entering my contest, I want to wish you good luck and say I hope you will enter again next month. have fun with your writing and God Bless You!

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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (3.5)



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Hello Laurie Razor , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this item is structured using only three lines , like a Haiku.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: It had a hard tune to understand.
. "Blind, Explore, Distraacr
*Moon* Flow: there was no flow to it.

*Exclaim* punctuation: there was no punctuation.

*Strawberry* Title: the title, the title was appropriate fir this poem
I would not use these colors it makes it hard to read I think.



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Review of Only Now a Tiara  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello Don Two , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: This is a sonnet of fourteen lines only one verse long.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: Finding something precious after ten years.

*Moon* Flow: I thought that this poem flowed very well, I enjoyed reading it and the grammar and spelling were good.

*Exclaim* punctuation: to the best of my knowledge the punctuation is correct.

*Sun* tone: loving is the tone.

*Strawberry* Title: The title, "Only Now a Tiara," is appropriate for this poem.


*StarfishB* Suggestions: I thought this sonnet was well written and good.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello Tim Chiu , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: you have structured this item using seven quatrains

*Butterfly2r* Theme:A worthwhile day in American History- spending spree

*Moon* Flow: Your poem flowed well, with good rhyme, and rhythm. The grammar and spelling were both up to par.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation was good.

*Strawberry* Title: The title, "An American Idiocy: Tender and Sweet", I believe the title is a bit long, I think I might leave off the ":Tender and Sweet" part.


*StarfishB* Suggestions: just try to shorten the title a bit, otherwise this is an excellent poem.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review of What If?  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello Sum1 , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: your poem is structured using six stanzas. aabbccdd etc.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme is what if things were different would we have love.


*Moon* Flow: I thought that your item flowed really well, the rhyme was good, and the grammar and spelling were also good.

*Exclaim* punctuation: The punctuation is correct to the best of my knowledge.

*Sun* tone: the tone is inquizitive.

*Strawberry* Title: the title, "What If?, " is perfect and appropriate for the piece.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I have no suggestions because I did not see any mistakes.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.0)



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Hello Dr M C Gupta , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Crayons10* Structure: The structure of this item is four quatrains.

• Written in abcb, 8-6-8-6 forma



{:moon} Flow: I thought the item flowed okay and the grammar was fine. the rhythm is good.

*Exclaim* punctuation: The punctuation looked okay to me

*Strawberry* Title: the title, "Slice of Pain: award winner"
I personally think is too much. "Slice of Pain" by itself would have been more than enough, the "award winner" just makes it look like you are tooting your own horn.
and in my opinion, is not needed.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: just leave off the "award winner" and it will improve your work. you can add that to the bottom of the page in an author's note.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello kimbro1, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: The structure of this review is just perfect, it is easy to read and it is complete.

*Butterfly2r* ThemeL this is a self-review of Dare+Double-Dare= Fire.

*Moon* Flow: This really doesn't count in a review of this sort.

*Exclaim* punctuation: Used properly, as was spelling, and grammar
I thought that this was a thorough and good review. I did think that the title was a little bit longer and makes you stumble when reading.

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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review of Dirty Laundry  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello Hera , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: written using only one verse.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme is dirty laundry

*Moon* Flow: I thought that the item flowed well and the grammar was correct as was the spelling.


*Exclaim* punctuation: The punctuation is also correct to the best of my knowledge.

*Sun* tone: subtle.

*Strawberry* Title: the title, "Dirty Laundry", is appropriate for this item.



*StarfishB* Suggestions: I thought this was a well-written piece of poetry, I know that it is some form, but I can't recall which one it is.



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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review of Broken heart  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.0)



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Hello Chris Breva , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: This piece of poetry is structured using three quatrains and a couplet.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: The theme is that your wife left you with a broken heart.

*Moon* Flow: I thought that the item flowed well and the spelling and grammar were correct.

*Exclaim* punctuation: I guess the punctuation is correct, I am not much at that.

*Sun* tone: the tone is sad

*Strawberry* Title: The title, "Broken Heart," is appropriate for the item.


*StarfishB* Suggestions: This is a sad poem and I wish you well, I hope you find a new person who will treat you well, as you deserve to be treated.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello Tim Chiu , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: You have created this poem using eight quatrains...


*Butterfly2r* Theme: The theme of this poem is love
and how we treasure it.

*Moon* Flow: I thought the item flowed really well and the grammar and spelling were both correct.

*Exclaim* punctuation: The punctuation was equally correct I believe.
*Sun* tone:

*Strawberry* Title: The title, "Love holds many Truths," is appropriate for this item..



*StarfishB* Suggestions: I thought this was a well-written piece of poetry.

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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello Aubrey's Play , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: You created two stanzas in this poem.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: The theme is that we are never alone.

*Moon* Flow: ought that the item flowed well and the spelling and grammar were good.

*Exclaim* punctuation: You chose with this poem not to use puctuation, which is okay.

*Sun* tone: the tone is soft and even.
*Strawberry* Title: The title, " You Never Walk Alone," is appropriate for this item.




*StarfishB* Suggestions: I thought you did a good job creating this little poem.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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