I really liked the plot of the story and it was very well written. I like how deep it is. I gave you above average because it was very deep and it made me think. The reason I didn't give you a higher rating is because it was lacking a little bit. It was slightly confusing, maybe it was just me. I want to encourage you to Write On. You are an awesome writer and i did like the story but I think you can do better.
wow you did an awesome job. I absolutely love it. It was full of surprise. I always know what is going to happen in a story and you threw me for a bigggggg loop. When I thought it was the teacher it turned out to be the kid. When I thought it was a vampire it turned out to be a werewolf. I just loved it. Keep on writing.
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