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Review by Lovina
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Sew-no-more!

*Starw* Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them! *StarW*

Overall Impression: Love it! Much more fun than the original!

Spelling/Grammar: I found only a couple of spelling/grammar errors for you to consider:

1. In this section - When Papa Bear had enough of their goofing off at the table.
He slammed his paws down hard and loud on the floor that it shook the cabin and he growled at his young bears.
- you may want to change the period after table into a comma.

2. In this section - Now they are a family of six. And they lived Happily Ever After - "are" and "lived", two different tenses, you may want to revise.

Readability: A well-written and fun little read!

Suggestions: I have no other suggestions for you to ponder.

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Paw*

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Review of Poor Muppett  
Review by Lovina
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Greg M!

*Starw* Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them! *StarW*

Overall Impression: I most definitely do NOT want to meet your lizards!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well written and entertaining little read.

Suggestions: I have no suggestions for you to consider.

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Paw*

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Review by Lovina
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi kzn!

*Starw* Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them! *StarW*

Overall Impression: An excellent start to a classic western.

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well written and entertaining read.

Suggestions: The idea of cold beer wasn't a thing until 1870 - in New York. I think a small burg in Arizona probably wouldn't even have such a thing as refrigeration in order to serve up a cold one. Just a thought.

Write on!

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Lovina *Paw*

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Review of Soulmate Gone  
Review by Lovina
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Whitney!

*Starw* Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them! *StarW*

Overall Impression: Such a sad little poem!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well written and lovely read.

Suggestions: For some reason in this line - The look in your eyes as you told me you love me - I keep wanting to read it as "loved" not "love". It might just be me. *BigSmile*

Write on!

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Lovina *Paw*

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Review by Lovina
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Angus!

*Starw* Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them! *StarW*

Overall Impression: Why, I feel like I've just been hornswoggled! What happened to the "Happy" ending? *Rolling*

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well written and entertaining read.

Suggestions: I have no suggestions for you to consider, unless, of course, you wish to reconsider that ending? Didn't think so.

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Paw*

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Review by Lovina
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi Norbanus!

*Starw* Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them! *StarW*

Overall Impression: She is guilty as sin (or is it Cin?)!

Spelling/Grammar: I found only a couple of spelling/grammar errors for you to consider:

1. In this section - a bug up my ass to quite the police force - you may want to change "quite" to "quit".

2. In this section - how she died and look for hidden any clues - you may want to switch places with "hidden" and "any".

Readability: A well written and entertaining read.

Suggestions: I have no suggestions for you to ponder.

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Paw*

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Review by Lovina
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi TheNoMonster!

*Starw* Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them! *StarW*

Overall Impression: Me thinks I would rather have a Pirate than a Santa!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well written and entertaining read.

Suggestions: I have no suggestions for you to consider.

Write on!

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Lovina *Paw*

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Review of THE CATCHERS  
Review by Lovina
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hi tosca!

*Starw* Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them! *StarW*

Overall Impression: An hilariously funny learning experience!

Spelling/Grammar: I found only a couple of spelling/grammar errors for you to consider:

1. In this section - Pete smiled at the crazy though of such sweet revenge - you may want to add a "t" on the end of "though".

2. In this section - Five hours, it a miracle we’re still alive. - you may want to change "it" to "it's".

Readability: A well written and entertaining read.

Suggestions: I have no suggestions for you to ponder.

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Paw*

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Review by Lovina
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi W.D. Wilcox!

*Starw* Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them! *StarW*

Overall Impression: I did not see that coming! A very interesting point of view!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well written and entertaining little read!

Suggestions: I have no suggestions for you to consider.

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Paw*

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Review by Lovina
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi spidey!

*Starw* Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them! *StarW*

Overall Impression: Great scot! I thought I would do better than that! I guess 8 out of 10 isn't too awful, apparently I need to watch Charlie Brown again.

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well written and entertaining little quiz.

Suggestions: My only suggestion would be to add more questions.

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Paw*

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Review by Lovina
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Lumino!

*Starw* Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them! *StarW*

Overall Impression: Love that old timey prose!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well written and entertaining read!

Suggestions: You may want to break up that last sentence, it is overly long and becomes a bit confusing.

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Paw*

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Review by Lovina
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi Hatsuda!

*Starw* Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them! *StarW*

Overall Impression: What do you know, a good witch!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well-written and entertaining read!

Suggestions: I have no suggestions for you to consider.

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Paw*

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Review by Lovina
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi L.A. Grawitch -

*Starw* Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them! *StarW*

Overall Impression: Great scot! So that's where demons come from!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well-written and entertaining read!

Suggestions: I have no suggestions for you to consider.
Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Paw*

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Review by Lovina
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi MD Maurice!

*Starw* Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them! *StarW*

Overall Impression: A wonderful new view on an old adage!

Spelling/Grammar: I found only a couple of spelling/grammar errors for you to consider:

1. In this section - The statute had been a bit of comical license - you may want to change "statute" to "statue".

2. In this section - spell on the local women who ran carrier pigeons - you may want to change "women" to "woman" since the next sentence claims only a single female.

3. In this section - He had encouraged Olivia craft nasty spells - you may want to insert a "to" after "Olivia".

Readability: A well-written and entertaining read!

Suggestions: I have no suggestions for you to ponder.

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Paw*

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Review by Lovina
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi hullabaloo22!

*Starw* Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them! *StarW*

Overall Impression: Poor Susan! That type of harassment would turn anyone into a witch!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well-written and entertaining read!

Suggestions: I have no suggestions for you to consider.

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Paw*

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Review of The Sacrifice  
Review by Lovina
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Tanith -

*Starw* Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them! *StarW*

Overall Impression: Love it! I sure hope you have been entering the:
FORUM
Twisted Tales Contest  (13+)
A monthly contest for stories with a twist. Get 500 GPs for entering! Jan round open!
#1269187 by Arakun the Twisted Raccoon
- you seem to have a knack for such things!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well-written and fun little read!

Suggestions: I have no suggestions for you to consider.

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Paw*

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Review by Lovina
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi LegendaryMask!

*Starw* Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them! *StarW*

Overall Impression: Wonderful, especially since you made it a John Wayne picture!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well-written and entertaining read.

Suggestions: I have no suggestions for you to consider.

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Paw*

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Review of The orphan girls  
Review by Lovina
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi K.HBey!

*Starw* Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them! *StarW*

Overall Impression: Such a very sad story!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: It is obvious that English is not your first language because the syntax is a little off, but I applaud your efforts (to be fluent in 3 languages is quite a feat, I am so jealous!) and the gist of your story came through loud and clear!

Suggestions: I have no suggestions for you except to keep it up, I loved your little story, especially the style you used.

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Paw*

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Review by Lovina
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Jeannie!

*Starw* Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them! *StarW*

Overall Impression: Definitely NOT my type of vacation! I am not a fan of alligators!

Spelling/Grammar: I found only one spelling/grammar error for you to consider:

1. In this sentence - Dianne turned onto the road and continue driving - you may want to change "continue" to "continued".

Readability: A well written and entertaining read.

Suggestions: You may want to change "decided" to "decide" in your title description.

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Paw*

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Review by Lovina
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hi addie.cass!

*Starw* Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them! *StarW*

Overall Impression: A very interesting main character!

Spelling/Grammar: I found only a couple of spelling/grammar errors for you to consider:

1. In this sentence - Constant adrenaline rushes I'd lived for in my past life was simply missing now - you may want to change "was" to "were".

2. In this sentence - I was certainlyin no shape to help someone - you may want to add a space after "certainly".

3. In this sentence - went to prison or died before they turn thirty-five - you may want to change "turn" to "turned".

Readability: A well written and interesting read.

Suggestions: I have no suggestions for you, it sounds like an intriguing plot!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Paw*

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Review of Last Words  
Review by Lovina
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Ezekiel Stephens!

*Starw* Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them! *StarW*

Overall Impression: That is one cure I have never heard before!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well written and very entertaining little read!

Suggestions: I have no suggestions however, I did expect the petulant young man to turn out to be an actual pastor!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Paw*

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Review of Wet Weather  
Review by Lovina
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Ari Lox!

*Starw* Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them! *StarW*

Overall Impression: Very interesting concept!

Spelling/Grammar: I found only one spelling/grammar error for you to consider:

1. In this sentence - Lightning strike where his gaze lingers too long - you may want to add an "s" after "strike".

Readability: A well written and interesting read.

Suggestions: I have no suggestions but I would like to know if my impression of this story is correct: The rain person is everyone at one time or another?

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Paw*

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Review of Silent Secrets  
Review by Lovina
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Linn Browning!

*Starw* Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them! *StarW*

Overall Impression: It is always good to find a refreshing new plot!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well written and entertaining read!

Suggestions: I have no suggestions for you to consider!

Write on!

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Lovina *Paw*

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Review of The Return  
Review by Lovina
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Octavius!

*Starw* Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them! *StarW*

Overall Impression: And the plot thickens!

Spelling/Grammar: I found only a couple of spelling/grammar errors for you to consider:

1. In this sentence - ringed planet through an thick clear glass - you may want to change "an" to "a".
2. In this sentence - The whale unleashes a red beam from is antennae - you may want to change "is" to "its".
3. In this sentence - The jet speeds towards Methone circles around and catapults - you may want to add a comma after "Methone".
4. In this sentence - as the jet cruise towards the mechanical beast - you may want to add an "s" to "cruise".
5. In this sentence - C’mon C’ mon he mumbles as more shockwaves - you may want to add quotation marks and commas at the beginning.
6. In this sentence - However, as he watch the wreckage, - you may want to add "ed" to "watch".

Readability: A quick little read.

Suggestions: Giving the man a name at some point eliminates the repetitive "the man".

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Paw*

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Review of Sound Like You  
Review by Lovina
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Amy!

*StarBr**Starw* Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them! *StarW**Starbr*

Overall Impression: Fun and informative!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well written and interesting rant! (Also, important!)

Suggestions: I have no suggestions for you, but I would like to add, in my defense only (I have no idea how others feel on the subject), some words are just plain fun to say. Unfortunately, a lot of those fun words are not used anymore and I find that to be a very pernicious attitude! *Rolling*

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Paw*

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