Hello Eelectrissy I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
I must say this piece of writing is not cut and easily understood.
The title is appropriate for the item, I can not make heads nor tales of the item desccription. Writ a Eel, What does that mean,, Is it even English... if not you should write out beside it the English meaning of what you are saying.
This was a romantic poem but I wonder if it is perhaps an R rated or higher piece of writing, the reason I say that is the last line.
Thank you for sharing this piece of with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
And Have Fun and stay safe!
Hello Don Two I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
This was a really nicely written piece of writing. The poem, entitled Buried Treasure, is a very good poem. The title is appropriate for the item. The item description was also very helpful. I enjoyed reading your poem. and look forward to reading future works by you.
I also thought that this item was very creative and artistic.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
And Have Fun and stay safe!
Hello Happy 2024! I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
I think you did a fabulous job on this item.th e title was appropriate and matched the [oem greatly. The item description was helpful. The poem itself was educational. I thought this was a nice piece of writing and I commend you on a job well done.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
And Have Fun and stay safe.
Hello Tema I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
this song about you and your children was very well written and I enjoyed reading it.
is it meant to be a ballad or some other form, I especially liked the chorus as it showed how you desperately wanted to go back to when your children were young.
That would be a wonderful thing if we could go back to the time in our lives that made us the happiest.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
And Have Fun and stay safe!
Hello grawitch I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
You start off with an excellent title for your poem. It has a helpful item description. I thought the in rhyming was very good and creative. I thought that you really applied your talent to this piece of writing and it shows. I did not see any mistakes of any kind.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
And Have Fun and stay safe!
Hello asinder I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer. This was a fine and appropriate title for your writing. This was a usual conversation before the pandemic. now nothing is usual except for wearing masks and being afraid of dying with the virus. You really did show a real conversation and I thought it was just great.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
And Have Fun and stay safe!
First Impression: Hello, I am judging this item because you are an entrant in A Story-Poem Contest, Thanks for entering. I am very happy that you entered my contest. Welcome to writing.com, entering contests id s great way to get in the groove of things around writing.com. I didn't mind entering the poem for you, but I do hope you now understand how to do it, because some of these contests won't let enter that way. I thought your poem was well written. It has a lot of poetic devices in it. you used assonance and alliteration, rhyme and rhythm. I thought that the story was very original and imaginative. I liked the poem and I think you did a very good job on it.
Suggestions: I did not see any with your writing. I thought you really put a lot of effort into your poem, you did a good job!
Conclusion: Thank you so kindly for entering my contest, I want to wish you good luck and say I hope you will enter again next month. have fun with your writing and God Bless You!
First Impression: Hello, I am judging this item because you are an entrant in A Story-Poem Contest, Thanks for entering. You may have had a little bit of trouble entering with the bitem:XXXXXXX within two brackets {. I am glad you entered though. This was a really nice little poem. I enjoyed it and it taught me something about a whinny. I wish you luck and hope you enter again for September.
Suggestions: I saw no mistakes. you have a very creative piece of writing. The story value was very nice and the poetry worked well.
Conclusion: Thank you so kindly for entering my contest, I want to wish you good luck and say I hope you will enter again next month. have fun with your writing and God Bless You!
Hello The StoryMaster, I would like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this month.I came across this item and looked it over, it appears I have once taken this quiz in the past, but I can't recall how well I did or what the answers were..
This item was very thorough and very difficult, I didn't know how to answer any of the questions. The answers were very difficult. I am with the "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"
my name is Lisa Noe. Have a pleasant Evening. And God Bless.
Hello J. Y. Sun, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.
Structure: the Haiku are all structured correctly with five syllables
seven syllables and finally five syllables per stanza.
Theme: you have created several Haiku with several different themes
usually it's good to stick to nature, animals and such.
Flow: this was far too broken with the punctuation there was no flow
punctuation: I am not sure but I don't believe you use punctuation in a Haiku,you could probably ask Dave at the Poet's Place, he could tell you for sure all of the rules for all forms of poetry.
Title: The title, I'm not sure but I believe "Haiku Again" would sound more appropriate and leave off the punctuation in the title.
Suggestions: I suggest to keep writing these using nature as an inspiration, do not use punctuation in the Haiku. and keep practicing. you'll do great if you just keep at it.
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Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.
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First Impression: Hello, I am judging this item because you are an entrant in A Story-Poem Contest, Thanks for entering. I thought that this was a beautiful and touching little poem. it was just precious. I love cats and I know that both dogs ansd cats can fill a void when we are so upset or sad. They are great, my Dog, Chewy, saved my life from depression. I thought this was a wonderful story and I am happy that you all found each other.
Suggestions: I thought the title was simple and sweet. I saw no mistakes of any kind.
Conclusion: Thank you so kindly for entering my contest, I want to wish you good luck and say I hope you will enter again next month. have fun with your writing and God Bless You!
Hello elizabethl, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.
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Structure: you structured this piece of poetry using five quatrains or stanzas with four lines.
Theme: The theme of this was a place you loved outside.
Flow: I thought that this item flowed well and that the grammar and spelling were both good.
punctuation: I guess it would be best to just use your own judgement because I am not well versed in punctuation.
Title: The title, "A Place to Hide" I thought that this was a good title and appropriate for the writing.
Suggestions: I thought that you did a fine job , good work.
Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.
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Hello Still Iam, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.
Structure: you have created a very nice piece of straight verse poetry.
Theme:This was about what you were thinking of when you
wrote this item.
Flow: I did think that your writing flowed writing flowed well, you also had good spelling and what seemed to be proper grammar.
punctuation: The punctuation was good or I think it was I am not well versed in punctuation rules. but I think it is okay not to use it when writing poetry.
tone:the tone seemed even
Title: the title, "Solace",, was appropriate for the item.
Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.
Hello Jay O'Toole, I am your reviewer of this piece this evening, my name isLisa Noe. I thought that this was poignant beautiful and patriotic.
I loved it. As one who sacrificed her father for our glorious country, I commend you on writing this item. I thank you for sharing this item and tell you to keep- writin g and I'll keep reading and God Bless You.
Hello Dark Fox, I am your reviewer this evening my name is Lisa Noe.
Your poem is a well-written piece of literature. I liked reading it I know that I will never let my feelings be fake or untrue. I only saw one mistake I believe.
After all true love can only be felt onse
in the above sentence, I think you mean once. not onse.
I thank you for sharing this item with me and I will keep reading and you should keep writing. God Bless You.
Hello Rhychus, I am your reviewer this evening, Lisa Noe.
I guess you'd better rush off and put on some clothes since these measly aliens caught you in the buff! Your little poem was really well written and had a good rhythm and rhyme. I really liked it. I am glad that you are going to warn us all...You keep writing and I'll keep reading, Thank you for sharing this item with me, God Bless You.
Hello 🌕 HuntersMoon, I am your reviewer this evening, _Lisa Noe.
I thought that this was a richly fantastic piece of writing. I loved it.
It is so patriotic and pays homage to our Veterans and the History of our Nation's Pledge of Allegiance. I am proud to be an American and I can tell that you are equally proud of our great Heritage. Thank you for sharing this item with me, God Bless you .
hello QueenNormaJeanGreeneggs&vegham, I am your reviewer this evening, Lisa Noe.
I found this little story to be quite amusing. It was surely imaginative and unique.
I think it is an awfully surprising turn of events. The title is appropriate for the item and the item description tells us that this was written for the Dialogue 500 contest.
I do hope that you won or at least placed in the contest. God Bless You.
THIS IS A REVIEW BY THE ANNIVERSARY GROUP IT IS A GIFT FOR YOU!
WDC POWER REVIEWER'S REVIEW
Reviewed by: Lisa Noe
Hello Rhyssa, I'd like to wish you a very happy account
anniversary , I do so hope that you are having a blessed day today.
I think that this -poem which is about your flower garden really has a lot of your thoughts throughout it.
The rain is terrible to knock the petals off of the flowers when it rains really hard. My favorite flowers are Hydrangeas, roses, and peony.
thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.
THIS IS A REVIEW BY THE ANNIVERSARY GROUP IT IS A GIFT FOR YOU!
WDC POWER REVIEWER'S REVIEW
Reviewed by: Lisa Noe
Hello Bernie, I'd like to wish you a very happy account
anniversary , I do so hope that you have a wonderfully blessed day today.
I thought this was a well-witten and poetic style of writing and I really loved the
title and thought it was so appropriate for the item. I also think that the item description was very helpful to the reader.
thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.
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