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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Wow this is deep! Its amazing how love can hurt you in many ways! You put a lot emotion into this poem! I see the descriptions that paint a picture in your mind as you read this! The imagery is so defined as you read this! I hope that you have another love now so that you are happy! I hope to come back to your port and see more of your work!! I think you are a great poet!!! Have a great day and Keep On Writing!!!






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Review of Our Timeless Love  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This i a beautiful poem that I see nothing wrong with! I love all the imagery that you can picture with the descriptions of the word. I love how you could where you where you are "Now intertwined in heartfelt, joyous belief'" paints a beautiful picture with the imagery and descriptions!!! I hope that you are still together and hope to see more items to review! Keep ON Writing!!!




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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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! This a great little piece of writing. My son and his great grandpa were really close! This reminded me of that "they would go chaise the girls." I am so glad that you and your grandson have a great bond like that!





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Rated: E | (5.0)
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! I think this is a great story about prayer and how it really does work! I am so glad you have your daughter! Sorry about your still born. That to me is worse than a miscarriage. I am glad you were able to pray for her to win and come back to you! Its amazing when every little thing is important including counting little fingers and toes to make sure they are still there! Good luck and Keep On Writing!





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Review of The Prayer Quilt  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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! I have to say that this story gave me the goose bumps!! I am glad that "Trina" gave the quilt to her best friend! Did she ever find out if she was maligment or not with spot in her lungs? This had a great story like. Lots of description about the quilt with the card and all! I love that it gives imagery and you see exactly what you are reading! I wish you good luck!





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Review of Prison  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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! I have been to IN state prison for a ex to visit. I think that it is really hard to really let you brother know how you really feel but he will know you love him always in there! I feel for you and know that they read and see everything that you send of give to them there! They need to the love from you while they are there! I wish you good luck! Have a great day and Keep on Writing!





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Rated: E | (4.5)
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! This is a beautiful poem of loss, and I hope that every year it gets a little easier for you! I think you did a great job with your feelings! Its hard to understand death on top of losing someone and it hurts so bad. Thank you for your entry! Keep On Writing!!!




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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is an awesome group to be in!! They have everything that we can do to write the novel in November! I glad this is a helpful group eventually I will need inspiration and good kick in the boot to get going! I cant wait to see where my novel turns out when were done!!! Have a great writing day!!!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
As always this is great story like all the others that start off as Writer's Cramp submission. This was ac cute way to introduce another cat to the story! I love how Magnus has his human trained to get up when he is ready to eat and not when the human wants to feed him in the morning! That tabby cat probably was a cutie too!


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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is a beautiful webpage! I love the way you have set it up with the Earth Day websites. I love how you have many of the WDC members who have been quoted with their ideas of a Earth Day too. I saw that there is on that link on here that is an invalid link. I have gone through and look at the links you have on here! There are some really talented members that feel the same passion as you for keeping the earth clean and making it a place forever that we will always be here to enjoy!! I cant wait to read more of the links when I come back to this!!!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This a great way yo get started in your port on what to read! You have so many different choices to read and review! I cant wait to get started in your port! Great way to have "The Best Of Your Port!!" I will be trying to go through the items and see what I can do with reviewing all these! I love how you have a wonderful image that has your space and your name. You definitely have a variety of different short stories and especially with your biggest project "WDC Power Reviewers!!! I am glad to be part of this group with all the reviewing!!!!


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow this is a great competition to be part of during Writing.com's 14 birthday party! I love that you have to review newbies in this because they do not get much attention unless they are in activities! I personally think that this should be around more than just on WDC birthday time!

Keep Writing!!!!!
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Review of Heart C-Note Shop  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Whome,

These are really sweet cnotes to give to others! I love the cnote shops because you can send a special note to cheer up other members to make them feel much better! I will have to come back and remember here so that I can send some cnotes!!! They are also priced well so that even newbies or members who dont have alot of gps!!!

Keep Writing!!!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
No Rest For The Weary (my baby killdeer)  (E)
Inspired by my yearly visiting friends, the killdeer.
#1133647 by ~WhoMe???~








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This is a great poem about a shore bird dearly to your hear!!! I love the imagery that you give this poem about these birds and how you see them from "January through July" . The poem describes how all the chicks are kept from being hurt by the cats in the yard. How you have seen them grow up to fly away and then there is next year! I hope you still see your birds every year! Nature is what keeps me inspired to write and hope to read more!!

Keep on Writing!!!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is really cool group that I would like to join if possible! I know that you help out alot through WDC and I would love to be a member! I like to be part of groups that has members participating to give out great reviews and its helps the writer with tips that they can go back and work on in their pieces!
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Review of Greed  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Punctuation/Spelling:

From what I could see as I was reading there were not any spelling or punctuation errors.

Grammar:


I couldnt see any grammar errors.

Plot:

The plot was unexpected that greed took over and the father took care of it all and they have learn to start over make their own money and learn to live on their own... I think the father had the best idea by building the rocket and having everything go into the rocket!

The problem:


I think that each character had their own problems in the story. Other than that there was no problems with the story.

Here are a few that I noticed was going on:

1. The oldest, Darrel, thought that he was going to be able to keep all houses, mansion, and yacht and the money with his girls to make a better life.

2. The younger brother, Robert, has learned that his bookies will be coming after him for the money he owes.

3. The mother, Betsy, has lost everything she had hidden from her husband, and put it on his rocket! She will have to learn to live in poverty pretty much now.

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I think the mansion was the best setting and then the rocket launch where the rocket took off too!

Characters:
1. Robert is the yougest son with gambling problem.

2. Betsy is the wife that was cheating and spending all the money.

3. Darrel is the oldest that ran the business and had homes, a mansion, and yacht with women too.

4. David knew 6 years ago he was going to die and built a rocket all these years and has everything in it with him to the moon!

General Comments:


All and all this was a great story to read and I enjoyed reviewing it too!!


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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Punctuation/Spelling: There is no punctuation or spelling errors!


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1. I think that is going to be a great thing for the next 30 days to get my muse going again along with my other two contests that I am working with too,

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Im am glad to be back on this blogging trip for 30 days! I cant to continue on with this group over the 30 days!!
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Review of Paper Flowers  
Rated: E | (4.5)








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Punctuation/Spelling: For puctuation and spelling there are no errors!


Grammar:
As for the grammar there are no errors on this. The flow is great as you read through this! You can see the paper flowers that will always hate the rain. Made me go and look at my vegiables that I am growing or atleast trying too!

Plot: As for the plot, it was a great way to describe your paper flowers with the wonderful picture you have and knowing if they ever get wet they will be ruined forever!~

The problem:There was no problems other than knowing they will be ruined in the rain!


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The flowers were in pretty vase!

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1.The flowers were the characters and were lovely as long as they do not get watered. They will bleed and no longer be there anymore!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello svufandom ,


I am reviewing:
 One way ticket to my heart  (E)
A poem for my mother
#1990988 by svufandom
on behalf of the groups I belong to such as "Angel In-Depth Reviews"  [13+], "The WDC Angel Army"  [ASR],"Under 12 Months Group A"  [E], and many more listed at the bottom of the review!


Now on to the review!

This a great poem to your mother!! I think that you did a great job with the imagery and description as you read through this! This is short and concise that paints a picture in your mind as you read through this. There is also great flow through the poem too! There is no misspelled words! I hope that you were able to show your mother the poem to her! Hope you have a great day!!!

Keep On Writing, Reading, designing, and Reviewing here on WDC!!! You Rock!!

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In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello kiyasama },


I am reviewing:
 
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WDC Army Angel Hall of Fame  (E)
Our Hall of Fame where all our angels' achievements are archived.
#1189941 by iKïyå§ama-House Targaryen
on behalf of the groups I belong to such as "Angel In-Depth Reviews"  [13+], "The WDC Angel Army"  [ASR],"Under 12 Months Group A"  [E], and many more listed at the bottom of the review!


Now on to the review!

This is cool to see who all were the Hall of Fame! I think that you have done a great job with The WDC Angel Army!!! I am glad to be part of the Hall of fame!! I just saw under my old second account. This is really great that you have done this for those to make the hall of fame! I have seen many of the angels that have been given plaques!! This is great that you have no misspelled words and the description is awesome!! Have a great day!



Keep On Writing, Reading, designing, and Reviewing here on WDC!!! You Rock!!

Here are a few other groups to check out that I belong to: "Open Door To Grace ♥"  [E], "RAOK Upgrade Brigade Group"  [E], "Invalid Item"  , "Invalid Item"  , "Heavenly Angels"  [E], and "Heavenly Roses"  [E]!


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Review of The Angel Army  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello kiyasama,


I am reviewing:
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The Angel Army  (ASR)
Our mission? To welcome and promote a positive community within WDC. Join us today!
#1188342 by iKïyå§ama-House Targaryen
on behalf of the groups I belong to such as "Angel In-Depth Reviews"  [13+], "The WDC Angel Army"  [ASR],"Under 12 Months Group A"  [E], and many more listed at the bottom of the review!


Now on to the review!


This is so beautiful! I love that you are always helping out WDC with your angel army! This has description of everything you need to know about the angel army! You have everything you need to know about the Angel Army! I cant wait to look at more in your port! I will come back and raid your port some more!!!Have a great day!



Keep On Writing, Reading, designing, and Reviewing here on WDC!!! You Rock!!

Here are a few other groups to check out that I belong to: "Open Door To Grace ♥"  [E], "RAOK Upgrade Brigade Group"  [E], "Invalid Item"  , "Invalid Item"  , "Heavenly Angels"  [E], and "Heavenly Roses"  [E]!


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Review of Noticing Newbies  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)


I am reviewing:
FORUM
Noticing Newbies  (13+)
A warm welcome to our newbies; come meet new and not-so-new members of Writing.Com!
#126963 by The StoryMistress
on behalf of the groups I belong to such as "Angel In-Depth Reviews"  [13+], "The WDC Angel Army"  [ASR],"Under 12 Months Group A"  [E], and many more listed at the bottom of the review!


Now on to the review!

This is a great group for showing newbies work! I will definitely be coming back and put in a few newbies too! I think that there are many newbies out that pieces of work are superb! Hope to read many newbies with my reviewing! Have a great day!!!

Keep On Writing, Reading, designing, and Reviewing here on WDC!!! You Rock!!

Here are a few other groups to check out that I belong to: "Open Door To Grace ♥"  [E], "RAOK Upgrade Brigade Group"  [E], "Invalid Item"  , "Invalid Item"  , "Heavenly Angels"  [E], and "Heavenly Roses"  [E]!


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Review of Weekly Goals  
In affiliation with Roots & Wings Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)


I am reviewing:
FORUM
Weekly Goals  (13+)
Motivate yourself to conquer your goals this week! Post on Monday; update us on Friday!
#1949474 by The StoryMistress
on behalf of the groups I belong to such as "Angel In-Depth Reviews"  [13+], "The WDC Angel Army"  [ASR],"Under 12 Months Group A"  [E], and many more listed at the bottom of the review!


Now on to the review!


This is an awesome idea so that everyone gets better at their goals done. I think that I am going to do this weekly to make sure I get my poetry or stories and reviewing done! I hope that all the other members choose to do this too! Hope you have a great day!

Keep On Writing, Reading, designing, and Reviewing here on WDC!!! You Rock!!

Here are a few other groups to check out that I belong to: "Open Door To Grace ♥"  [E], "RAOK Upgrade Brigade Group"  [E], "Invalid Item"  , "Invalid Item"  , "Heavenly Angels"  [E], and "Heavenly Roses"  [E]!


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Review of Number Ten  
In affiliation with Roots & Wings Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Lynda Miller ,


I am reviewing:
 Number Ten  (E)
Chickens, hungry Rooster
#1967567 by Lynda Miller
on behalf of the groups I belong to such as "Angel In-Depth Reviews"  [13+], "The WDC Angel Army"  [ASR],"Under 12 Months Group A"  [E], and many more listed at the bottom of the review!


Now on to the review!

This was a cute little poem a about the chickens and Your character being the hungry rooster!! This has so much description and imagery as you read this! It paints a picture vividly in my mind! There is no misspelled words and Have a great day!

Keep On Writing, Reading, designing, and Reviewing here on WDC!!! You Rock!!

Here are a few other groups to check out that I belong to: "Open Door To Grace ♥"  [E], "RAOK Upgrade Brigade Group"  [E], "Invalid Item"  , "Invalid Item"  , "Heavenly Angels"  [E], and "Heavenly Roses"  [E]!


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Review of Exasper  
In affiliation with Roots & Wings Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Dan Sturn ,


I am reviewing:
 Exasper  (E)
Sometimes we let our assumptions ruin our own moments.
#1464435 by Dan Sturn
on behalf of the groups I belong to such as "Angel In-Depth Reviews"  [13+], "The WDC Angel Army"  [ASR],"Under 12 Months Group A"  [E], and many more listed at the bottom of the review!


Now on to the review!
I really like this poem! You have done a great job with the imagery and as it paints a picture in my head!! I love that you have great description as you read through this! I like that it was a easy read with a flow throughout the poem! You have no spelling errors! Have a great day!!




Keep On Writing, Reading, designing, and Reviewing here on WDC!!! You Rock!!

Here are a few other groups to check out that I belong to: "Open Door To Grace ♥"  [E], "RAOK Upgrade Brigade Group"  [E], "Invalid Item"  , "Invalid Item"  , "Heavenly Angels"  [E], and "Heavenly Roses"  [E]!


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