Overall Impression: Poor Victor, he had better hurry up and get home!
Spelling/Grammar: I found only a few spelling/grammar errors for you to consider:
1. In this section - to make sure we're still for sushi tonight - you may want to insert "on" after "still".
2. In this section - you've go some explaning to do - you may want to add an "i" to "explaining".
3. In this section - Of corse, it's hard to be tough - you may want to add a "u" to "course".
4. In this section - you ever wan't to see her again - you may want to change "wan't" to "want".
5. In this section - while it is in you possession - you may want to change "you" to "your".
Readability: An entertaining little read! That boy better have a good explanation as to why he is late for his date!
Overall Impression: A wonderful tale of the fantastic!
Spelling/Grammar: I found only a couple of spelling/grammar errors for you to consider:
1. In this section - Do I have to take anything me, Mother? - you may want to insert "with" before "me".
2. In this section - Rose, suitable dressed for the outing - you may want to change "suitable" to "suitably".
3. In this section - A person need to very clever to know about such things - you may want to change "need" to "needs" and add "be" before "very".
Readability: A well-written and entertaining read! If only it were that easy!
Spelling/Grammar: I found only a couple of spelling/grammar errors for you to consider:
1. In this section - green Earth was scotched, battered - I think you meant "scorched" instead of "scotched".
2. In this section - they either and run and hide - you may want to eliminate the extra "and".
3. In this section - once the fear of going outside has abandoned - you may want to insert "been" after "has".
Readability: A well-written and entertaining read! Well done!
Overall Impression: A very interesting office romance!
Spelling/Grammar: I found only a couple of spelling/grammar errors for you to consider:
1. In this section - that Gavin started to whether Janie had left the room - I think you meant to insert "wonder" after "to".
2. In this section - The still had a project to work on - I think you meant "They" instead of "The".
Readability: A well-written and compelling read! Well done!
Overall Impression: A very interesting little mystery!
Spelling/Grammar: I found only a couple of spelling/grammar errors for you to consider:
1. In this section - and as te solution has - you may want to put an "h" in "te".
2. In this section - too much about itb but need - you may want to eliminate that extra "b".
3. In this section - chair of strange green color - you may want to insert an "a" after "of".
4. In this section - Did the papers pulish some answers - you may want to put that extra "b" in "pulish".
5. In this section - than a few feed of dirt and grass - I think you meant "feet" instead of "feed".
Readability: An intriguing read! The key to an exceptional mystery is when the reader is privy to all of the information but only the hero can put it all together.
Overall Impression: Should be an interesting Star Trek episode!
Spelling/Grammar: I found only a couple of spelling/grammar errors for you to consider:
1. In this section - I might have know Harry Mudd - you may want to change "know" to "known".
2. In this section - Spock hand the kettle to his mother - you may want to change "hand" to "handed".
Readability: An entertaining little read! I know it was for a prompt but the story behind how a copper kettle can stop an intergalactic war should be interesting to say the least!
Spelling/Grammar: I found only a couple of spelling/grammar errors for you to consider:
1. In this section - So simple words like danger or threat brain region associated with fear - you may have missed some words between "threat" and "brain".
2. In this section - Melissa could look up even open her mouth - you may want to insert "or" after "up".
3. In this section - This when I’m supposed to be out - you may want to insert "is" after "This".
Readability: A very interesting read! It reminds me a bit of the Matrix, if she hadn't called him to the library to warn him would he still be alive?
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