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Review by Lucinda Lynx
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is very well written. The reader doesn't need to guess. The guilt and grief mix together in this story.
You can write! Keep up the great work!


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Review by Lucinda Lynx
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is very well written article. It's easy to read. The person reading doesn't need to guess what the writer means. Keep up the great work!


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Review of Words Can Hurt  
Review by Lucinda Lynx
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
You can write. Emily's in desperate situation and she decides to do the desperate, final thing. The reader is able to sense her anxiety. Keep up the great writing!


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Review by Lucinda Lynx
Rated: E | (4.0)
These instructions are very easy to read and understand.
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Review of Poetry  
for entry "Lost Battle" 
Review by Lucinda Lynx
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Sadness,anxiety, giving up. All those feelings I am able to read from this text. Those feelings have become familiar to myself too. You wrote them very well. Life is not always sugar and spice and everything nice. Sometimes it's very dark.
Keep up the great work!


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Review by Lucinda Lynx
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is easy to read and understand. Language is clear. The reader doesn't need to guess what she should do in case she wants to send them something she'd want them to publish.
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Review by Lucinda Lynx
Rated: E | (4.0)
This poem was easy to read and understand. The picture it creates is clear. You're very talented writer.


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Review of Game Models  
Review by Lucinda Lynx
Rated: E | (4.0)
Very interesting! First I thought this would be fiction. It still may be that. Then I thought it's a story from your school years. A story based on true events.
The length is OK. But one could think this could be a first chapter of something. I do not know what. The end of this piece made me think in such a way.
Whatever this is (true / fiction), it is easy to read. You can write! Keep up e good work!


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Review of Vertie's Platform  
Review by Lucinda Lynx
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
You can write! Interesting piece, but clear enough to understand the story. You let the reader guess to the end about if they survive or not. You have a talent. Keep up the great work!


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Review of The Sweetest Love  
Review by Lucinda Lynx
Rated: E | (4.0)
You have talent. This poem tells, how much your girlfriend means to you.I've no doubt she'd be happy if she read this.Keep up the great work!


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Review by Lucinda Lynx
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is very strong text! The cat's POV is very clear. You can write! Keep up the great work!


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Review of Fued: Chapter 1  
Review by Lucinda Lynx
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Those two girls were not very nice. I'd keep them as some sort of bullies. It wasn't fair they did what they did.
But you sure can write! This pulls the reader like a magnet.


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Review of Review image  
Review by Lucinda Lynx
Rated: E | (4.0)
That one is beautiful! I love cats!
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Review by Lucinda Lynx
Rated: E | (4.0)
You can write! The image is very strong. Keep up the great work!
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Review by Lucinda Lynx
Rated: E | (4.0)
This poem made me misty - eyed! This is very emotional, but very well written at the same time.
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Review of Doubts  
Review by Lucinda Lynx
Rated: E | (4.0)
We all have doubts. At least I have. You describe them very well.
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Review of Day 36  
Review by Lucinda Lynx
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This is interesting. You can write!
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Review of Writing.Com 101  
Review by Lucinda Lynx
Rated: E | (4.0)
Very clear and easy to read.
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Review by Lucinda Lynx
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi!
This sounds interesting. The rules are clear and easy to follow. I also appreciate you show a concrete example of that b - item, because I don't use it very much.
Thank you!
Best,
Lucinda
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Review of Move Along Please  
Review by Lucinda Lynx
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
A clever solution indeed.
You can write very well. I liked this and understand the situation, at least somehow.
Keep writing!
Best,
Lucinda
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Review of Annie At The Zoo  
Review by Lucinda Lynx
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
You know how to end in dramatic way! I had to read the whole story. I never saw that end coming. Never! You can surprise your readers, oh yes you can.
Keep up the great work!
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Review by Lucinda Lynx
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I remember that terrible event that happened all those years ago. I could easily imagine someone, who has been through that horrible event, writing something like this. I am sorry for everyone who had to face it. I can't even imagine how it must've felt.
You can write very well. Keep it up!
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Review of Writing.Com 101  
for entry "Item Statistics" 
Review by Lucinda Lynx
Rated: E | (4.0)
Very clear writing! I admit the world of statistics is a bit Greek to me, but well, maybe one learns, be it slowly.
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Review of Writing.Com 101  
for entry "Passkeys" 
Review by Lucinda Lynx
Rated: E | (4.0)
Very useful information! Very clearly written! I like the style you use to express things.
Thank you from the bottom of my heart!
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Review of Calling  
Review by Lucinda Lynx
Rated: E | (4.0)
Very easy to understand and very touching too.
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