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Review by Dragonbane
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Hi

I've read the first chapter that's what reviewing it on. I'm not that good at reviewing that's why I don't do many. So I'm reviewing the story on content etc. not grammar or anything like that.

These are my thoughts it's well written. I liked best of all the first paragraph which I thought very descriptive and flowed well.

There is enough action going on to hold the reader's attention overall. The one thing I found a little of putting is it seemed to me that you go into a very narrative detached mode I realise this is mostly a style of writing so don't to much pay to much attention to me here. In any case its a good read and try to the chapters later

Dragonbane
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Review of The Fall  
Review by Dragonbane
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I liked this story its well written and the dialogue is good I'm intrigued by this mysterious woman it gives the right hook to want read more

Well done

Dragonbane
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Review of Preview  
Review by Dragonbane
Rated: ASR | (3.5)
I like this a good solid start very promised and well written and descriptive keep it up

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