Daniels's (llazyj) Reviews

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#4407949

Review of Dream

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Rated: E | (4.5)

Hello Bikerider,

I've enjoyed your poem very much, as a widow it has touched my heart.

As a writer, I found the first line of the second stanza reads a little awkward.
Maybe the cadence is off or maybe my cadence is off. ;)

I only wish I could dream like this...

Daniels

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#4403754

Review of Old man thoughts

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Rated: E | (4.5)

Very enjoyable poem.
Flows along nicely when read aloud.
Well done!

Daniels

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#4403645

Review of A Hot Bath

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Rated: E | (4.0)

I enjoyed your poem very much and felt it got stronger as it progressed.
The writing was much more vivid toward the end.
Overall very well done.
Write On!

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#4029477

Review of WDC : Writing Prompt

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Rated: E | (3.5)

This made me smile and giggle a bit. I would like to see a few more commas. But overall, a great and enjoyable read.

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#3035719

Review of Snowflake

Review by Daniels

Rated: E | (4.0)

Hi Dave, Love the poem. The imagery brings to mind days when I was little, playing in the snow and the huge snowflakes gently drifting down. It is ruined, however, by the reality of the last twelve hours or so of blizzard we are in the middle of. Snow flying vertical over cows and their babies. Drifts piling up as we speak. But...I still love the poem. I enjoy free verse. Later this month I am to attend a workshop givin by Ted Kooser. Hoping to get back to the writing soon.

Daniels-A rancher with a writer inside.

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#2783130

Review of The Stranger

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Rated: ASR | (4.0)

Hey, A very nice read. It is nice to read some cowboy poetry here at Writing.Com. Do you think they would give cowboy poetry its own niche if there was enough interest? Would be nice and maybe would draw some more cowboy poets to our website. Thanks for sharing. Hope you will check out my port. A little of everything there and not much cowboy poetry yet. Write On!

Daniels...A rancher with a writer inside.

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#2783127

Review of Old Horse or The West has Really Changed

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Rated: E | (4.5)

Hey, Nice to read some cowboy poetry for a change. Very nice read. Wonder if we could get Writing.Com to give Cowboy Poetry its own little niche? Would be nice and could maybe draw in some more cowboy poets. Thank you for sharing. If you have time will you check my port? There is a little of everything there. Maybe not much cowboy poetry, mostly because I didn't figure anyone would read it. Ha! Write On!

Daniels...A rancher with a writer inside.

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#2376439

Review of Boise City

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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)

I enjoyed your poem very much. I thought the imagery was very good. And your use of metaphors was good. I could see the bridges and prairie dogs. The first stanza was a little weak for me, but I'm no expert by a long ways. I hope to be able to write as well someday. Thank you for sharing your poem. Daniels

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#2375163

Review of THE DREAM

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Rated: E | (4.5)

I liked your poem very much. I just started the fundamentals of poetry class and haven't as yet gotten any feedback, so I can't say that I have any expertise. But I understood the meaning and I identified totally with what you were saying. It sounds good to the ear and rolls off the tongue nicely when read aloud. Thanks for a good read. Daniels

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#2371031

Review of A discovered and deciphered document.

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Rated: E | (4.0)

Well done. I got sucked in and wanted to know more about this new world. Will we do it right this time? I am not qualified to review your grammer so I won't pretend to. Good idea, I think you should expand on this if you haven't already. Keep writing and please except my small token of appreciation. Daniels

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#2362303

Review of TOO COCKY BY HALF

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)

Loved it. Very humorous story of a not so humorous turnout gives people perspective. Pets try our patience, but give us so much in return. I hope you will check out my writing attemps. Later today I will be including a piece about my own trying bird.