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Review of Talking Turkey  
Review by Xiea
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow, this sure gave me perspective. It was very well written and I could not spot and punctuation or grammatical errors, so Kudos to that!
Thank you so much for sharing this. I really appreciate it. Helped me feel safer at a difficult time. Keep inspiring and keep writing!
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Review of My 21st Birthday  
Review by Xiea
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I loved this. Very impactful. It's this a real story? Anyways, very well written. Thanks for sharing and keep writing!!
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Review by Xiea
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Formal reply time!

Hey Violet Brenner
Quite an interesting story you wrote up there. Your grammar and punctuation seem impeccable too. I liked how you touched upon the concept of how death works. I suggest you reduce the word count and enter the 75 word contest with this. "The 75 Word Contest It has potential. Or you can increase the word count and make story out of it. Whichever works for you. *Wink*

Keep Writing!
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Review by Xiea
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Itchybarn!
Nice story! Haven't read anything like it in a long time.This reminded me of how timeless and fun games can be! I did notice how few places haven't been punctuated properly, but that wasn't much and can be overlooked. Is it safe to assume that you're a minecraft veteran, going by your creeper portfolio cover? *Laugh*
Anyhow, Keep writing! *Wink*
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Review by Xiea
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Way to familiar with the "Kowalski, analysis" meme! I'm sure this poll will help determine who is going to fart on the king, and I bet even the King can't wait. *Laugh*
I really don't get why you are so inclined upon making this a gay bestiary story, but you do you, buddy.
Just so you know, one can't vote twice. Once voted, nothing can be changed or devoted. And you can always upgrade your membership to increase the no. of items you store.
See you around and keep writing!
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Review of Derby County  
Review by Xiea
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hey SLITHER12!
Really enjoyed your puzzle! I am not much of a derby country fan, but it was still fun and I got really excited every time I saw a name I recognized. *Laugh* Anyways, nice job! I'll stop by your portfolio when I can! Happy spooky month! Keep Writing!
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Review of King Tut  
Review by Xiea
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Hi, ☮ The Grum Of Grums

This was really an amazing read. Very funny, and you don't need to worry, because I laughed too. I loved your perspective of how these things could have gone down. Who knows? (Apparently you do *Laugh*) But it looks like you didn't bother with punctuation much. Maybe next time on wards you can keep that in mind?

Keep Writing!
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Review of My universe  
Review by Xiea
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Bluebird!
I absolutely loved your poem! The starting two paragraphs makes the reader assume that just like anyone else, this writer has dreams, desires and imaginations too, and wishes such and such in a universe of hers, but the reader is completely caught off-guard when the in the 3rd paragraph as you carefully but firmly slip in the importance of taking control and send out the message that you're the only one who can make this universe your own, no matter where you are. I loved how you approached the topic. It was very unique and powerful and I absolutely loved it! You are a very talented writer! Good luck!*Bigsmile*


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
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Review by Xiea
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello, Dr M C Gupta! This is a very beautiful and meaningful poem about God and the true way one can serve him. I really enjoyed the first paragraph, where you talk about how fate and destiny cannot be carved. The way you put that was very unique and I haven't seen it before. Anyways, great poem! Keep writing!
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Review by Xiea
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hey jennw! This sounds great! Congratulations on this amazing opportunity! Good luck! My vote has been cast. *Bigsmile*When it's done, please send me a link to how your drawing turns out. I'd love to see it. *Hug1**hug**Hug2*

Keep drawing and keep writing! *Party*
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Review by Xiea
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hey there! I really enjoyed reading this article for it shows an interesting perspective. Incidents such as this one gives anti-vaxxers a fake power to emphasize their craziness upon others. The Idaho exemptions are truly disappointing. I liked how you stuck to a neutral perspective in the whole situation, as a journalist should do. *Wink* The way you subtly highlighted how anti-vaxxers became insensitive to the tragedy of the situation just to make their prove themselves to a point that Stephanie Blaine had to apologize for like that:“I’m sorry that our tragedy has offended so many people.” a a great reminder to how cruel humans can be just to be right. Thanks for sharing this!
Keep writing!


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Review by Xiea
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Rated: E | (3.0)
Hey there!
I found the poem interesting and would like to share my opinions on it. Remember that this is my point of view, so take what you can use and lose what you can't.

First impression: This is about your lover and how he is trying to understand you, but you can't tell if he genuinely cares of feels for your cause, even if he's trying to be there for you constantly.

What I liked: Its an intriguing concept that you're trying to encapsulate and I applause you for making a story out of this. I never thought of a relationship in this way. Kudos to you!

Some things I think need to be changed:
The poem is unclear and cloudy. Maybe you are trying to get the reader to crack the code and make something out of it themselves, but that intent is not clear either. I noticed many errors and I'm not sure if they are intentional or meant to be a play on words. If it's the latter, then maybe you've done a great job and I'm too dense to figure out what 'I'm envious on my lover' instead of '....of my lover' means.

Depending on what your intention was, it is either a job done incredibly well or just a total mess. I'd recommend you proofread your poem once. If you find the time, please mail me and tell me what this poem really is about.

I apologize for being this harsh. Please don't take it too heart. I too am a budding writer and I learnt that while frank reviews can hurt, they help you grow faster than fake but nice reviews.

Keep writing!




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Review of Starlit Sky  
Review by Xiea
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello! This was a very different poem from most others I have read on WdC. It speaks to the reader in many varying ways and shows them a poet's point of view of the beauty of nature and beyond. Wonderfully well written. It also explains to the reader the importance of penance of sorts and that the starry sky we see maybe our final destination. Great job! Keep going!
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Review of Maze  
Review by Xiea
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello!
'Maze' was a deep and well written prose that many lost souls can relate with. Being dumped is not easy and love seems too overrated at times like this. The jumble of thoughts is natural and beautiful laid out in your writing. I suggest you work on your punctuation, proofread before posting and space it out a little so that it won't look like a block of text.
Anyhow, I hope whoever was being spoken about found their way out of the maze. Great work! Keep going!
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Review by Xiea
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Rated: E | (5.0)
You're entire concept was very intriguing and extremely well portrayed. I must say, you are really creative. The story of the chipmunk and the Llama who weren't fated to be together but still loved each other... Very touching indeed. However, I couldn't help but notice that you have made numerous punctuation errors. That's alright, but you must really consider proofreading your items before posting. Punctuation is an important criteria writers must focus on.

You have the gift of creativity. Sharpen that sword with finesse. Keep going!
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Review of Dry Donuts  
Review by Xiea
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This was an interesting prose, written almost like it wanted to be published. A cute and enjoyable story which is rather relatable. Great job. I'm glad you could overcome the truma. The grammar and punctuation were perfect. On the whole, great job! Keep going!
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Review of If You Do  
Review by Xiea
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Wow, this poem is incredibly courageous! It's really not easy to be this frank and lay out your raw emotions like this. You really are a very god writer.

Anywho...

It was nice to hear from you... I sent you some mails, I wasn't sure you got them, so I left a note in your notebook.... I'm sorry for not replying. I'm absolutely fine, thanks. I live in India... I don't know why, but for some reason I'm not able to send you mails. I'll leave this in your notebook, I guess...
Hope you have a great time with your daughter(s). ❤️
So I'm great, what about you? Guess you should set that alarm. 🤔😁 Seeya!
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Review by Xiea
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Gee, the plot twist! Who would have guessed? I really didn't see that coming. It's written with so much passion in the beginning that everyone straits rooting for this cute couple and then.... Bam! Great job buddy! Well written with perfect grammar and punctuation. Keep going!
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Review of Hole in the Rock  
Review by Xiea
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow! This is really skilled photography... Being a bit of a photographer myself, I do have a little idea about this stuff. did you take it yourself? I liked your angle quiet a bit. the shadow and the light are just right, with the hole right in the middle. Great work, keep going!
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Review of Kale  
Review by Xiea
Rated: E | (5.0)
You're hilarious! Keep plastering smiles on readers' faces but please remember not to tell them about the kale... That's not very nice.
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Review of Drowning  
Review by Xiea
Rated: E | (5.0)
Damn, the punchline. Keep going, buddy! Loving your work! Gald I stumbled upon it!
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Review of Bleeding Heart  
Review by Xiea
Rated: E | (4.5)
Gosh, I loved this lil poem... Got me smiling real wide by the time I read the last line. Great work, bud! Keep going!
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Review by Xiea
Rated: E | (5.0)
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. No one ever touches upon the emotions and feelings of sportspersons and athletes in such detail. Hats off to you for doing such a great job on writing so well upon such a topic. The way the elements that the spectators fail to see such as hardwork and determination have been put forth is very interesting. Your grammar and punctuation was impeccable.

Keep going!
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Review of Fire is Me  
Review by Xiea
Rated: E | (5.0)
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. No one ever touches upon the pain and misery animals face due to human greed. Hats off to you for doing such a great job on writing so well upon such a topic. The personification of the dragon was very well done. An untold love story of Loch Ness. Your grammar and punctuation was impeccable. The significance of the line "When I'm emotional, the fire is me" is an interesting double metaphor because firstly, the dragon breathes fire when emotional, and also, man, when emotional, is angry, hence the fire. Great job!

Keep going!
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Review of Same Old Grind  
Review by Xiea
Rated: E | (5.0)
This little poem reminds us of the never ending and depressing cycle of life, but at the same time, 'the glimmer of first light' gives us hope and reminds us that every day brings something new and takes away the pain. An intriguing metaphor conveyed in the short brevity of 24 syllabus! Bravo!

Keep going!
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