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Review of Dear Mum  
Review by Maiya
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Niase,

This is a heartbreaking letter,

I can read the longing the writer has and the wish to know the mother in the letter.

As are mother I am terrified of something happening to me and leaving my girls alone in the world.

So the line,

"I wish you were here to shield me from all that is evil and harmful like you always did."

broke my heart.

Thank you for sharing this.

Maiya
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Review of MY LITTLE BROTHER  
Review by Maiya
Rated: E | (4.0)
very sweet
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