|Hi! I'm here to review :)
Up front: I'm no professional. Any opinions are mine and mine alone, and as such may be disregarded as necessary for you to grow. Take all opinions as you will.
Ok, I actually really like this piece. It's funny, creative, and shows a ton of outside-the-box thinking. Great job with the plot and characters.
There are some errors that I see, but overall, not bad. I've definitely seen worse. I always say the good part of errors is they're easily fixed :)
Here's what I see (my additions/subtractions/comments are in red):
I KNOW YOU WANT TO HELP CHANGE LIVES. INSIDE ARE THREE VERY MAGICAL SEAT CUSHONS CUSHIONS THAT ONLY WANT TO BE USEFUL. (I would add a paragraph break and a hyphen here)
A red one ., wWhich looks enthusiastic and fearless.
And the most stuffed cushion out of the group,which looks shy,and loving, and a tad naïve.
Being a detective isn't always as exciting as it seems." she mentions. I would change this to a different word...maybe admits?
My purpose is to protect you from those grotesque creatures., Kknown as Pains.
If I fail., Wwhich is possible if we speak in terms of chances and predictability and... I degreasedigress.
It might not be the most glamour'sglamorous task to have
Doesn't she see I have my hands full already with non-magic criminals.?"
That's all the spelling/errors I saw. On to the characters...
I love them. They each have distinct voices, personalities, and cool roles. Good job.
Overall, I really like this piece, and I hope to see more :)