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Review of Not a Word Spoken  
Review by Lostwordsmith
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi, I just read "Not a Word Spoken"

I like the sentiment of the poem, breakups without closure are not kind.

The flow of the poem seems a bit choppy, but the rhyme is consistent.

I liked the simplicity of the second stanza the best, you said much with few words, well done.

Thank you for sharing this, I hope to read more of your work in the future and I wish you well in all of your future writing endeavors.
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Review by Lostwordsmith
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, I have found another of your poems, and again, I am in awe of your talent. You state obvious truths the truths we as a race seem to prefer to ignore and relate them in a way that makes the reader think, reflect and understand.

I am so glad that I read this, it was fantastic and I do hope to stumble upon more of your work in the future.
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Review by Lostwordsmith
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi I just read "Bless This Firetruck" which I found in the Read and Review section.

What a lovely sentiment. Firefighters and first responders do so much for our communities. Your rhyme scheme and flow work very well and fit the subject quite nicely.

Thank you for sharing this. I hope you have a lovely day.
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Review by Lostwordsmith
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, I just read "It's Not Real in Your Hands"

This poem is so deep and so meaningful. I love your style and the way it feels almost like a rant, but not. The whole things is so very true. In short this poem left me awe-struck. You have an unbelievable talent and I look forward to reading more of your work.

Thank you so much for sharing this.
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Review by Lostwordsmith
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello,

I just read your poem "Writin' is Fightin'" which I found in the read a newbie section. I like the idea of this poem and a fellow poet can understand the feeling. I particularly liked the second and third lines, they are quite lovely. I liked the assonance in the third line, it worked very well.

Thank you for sharing this, I am so glad I read it this morning. I hope to read more of your work in the future.
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