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Review by Maci
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Rated: E | (5.0)
What a unique way to look at life and at the same time so very true. I never thought of it like this before but after reading it I feel a little foolish for never making the connection. I also am not good at ping pong. But your ending summed it all up wonderfully...
"I’m not too good at Ping Pong,
But I can take a deep breath and feel very fortunate
To have played.
Because one must breathe and feel lucky sometimes!" Thanks for sharing this! Maci

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Review of Icing on the Cake  
Review by Maci
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Wow I bet you don't tick off too many people lol. I like how you disappointment and anger rushed off the page at me. I had to check to see if I didn't have Icing on my face. Well done! I did not see any mistakes. I enjoyed it very much. Thank you for sharing. Maci

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Review of You are stuck.  
Review by Maci
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Rated: E | (5.0)
How intense. I am sure a lot of people have felt this way. My how you nailed it. Very well written. I did not see any mistakes. I could feel the pain of the struggle. Making my heartbeat quicken. I hope things finally turn around for this person. Thank you for sharing. Maci

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Review of Irises  
Review by Maci
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is so precious! I went from cold chills to tears. I felt the lose of the child of eight. The flow of this poem was smooth. It is very well written and I saw no mistakes.
My favorite part was ..."Like peering through a broken glass, I can see fragments of my youth. Kaleidoscopic visions pass before my eyes. Are they the truth?" The whole thing left me speechless! Thank you for sharing. Maci


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Review by Maci
Rated: E | (5.0)
Now those were the days! LOL I enjoyed the flow of this piece. I wish we still had some of those things. Like leaving doors unlocked. Everybody helped everyone else. Yeah, those were the days. I did not see any mistakes. Wel Done! I truly enjoyed this very much. I could almost hear jail house rock. lol Thank you so much for sharing this. Maci

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Review by Maci
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Rated: E | (5.0)
What a beautiful reminder to find rest in HIM! I love the flow of this piece. It's message is clear and wonderfully expressed. I loved it all but my most favorite line...
"For peace past understanding, Turn over your care to Him, Be, to His wonder, a witness, His glorious presence behold." I wish I could give this 10 stars. Well done! Maci

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Review of Jingle Smells  
Review by Maci
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
What a treat! I read this twice. The second time I sang it and giggled. As I write this I am humming it. I, who have been behind a horse in a buggy, I understand too well the whole story outlined here. Very well written. Thank you so much for sharing this. I totally enjoyed! Maci


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Review by Maci
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this carefree piece. It is lighthearted and fun flowing poem. A bit of sunshine in my day. "Let's make life worthwhile." A very fitting finish to bring this poem full circle. It flowed well and I saw no mistakes. Well done! Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece. Maci

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Review by Maci
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Chis I agree with you whole heartedly! I wish we could hurry and find a cure! My mom has had both of her breast removed long ago. I am sorry to hear about your friend Earl. I think it is great that this little letter brings attention to the fact that breast cancer happens to men too! Thank you for sharing this important message. Maci

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Review by Maci
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Lesson learned.. never trust a talking fish. I enjoyed this short story. It had a great pace and I saw now mistakes. If I was Jimmy I would never go fishing again. I love to fish. But if a fish ever spoke to me I might just wet my pants. Very enjoyable story. Thank you for sharing this.


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Review of Mr. Maybe  
Review by Maci
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Lol This I can so relate! I love this piece. Even our Barbie's were in a dream world. How many Ken's are out there that have the looks plus a great personality Too! NOT!
Where is that Mr Maybe? I hope you found one. I enjoyed the way this piece flowed and I saw no mistakes. Thanks for sharing this. Maci

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Review by Maci
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well with this piece you chose all the right words. It flowed like a smooth river. I saw no mistakes. My favorite line was..." A thousand stars in the sky encourage a poet to write" Many times I have been "stuck" and the night sky has stirred something inside me. Thank you for sharing this. Well done! Maci

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Review of Happy Face Song  
Review by Maci
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This piece made me SMILE!!! I love it! just throw everything else out the window and smile regardless this works for me. I hope there isn't people out there that really have to "practice smiling". I like the way this reads. I didn't see any mistakes. Thanks you so much for sharing this upbeat happy poem. Well Done! Maci

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Review of Roses in Heaven  
Review by Maci
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Rated: E | (5.0)
What a beautiful, beautiful poem. Well done tribute to your mother. It gave me cold chills when I read it. Thank you Lord for I am sure He heard your poem and gave your mother (maybe 2 dozen) roses. Because God like to give us "Double for our trouble" and held her extra long. For you-- from you! Thank you so much for sharing this.
God bless you and your Mother! I wish I could give this 10 stars Maci

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Review of On The Lam  
Review by Maci
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Who knew that getting older would make us feel this way? I love the way you wrote this. It is a clever way to side the age in there, just like birthday's sneak up on us. I really enjoyed this fun flowing poem. As we get higher,.. the lower we get is a graceful way to sum it all up! Well done! Maci


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Review of Meant to be  
Review by Maci
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Rated: E | (4.5)
How sweet and patient! I will give you that. This is a lovely piece. It's flow was great.
It made the reader cheer when you finally got that long awaited chance. I did not see any mistakes. Though it had only been a few months into the relationship, I was left to wonder if you are still together? I sure hope so, that is if this is a real life matter. lol Thanks for sharing this. I really enjoyed it. Maci

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Review of Heart Break  
Review by Maci
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I love the play with numbers here. Very well done. The poem flowed easy. I could feel the disappointment and the pain. That's a whole lot of chances someone was given. I can say without doubt that I would never give someone that much control. I hope your heart healed! Thanks for sharing this. Maci

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Review by Maci
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is so cool! Wow the way you express this whole journey is like a painted path. The reader sees and feels you every inch. That first step was and always is so difficult. Well don! I enjoyed every step. I think everyone will enjoy this as well. It flowed well and I didn't see any mistakes. Thank you so much for sharing.
Maci

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Review of Reflection  
Review by Maci
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a wonderful heartfelt piece. I think there are many, I for one, who can identify with everything you have written here. I see your beauty in your writing. I love the way this poem flowed. I really enjoyed this as you can see. I thank you for sharing. I hope he does see the beauty that I can see from here. Have a great evening! Maci

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Review by Maci
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Neva, This is a beautiful poem. It gives hope to anyone who is in a dark place or having just a depressed day. Reading it was like opening a little gift. And the finally thought. the last verse, A big fat bow! I really enjoyed this poem. I saw no mistakes. Thank you for sharing this and making my day brighter! Maci



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Review of wasted beauty  
Review by Maci
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Rated: 13+ | (1.0)
wow what gore. I got tickled when I read... "Brains, my only thought." Then I gagged with the next part. "Munching and crunching like leaves oozing in my mouth" What a wonderful goory mess. I saw the note attending this poem. I would give this a 5 star But it gets a 1/2 from me. Maci



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Review by Maci
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow what a powerful poem. uniquely showing the thoughts of someone who is dying. How very
touching. I found it very emotional. The name this poem is perfect! It is very well written and I didn't see any mistakes. The last verse brought me to tears. Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem. Maci



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Review by Maci
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Rated: E | (4.5)
How sad. I hope all that has changed. I bet she has many friends. Starting school is a hard time. their world is turned upside down and they don't understand why. Playgrounds are just as hard to.everybody has their little comfort circles. I hope she has her own big circle by now. I remember thinking the same thing when my son started school. The piece is well written and I saw no mistakes. Thank you for sharing. Maci



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Review by Maci
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow very Powerful! I felt you pain. I, like others was surprised to find, midway that you were talking about your mother. What pain that must cause to have so many unanswered questions. I do believe that the last line sums it all up beautifully and tragically You both lose! I hope she has come around before I get this review written! God bless you all! Maci



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Review of A Service to God  
Review by Maci
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
This is a truly heart felt piece. I could feel the emotions throughout. I think it flowed well. I saw no mistakes. I really enjoyed it. I understood the inner struggle that was present in this piece. I liked the flow of this poem. Thank you for sharing! Maci



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