I found the poem interesting and would like to share my opinions on it. Remember that this is my point of view, so take what you can use and lose what you can't.
First impression: This is about your lover and how he is trying to understand you, but you can't tell if he genuinely cares of feels for your cause, even if he's trying to be there for you constantly.
What I liked: Its an intriguing concept that you're trying to encapsulate and I applause you for making a story out of this. I never thought of a relationship in this way. Kudos to you!
Some things I think need to be changed:
The poem is unclear and cloudy. Maybe you are trying to get the reader to crack the code and make something out of it themselves, but that intent is not clear either. I noticed many errors and I'm not sure if they are intentional or meant to be a play on words. If it's the latter, then maybe you've done a great job and I'm too dense to figure out what 'I'm envious on my lover' instead of '....of my lover' means.
Depending on what your intention was, it is either a job done incredibly well or just a total mess. I'd recommend you proofread your poem once. If you find the time, please mail me and tell me what this poem really is about.
I apologize for being this harsh. Please don't take it too heart. I too am a budding writer and I learnt that while frank reviews can hurt, they help you grow faster than fake but nice reviews.