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Review of Mistaken  
Review by LiszyK
Rated: E | (4.0)
Love this bear:) Are you gonna do more? Mistaken was like the perfect title... But I need a follow up!!!:D
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Review by LiszyK
Rated: E | (4.5)
That was AMAZING! That was the perfect explanation of perseverance and pressing on through tough times. No matter where you come from, everyone goes through tough times. Your story was extremely encouraging and relate-able!

Some verses you could use might be:

James 1:2-3: Consider it pure joy, my brothers and sisters, whenever you face trials of many kinds, because you know that the testing of your faith produces perseverance.

1 Peter 1:8-9 : Though you have not seen him, you love him; and even though you do not see him now, you believe in him and are filled with an inexpressible and glorious joy, for you are receiving the end result of your faith, the salvation of your souls.

I really like that you added at the end that this is just your personal belief. A lot of Christians just say whatever they feel and think that it follows the bible, but most times it doesn't and it's just embarrassing. Bravo! That's all I can say!:D
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Review of Just A Baby  
Review by LiszyK
Rated: E | (4.5)
That poem was one of the truest things I think I have ever read. I'm in my teen years as it is and I can tell you that, even though I've only got so much experience with the real world, that it's a whole lot of masks and charades. People say one thing but do and mean another, wolves in sheep's clothing ready to tear you apart. This poem sound like it either comes from a very loving, protecting parent, or someone who will be one day. I greatly enjoyed that and will be reading more of what you have to say soon! Thank you for sharing!

-LiszyK
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Review by LiszyK
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow! That was AMAZING! I like that you write in the first person here, it makes it easier to associate with the character and understand her. I love the tech-world that she lives in! I was a bit confused if this was supposed to be in the future of the past because she has a chip in her arm, but she was carrying scrolls? Either way, I really enjoyed this! Her name is beautiful too! I can't wait to read more:)
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