Truly for kids, truly for children and the children in us. When I was just a little child, I would hide inside my blanket but still could listen to this little monster which is just inside me. My childhood days are back.
Thanks to this very informative and intelligent definition. In our culture here in the Philippines, we are very fond of procrastination. We also call this "the manana habit". I think we inherited this from the Spaniards, our colonizers for about four hundred years. Whew! Whoever will not get influenced with this long span of time? We Filipinos are also fond of deadlines.
Your car is just like my convertible. Well, let me explain. It's not a car, but some sort of a converted motorbike to a three-wheeled, because I have no balance (I'm a paraplegic). So I ride in this "convertible" in the morning and in the afternoon, but it also smokes, meaning it has to go, but it can't. I don't know. Something wrong with it, or with my pocket. I enjoyed this short piece.
I like to hear the music and the rhythm, along the plot of the story in the poem. I'm less of a poet, but I just find this beautiful to hear because also of my background (I'm a former soldier). Congrats to this good poem.
A good narration of the events, a very fine description! What could be the role of the mysterious writer to Karen's life? Hope there's some continuation in here. Thanks!
Original, and dramatic. You made me think what it was about, a story of a rabbit. But then it's about fantasy, and a short story should. Thanks for this, it's a thought provoking story that touched my heart. I don't see any discrepancies, or grammatical errors. It's fine reading.
God inspires us to write, to sings hymns, to reflect and pray every moment of our life. This very inspiring. HE is the source of life, our everyday inspiration that we have to focus on. Thanks for sharing.
Life's lessons, a tragic but nice story. Always, there are lesson in life. For the good, that would be our choice if we don't want it. This story serves its purpose - a lesson in life. I've heard numerous stories of AAs and addicts. This one is short with a message, and for the record. Thanks for sharing.
There are a lot of stories about the mirror. This one is artistically relayed. Here in the Philippines, stories of the unknown abound. Witches here still "thrive", especially in the provinces. Superstitions, stories of the mirror, are also prevalent.
This must be everyone's favorite. The contents give justice to the ratings. The first time I've seen such a port. I don't know how to make this. Or, maybe I'm not qualified because my membership is just an upgrade. How do you make this? Hope you can enlighten me. Thanks very much.
The style is perfect. The topic is normal and interesting. The form urges me to copy it because it's very original. I envy the writer who possesses an original form of writing. I like this. No regrets for reading this. Congratulations!
It's an ordinary story with an ordinary ending, but touches the heart. Christmas always brings us to our childhood days - snowman, angels, gifts, stories of sad children finally having a happy Christmas. With the Christmas a few steps away, I remember the days I was a child with my parents. I received gifts during Christmas, but very simple gifts just enough to content a small poor child like me, but I would get very excited because it was my parents who gave me these simple cheap gifts. And they became very precious to me. They are long gone now but they are very much associated with Christmas. They are my Christmas angels.
Thanks for reminding me my story.
Where trumpets wain
And bullets rain
Tools with persons fools
They all mix and die in vain.
God must erase hatred and war. The uniqueness of His creation - man - has turned everything to crumble.
I am one of the victims of war, although at first, I thought I was the vector. I had hatred, vengeance, pride, foolishness, all in inside, turning the inside of me into a battle arena.
Healing must take its course, with God, the Holy Spirit. War is the worst happening man has ever created.
It's so refreshing to hear from the mind of an alien - how the alien thinks and speaks, hope you like the earth. You can make this longer, or a part of a sci-fi novel. Good writing, but you can make it a little longer. Congrats!
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