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Review by Alex
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
This is very interesting. I actually wanted to continue reading!!!!!
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Review by Alex
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is really good,considering haikus are nearly impossible to write. For future suggestion make the reader more aware that you are talking about a season.
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Review of Rainy Night  
Review by Alex
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
I really like this. This has all the elements passion needs. I could feel the love which is great.
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Review of The Abyss  
Review by Alex
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This is really good. This has an amazing sense of rhyme and rhythm. I also like how you kept going through out the poem about the cold.
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Review by Alex
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Omg I love this! I take classes in poetry writing and this by far any better than mine! Please keep writing.
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Review by Alex
Rated: E | (4.0)
I really like this! I really enjoyed the references such as the yellow brick road, even though it is about Adam and Eve. This gives it a fun and modern twist.
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