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Review by melanchoLyle
Rated: E | (3.0)
Hi Sayaah17

Thank you for sharing this piece, i can tell you from recent experience that it gets better and easier. Loosing someone that you love so much can be one of the worst feelings especially if you have given so much to them (emotionally that is).

If this piece about you, keep you head up, stay focused and remember pain never lasts forever.

Thanks again


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Review by melanchoLyle
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi unforgiven,

I cant tell you what it is about your short story but I was hooked from the title. I think it could be that for a long time I found myself living the fantasy that I did not notice the dangers around me. No matter what it is, I enjoyed reading it and I could relate to most of what you had written about.

Thank you so much for sharing this short story and I look forward to reading more of your work.
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Review by melanchoLyle
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Tiauna

Your poem cuts deep and I am familiar with so much that you have written. I hope and I pray that you overcome this because its the worst thing to go through especially when you feel alone. Thank you for sharing this, your pain and your struggle in words.

Should you need to talk, i am just an email away and I will try and assist to the best of my ability.

keep strong, keep writing and keep fighting!!!!
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Review of Sxve yOURself  
Review by melanchoLyle
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Xnwxr

I must admit that this poem is possibly one of the best i have read when it comes to depression. Having gone and still going through depression, this poem is really deep and i love it. well done on writing it and i hope that should this poem be about you, that you find the answers, the love and the strength that you need to overcome.
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