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Review of FSFS MB Challenge  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Chris Breva!

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Overall Impression: Alfred sounds like an interesting character - have you used him in a story yet?

Spelling/Grammar: I found only one spelling/grammar error for you to consider:

1. In this section - He ids always looking for opportunities to discuss - you may want to change "ids" to "is".

Readability: A well written and interesting little read.

Suggestions: You may want to break up the writing into paragraphs like a story, it will make it easier to read.

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Lovina *Paw*

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Review of Friends  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Pen Man Shep!

*Starw* Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them! *StarW*

Overall Impression: You're gone for years and you come back with this!? I'm impressed and well done! I understand those types of "friends" all too well.

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well written and sad little read.

Suggestions: I have no suggestions for you to consider.

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Review of Drones  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi HikerAngel!

*Starw* Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them! *StarW*

Overall Impression: Instant karma! Gotta like it!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well written and entertaining read.

Suggestions: I have no suggestions for you to consider.

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi Jeff!

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Overall Impression: HaHa! Done that, Wisconsin to New Mexico!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well written and entertaining little read.

Suggestions: I have no suggestions for you to consider.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Jeannie!

*Starw* Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them! *StarW*

Overall Impression: I have had days like that!!

Spelling/Grammar: I found only a couple of spelling/grammar errors for you to consider:

1. In this section - and she feel her hair stand on ends as all color drained - you may want to change "feel" to "felt" and "ends" to "end".

2. In this section - She walked directly into elevator - you may want to add a "the" after "into".

Readability: A well written and fun little read!

Suggestions: I have no suggestions for you to ponder.

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Lovina *Paw*

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Review of Bread and Needles  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Boulden Shade!

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Overall Impression: A very interesting take on the perils (and greed) of progress!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well written and entertaining read!

Suggestions: I have no suggestions for you to consider.

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for entry "O Coffee Tree" 
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi Prosperous Snow!

*Starw* Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them! *StarW*

Overall Impression: Oooh, COFFEE!

Spelling/Grammar: I found only one spelling/grammar error for you to ponder:

1. In this section - Each day my peculator sings, - you may want to add an "r" to "peculator".

Readability: A fun and entertaining rewrite! I think I would like a coffee tree for Christmas! *CoffeeG*

Suggestions: I have no suggestions for you to consider.

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Review of A Mind for Sale  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hi jdennis!

*Starw* Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them! *StarW*

Overall Impression: What a very strange place this is!

Spelling/Grammar: I found only a couple of spelling/grammar errors for you to consider:

1. In this section - pain and waded into a knot on the ground - you may want to change "waded" to "wadded".

2. In this section - “Father, Klignen!” She gasped - you may want to eliminate the comma.

Readability: A well written and entertaining read!

Suggestions: I have no suggestions for you to ponder.

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Lovina *Paw*

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Review of Poor Muppett  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Greg M!

*Starw* Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them! *StarW*

Overall Impression: I most definitely do NOT want to meet your lizards!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well written and entertaining little read.

Suggestions: I have no suggestions for you to consider.

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Lovina *Paw*

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Review of Soulmate Gone  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Whitney!

*Starw* Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them! *StarW*

Overall Impression: Such a sad little poem!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well written and lovely read.

Suggestions: For some reason in this line - The look in your eyes as you told me you love me - I keep wanting to read it as "loved" not "love". It might just be me. *BigSmile*

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Lovina *Paw*

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi TheNoMonster!

*Starw* Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them! *StarW*

Overall Impression: Me thinks I would rather have a Pirate than a Santa!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well written and entertaining read.

Suggestions: I have no suggestions for you to consider.

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Lovina *Paw*

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Review of THE CATCHERS  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hi tosca!

*Starw* Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them! *StarW*

Overall Impression: An hilariously funny learning experience!

Spelling/Grammar: I found only a couple of spelling/grammar errors for you to consider:

1. In this section - Pete smiled at the crazy though of such sweet revenge - you may want to add a "t" on the end of "though".

2. In this section - Five hours, it a miracle we’re still alive. - you may want to change "it" to "it's".

Readability: A well written and entertaining read.

Suggestions: I have no suggestions for you to ponder.

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Lovina *Paw*

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi W.D. Wilcox!

*Starw* Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them! *StarW*

Overall Impression: I did not see that coming! A very interesting point of view!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well written and entertaining little read!

Suggestions: I have no suggestions for you to consider.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi spidey!

*Starw* Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them! *StarW*

Overall Impression: Great scot! I thought I would do better than that! I guess 8 out of 10 isn't too awful, apparently I need to watch Charlie Brown again.

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well written and entertaining little quiz.

Suggestions: My only suggestion would be to add more questions.

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Lovina *Paw*

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi Hatsuda!

*Starw* Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them! *StarW*

Overall Impression: What do you know, a good witch!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well-written and entertaining read!

Suggestions: I have no suggestions for you to consider.

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Paw*

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi MD Maurice!

*Starw* Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them! *StarW*

Overall Impression: A wonderful new view on an old adage!

Spelling/Grammar: I found only a couple of spelling/grammar errors for you to consider:

1. In this section - The statute had been a bit of comical license - you may want to change "statute" to "statue".

2. In this section - spell on the local women who ran carrier pigeons - you may want to change "women" to "woman" since the next sentence claims only a single female.

3. In this section - He had encouraged Olivia craft nasty spells - you may want to insert a "to" after "Olivia".

Readability: A well-written and entertaining read!

Suggestions: I have no suggestions for you to ponder.

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Paw*

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Review of The Sacrifice  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Tanith -

*Starw* Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them! *StarW*

Overall Impression: Love it! I sure hope you have been entering the:
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- you seem to have a knack for such things!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well-written and fun little read!

Suggestions: I have no suggestions for you to consider.

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Lovina *Paw*

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi LegendaryMask!

*Starw* Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them! *StarW*

Overall Impression: Wonderful, especially since you made it a John Wayne picture!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well-written and entertaining read.

Suggestions: I have no suggestions for you to consider.

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Lovina *Paw*

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Jeannie!

*Starw* Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them! *StarW*

Overall Impression: Definitely NOT my type of vacation! I am not a fan of alligators!

Spelling/Grammar: I found only one spelling/grammar error for you to consider:

1. In this sentence - Dianne turned onto the road and continue driving - you may want to change "continue" to "continued".

Readability: A well written and entertaining read.

Suggestions: You may want to change "decided" to "decide" in your title description.

Write on!

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Lovina *Paw*

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Review of Last Words  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Ezekiel Stephens!

*Starw* Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them! *StarW*

Overall Impression: That is one cure I have never heard before!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well written and very entertaining little read!

Suggestions: I have no suggestions however, I did expect the petulant young man to turn out to be an actual pastor!

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Paw*

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Review of The Return  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Octavius!

*Starw* Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them! *StarW*

Overall Impression: And the plot thickens!

Spelling/Grammar: I found only a couple of spelling/grammar errors for you to consider:

1. In this sentence - ringed planet through an thick clear glass - you may want to change "an" to "a".
2. In this sentence - The whale unleashes a red beam from is antennae - you may want to change "is" to "its".
3. In this sentence - The jet speeds towards Methone circles around and catapults - you may want to add a comma after "Methone".
4. In this sentence - as the jet cruise towards the mechanical beast - you may want to add an "s" to "cruise".
5. In this sentence - C’mon C’ mon he mumbles as more shockwaves - you may want to add quotation marks and commas at the beginning.
6. In this sentence - However, as he watch the wreckage, - you may want to add "ed" to "watch".

Readability: A quick little read.

Suggestions: Giving the man a name at some point eliminates the repetitive "the man".

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Paw*

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Review of Left Alone  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi AgentPebbles!

*StarBr**Starw* Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them! *StarW**Starbr*

*Penw* I am not good at reviewing poetry, I care not for the rules, I only know what I like.

Overall Impression: So sad! The loss of a best friend is so hard to take!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well written and sad little read.

Suggestions: I have no suggestions for you to consider.

Write on!

Thanks much,
Lovina *Paw*

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Review of Buble's Bubble  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi Thankful Sonali!

*StarBr**Starw* Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them! *StarW**Starbr*

I am not good at reviewing poetry, I care not for the rules, I only know what I like!

Overall Impression: You brought a smile! *BigSmile* Thank you!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well written and entertaining read!

Suggestions: I have no suggestions for you to consider. I really liked your unique form!

Write on!

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Lovina *Paw*

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Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
Hi KMH!

*StarBr**Starw* Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them! *StarW**Starbr*

Overall Impression: Psychology Major? *BigSmile* Sorry, couldn't resist! I agree with your assessment one hundred percent!

Spelling/Grammar: I found no spelling/grammar errors to report and no additions or deletions to ponder! Awesome! *Cool*

Readability: A well written and entertaining read.

Suggestions: I have no suggestions for you to consider.

Write on!

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Lovina *Paw*

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Review of Cinderella Red  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi MatildaRose!

*StarBr**Starw* Please keep in mind these are just my opinions and they carry only the weight you give them! *StarW**Starbr*

I am not good at reviewing poetry, I care not for the rules, I know only what I like.

Overall Impression: A current day suicide being compared to the Cinderella fairy tale, so sad!

Spelling/Grammar: I found only a couple of spelling/grammar errors for you to consider:

1. In this section - A poem bases on the imperfect perfect amongst us - you may want to change "bases" to "based".

2. In this section - Who cut of her toes, for him to kiss her - you may want to change "of" to "off".

Readability: A well-written and interesting read.

Suggestions: I have no suggestions for you to ponder, I did, however, find the form very interesting and fast paced.

Write on!

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Lovina *Paw*

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