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Very well written. I like your style. Those samples written in I - form, like that space traveler's case, they pull me. They are easy to understand.
Keep up the good work!
Touching and straight text. I liked it. You can describe the feeling very well, so that reader feels it too. Thank you for writing this! Keep up the good work.
I am sort of relieved. I was sure your MC would join his friends and get into some sort of trouble. But it was his sister, who made him see the error of his ways. Well written! I like it.
This could be straight from my life! Honestly, it could be. You sure can write. And if this is a song (that is what it resembles), you should let someone make a music for it.
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