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Review by melanchoLyle
Rated: E | (3.0)
Hi Sayaah17

Thank you for sharing this piece, i can tell you from recent experience that it gets better and easier. Loosing someone that you love so much can be one of the worst feelings especially if you have given so much to them (emotionally that is).

If this piece about you, keep you head up, stay focused and remember pain never lasts forever.

Thanks again


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Review of TEENAGE SUICIDE  
Review by melanchoLyle
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Joy

Thank you so much for posting this article, you have no idea how much this will help someone. For someone that has been suffering from depression, if only so many people had done this for me, I think it would've turned out so much different. People tend to scare away from people suffering from depression because they dont know what to do or how to handle the situation. Most times I found that the people trying to help you are more scared than you actually are.

In today's world, like you said, majority depression sufferers are teenagers and if more people could read this article, they could end up saving so much kids. And you the person suffering from depression needs is for someone to listen without judgment. We need to create more awareness regarding depression as this is one of the deadliest killers today. I particularly like the part where you stated what could cause depression, some people cant understand how you can fall into depression after a relationship has ended or failing a test.

I can truly relate to everything you posted and for me, i took it upon myself to seek help, see a psychologist, take my anti depressants and try and speak to more people. I have also found that the more you speak openly about depression, the less power it will have over you (from my point of view at least). Thank you so much for this.


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Review of Top to Bottom  
Review by melanchoLyle
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi unforgiven,

I cant tell you what it is about your short story but I was hooked from the title. I think it could be that for a long time I found myself living the fantasy that I did not notice the dangers around me. No matter what it is, I enjoyed reading it and I could relate to most of what you had written about.

Thank you so much for sharing this short story and I look forward to reading more of your work.
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Review by melanchoLyle
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Tiauna

Your poem cuts deep and I am familiar with so much that you have written. I hope and I pray that you overcome this because its the worst thing to go through especially when you feel alone. Thank you for sharing this, your pain and your struggle in words.

Should you need to talk, i am just an email away and I will try and assist to the best of my ability.

keep strong, keep writing and keep fighting!!!!
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Review of Love & Hate  
Review by melanchoLyle
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi blueflowers,

I never thought of it that way "then I’m also hating another part of myself" however with that said, its not so much hating myself but hating that I allowed myself to give in to someone fully for it to be thrown back in my face (in my opinion). Im glad I read this, made me see things differently though.
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Review of Sxve yOURself  
Review by melanchoLyle
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Xnwxr

I must admit that this poem is possibly one of the best i have read when it comes to depression. Having gone and still going through depression, this poem is really deep and i love it. well done on writing it and i hope that should this poem be about you, that you find the answers, the love and the strength that you need to overcome.
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